Mere bare me.........(Ghayel)

by sajid_ghayel on November 01, 2008, 09:30:30 AM
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Mere bare me tune jo suni un baton pe na ja
Logh to yuhi mujse pyaar karte hain
Jin rasto pe milte hain Badnam shehar ke
Raat hote hi hum un rasto pe chalte hain

Bada masoom chehra hain unke chehre pe na ja
Is chehre pe ek tum nahi kaiee deewane marte hain
Qatl karte hain aur ba izzat ho jate hain bari
Itni masumiyat se woh munsif se baat karte hain

Ghayel ne jo likhi un ghazlo pe na ja
Jhoot badi khoobsurti se shayer bayaan karte hain
Muskurate hain dil dukhate hain karte hain har sitam
Aur gam-e-ulfat ka mara bana kar khud ko pesh karte hain

                                  -sajid ghayel-


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«Reply #1 on: November 01, 2008, 09:35:18 AM »
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Mere bare me tune jo suni un baton pe na ja
Logh to yuhi mujse pyaar karte hain
Jin rasto pe milte hain Badnam shehar ke
Raat hote hi hum un rasto pe chalte hain

Bada masoom chehra hain unke chehre pe na ja
Is chehre pe ek tum nahi kaiee deewane marte hain
Qatl karte hain aur ba izzat ho jate hain bari
Itni masumiyat se woh munsif se baat karte hain

Ghayel ne jo likhi un ghazlo pe na ja
Jhoot badi khoobsurti se shayer bayaan karte hain
Muskurate hain dil dukhate hain karte hain har sitam
Aur gam-e-ulfat ka mara bana kar khud ko pesh karte hain

                                  -sajid ghayel-




 Applause Applause

Bohat khoob Sajid ji...
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k.shael
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«Reply #2 on: November 01, 2008, 10:43:57 AM »
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BAHUT AACHA LIKHA HAI SAJID JI,

PAR LAST STANZA AAPNE KISI PAR
COMMENT DIYA HAI AISA LAGTA HAI,

BY. K.SHAEL
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #3 on: November 01, 2008, 10:55:05 AM »
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Ati sundar Ghayel Ji
Bus likhte rahiye
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sajid_ghayel
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«Reply #4 on: November 01, 2008, 01:18:34 PM »
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BAHUT AACHA LIKHA HAI SAJID JI,

PAR LAST STANZA AAPNE KISI PAR
COMMENT DIYA HAI AISA LAGTA HAI,

BY. K.SHAEL
kabir khada bazaar me mange sabki khair
na hi kehu se dosti na kehu se bair

                         sant kabeer
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syednaami
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«Reply #5 on: November 01, 2008, 01:52:31 PM »
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Sajid miyan
Good work, bahut bahtari hai. Keep writing.
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peera4u
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«Reply #6 on: November 01, 2008, 03:26:48 PM »
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Baat ko gazal banana koi inse seekho
Dard ko hans ke gaana koi inse seekho
Rang bhi hotebai hai aur khusbu bhi to hoti hai 
lafz ke phool khilana koi inse seekho

 Applause    Applause   nice work sajid.....
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abdbundeli
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«Reply #7 on: November 01, 2008, 04:23:59 PM »
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sajid_ghayel ji!
Khaasee saafgoyi jhalak rahee hai aapki kavitaa sey!Durust hai: dimaag ko sochaney ki taraf dhhakeyltee hai!
                        - abd bundeli
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Prateek Mardia
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«Reply #8 on: November 01, 2008, 07:43:51 PM »
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saajid ji,

Bahut hi acchi rachna hai aapki.sacchai saarvjanik karti hai aapki yeh kavita. badhai.
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«Reply #9 on: November 02, 2008, 07:34:32 AM »
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bohat bohat shukriya dosto yeh sab aap logho ki sangat ka asar hain jo mere kalam tareef ke kabil bane
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