mila hai mujhko dard yahan pe,humesha hi is bedard zamane se

by jasleen on March 19, 2005, 12:28:55 PM
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hi friends. new to the site. well my first post for all of u. hope u enjoy reading it.

mila hai mujhko dard yahan pe,humesha hi iss bedard zamane se
mein to na jane kaise zinda hoon,aur na jane kis bahane se!

aapne dil par karte they bharosa aur bahut tha naaz humein
aaj sab kuch koya hai humnein,bas issi dil ko lagane se!

dil ke kisi bhi hisse ko,chune se tees si uthati hai
itne zakhm mil gaye hai humko,ek aap ko aapna banane se!

humnein khud hi unse pyaar kiya, khud hi dil ko lagaya tha
ye humari hi galti hai yaaron,gila kya karein hum is zamane se!

humnein to socha tha eh dost,ki haale - dil aapko sunayege
kyoki suna tha ki dard kam hota hai yahan kisi ko batane se!

gairon ki chalo baat hi kya,aapne bhi aaj humse dur hue
bas ye hi to sila mila hai humko,aap se nazrein milane se!

paa na sake hum kabhi bhi khushiyan aur jee na sake kabhi chain se
"JAS" ko milega aaram bas ab khud ko hi ab mittane se!

{jasleen}
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mnajmi
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«Reply #1 on: March 19, 2005, 02:46:12 PM »
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mashallah bahut khoob
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jasleen
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«Reply #2 on: March 20, 2005, 04:09:28 AM »
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Quote from: "mnajmi"
mashallah bahut khoob


mnajmi ji,
             thx so much for motivitating my spirits. its my pleasure u liked my post. thx so much for replying me.

arz hai: yeh sher nahi hai, eh dost mere
mere dil ka afsana hai
"JAS" jitna bhi baagh le khushiyon ke peeche
na jane kyo isko gammon ko hi aapnana padta hai!
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MøÐëRñ ÐëvDå$
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«Reply #3 on: March 20, 2005, 04:50:03 AM »
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i dont have words how beautiful is this... good work Jasleen ji tongue3
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nishita
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«Reply #4 on: March 20, 2005, 05:48:43 AM »
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gud 2 c u here jasleen Usual Smile
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«Reply #5 on: March 27, 2005, 03:51:01 PM »
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hey..................jasssssss   excellenet...........good  starting.............  :lol:
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«Reply #6 on: April 10, 2005, 05:20:50 AM »
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Hi jas excelent  post ur heart feelings here,  here's my feelings

Jab kabhi bhi teri yaad mein mayus main ho jaaounga,
 
toh dekh lena aakar is mitti ki chadhar odh ke soh jaounga.


with love from

Prikshit.

IF ANY BODY WANTS PUNJABI POETRY HE OR SHE CAN ME MAIL ME ON

pintu_rai@rediffmail.com
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«Reply #7 on: April 10, 2005, 05:25:26 AM »
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Jas here some lines for u hope u will like it.

Jab kabhi bhi tumhe hamari yaad sataygi,
toh ankhe ansoouon ka sailab layengi,
phir jis taraf bhi tum dekhoge,
to tumhe KAFAN mein lipti hamari LAASH nazar ayegi.


with love

Prikshit
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«Reply #8 on: April 13, 2005, 09:53:48 AM »
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aapke sheron ne hamare purane zakhm taza kar diye,
lo aaj jasleen hum bhi tere saathi ban gaye Usual Smile

wadiya likheya, ida hi likhde ravo te sade dilan nu chunde ravo...
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nikki
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«Reply #9 on: April 13, 2005, 09:57:04 AM »
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tooooooooo good Jasleen..............nice start...............................carry on...............................
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HI
«Reply #10 on: April 13, 2005, 12:56:15 PM »
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ASHKO NE BEHNA BAND KAR DIYA HAI,
ALFAJO NE KEHNA BAND KAR DIYA HAI,
HAMAARE DIL PAR KI HAMAARE DILNE HAMAARE SAATH REHNA
BAND KAR DIYA



PRIKSHIT
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TAMANNA-e-mohabbat
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«Reply #11 on: May 10, 2008, 09:06:53 PM »
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very nice...
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