NA ROTI THI YEH PALKEY

by jasbirsingh on November 24, 2008, 06:45:48 PM
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KU HOTA HAI YEH PYAR
KU HOTI YEH DHADKANEY
JAB TAK NA MILEY THEY UNSEY
NA ROTI THI YEH PALKEY


GAMOH KA SILSILA SHURU HO GAYA HAI
DARD SEY RISHTA PAKKA HO GAYA HAI
JAB TAK NA MILEY THEY UNSEY
NA ROTI THI YEH PALKEY


TANHAYI KA MAUSAM CHA GAYA HAI
BAHAROH MEH BHI PATJHAR AA GAYA HAI
JAB TAK NA MILEY THEY UNSEY
NA ROTI THI YEH PALKEY



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«Reply #1 on: November 24, 2008, 07:54:03 PM »
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wah kaya baat hai jas ji... bahoot khoob!!!
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«Reply #2 on: November 25, 2008, 04:03:01 AM »
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"KU HOTI YEH DHADKANEY" yeh sirf palkey word se milane ki koshish thi ya iska kuch meaning bhi hain kuch samaj nahi aaya
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«Reply #3 on: November 25, 2008, 05:13:33 AM »
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Thanks Pooja

Sajid,

DHADKANEY TABHI SUNAYI DETI HAI JAB INMEH KOI HALCHAL HO RAHI HO
BINA PYAR KEY DHADKANEY KAHA SUNAYI DETI HAI


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«Reply #4 on: November 26, 2008, 08:44:52 AM »
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Bahot Achche Mere Naye Dost Jasbir,.
Yunhi Likhte Raho,.
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«Reply #5 on: November 26, 2008, 08:49:01 AM »
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Anjaan Thi Palkein Meri, Inhe Tune Behna Sikhaa Diya,.
Tere Dard Ne "Jaan" Mujhe, Shayari Kehna Sikhaa Diya,.

Kaun Kehta Hai, Mujhe Kuch Haasil Nahi Tujhse,.
Teri To Bewafaai Ne Mujhe, Markar Jeena Sikhaa Diya,.

Pehle Pyaas Thi Mujhe Mohabbat Ki, Jo Bujh Na Saki,.
Ab Pyaas Hi Na Rahi, Jab Tune Aansoon Peena Sikhaa Diya,.

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«Reply #6 on: November 26, 2008, 09:48:02 AM »
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tHANKS

JANASHEEN


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«Reply #7 on: November 26, 2008, 09:53:23 AM »
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Anjaan Thi Palkein Meri, Inhe Tune Behna Sikhaa Diya,.
Tere Dard Ne "Jaan" Mujhe, Shayari Kehna Sikhaa Diya,.

Kaun Kehta Hai, Mujhe Kuch Haasil Nahi Tujhse,.
Teri To Bewafaai Ne Mujhe, Markar Jeena Sikhaa Diya,.

Pehle Pyaas Thi Mujhe Mohabbat Ki, Jo Bujh Na Saki,.
Ab Pyaas Hi Na Rahi, Jab Tune Aansoon Peena Sikhaa Diya,.

________________________________-Jaanasheen-



VERY NICE JAHANASHEEN



JASBIR SINGH


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«Reply #8 on: November 26, 2008, 10:03:30 AM »
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wonderful creation jasbir ji  Applause

nice reply janasheen ji Applause
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«Reply #9 on: November 26, 2008, 10:06:55 AM »
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THANKS KAUSHIK



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«Reply #10 on: November 26, 2008, 12:57:55 PM »
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Shukriya Jasbir And Bhawna Ji,.
Aap Dono Kuch Likh Kar Jaate,.
Silsilaa Aage Bardhta,.
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«Reply #11 on: November 26, 2008, 01:07:22 PM »
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BAHUT KHOOB 'JASBIRSING'BAHUT ACHA LIKHA HAI AND "JAANASHEEN "  JI AAPNE BHI KHOOB REPLY DIYA HAI VERY NICE SO BEAUTIFULL

Kya kahe in ansoon ka
jab derd hota hai toh ansoon sath dete
jab ehsaas hota hai toh palko se girne lagte
jab pata chalta hai toh ankhen band ho jati
or dharkne shuru ho jati ,mousam badal jata
zindagi wahi rahe jati , khushiyan ghum me badal jati
mohabbat aake lout jati , chahat dekhti rahe jati
saise chalna band ho jati ....puri zindagi ansooyon me bahe jati.........or yaadein palkon mein ansoon bankar bahe jati........................
*************************************MUSKAN**********************
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«Reply #12 on: November 26, 2008, 04:50:28 PM »
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YADOH KOH PALKOH MEH BAHANA KAHA SIKHA THA
ISS JINDAGI MEH GUM KOH BHULANA KAHA SIKHA THA
MILI NA THI JAB TAK KEY NAZREY
BAGOH SEY KHUSHBOO CHURANA KAHA SIKHA THA


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«Reply #13 on: November 26, 2008, 04:51:49 PM »
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nice work Jaanasheen, Muskaan and Jas!!
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«Reply #14 on: November 26, 2008, 05:27:16 PM »
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THANKS POOJA


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