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Nashukra

kitni shiddat se hamne har ek kali ki khidmat ki
aur gulshan hame uska faqat nigraan kehta hai

har ek patte ki jaan me apni thodi thodi jaan daali thi
aur bhanwra is hayaat ko banana asaan kehta hai

darakhto ko kharoch na ho har shar ko ukhaad pheka
ye baag aaj hamko neeyat ka beimaan kehta hai

kaha ham jaaye isi gulshan ko apna jahaa banaya tha
hamara ashiyaan hi ab hame mehmaan kehta hai

har parastish se upar rakh k jiski parvarish ki thi
vo gul khilte hi hame ik mayus-o-muflis insaan kehta hai

lagai hai umr kitni aur kitni mohabbatein isme
meri kahaani zarre zarre se ata hua rehaan kehta hai


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Re: Nashukra..........Sps

«Reply #1 on: June 09, 2016, 08:56:06 AM »

Quote from: Sps on June 09, 2016, 08:20:21 AM

har parastish se upar rakh k jiski parvarish ki thi
vo gul khilte hi hame ik mayus-o-muflis insaan kehta hai

lagai hai umr kitni aur kitni mohabbatein isme
meri kahaani zarre zarre se ata hua rehaan kehta hai

achchcha kalaam hai


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Re: Nashukra..........Sps

«Reply #2 on: June 09, 2016, 07:15:03 PM »

Quote from: Sps on June 09, 2016, 08:20:21 AM

Nashukra

kitni shiddat se hamne har ek kali ki khidmat ki
aur gulshan hame uska faqat nigraan kehta hai

ji sahi farmayaa ehsaan faraamosho.n ki kami nahin duniya me.n !

har ek patte ki jaan me apni thodi thodi jaan daali thi
aur bhanwra is hayaat ko banana asaan kehta hai

haan sahi hai aaj insaa.n zara kuch paa liya to khuda hi samjh baith taa hai khud ko bahut achi baat ki hai aap ne iss sher ke hawaale se. ye azaad qism ka sher hai herr insaan is ke zariye se apna nazariya pesh kar saktaa hai !

darakhto ko kharoch na ho har shar ko ukhaad pheka
ye baag aaj hamko neeyat ka beimaan kehta hai

waah waah waah , tarbiyat karne waale ko hi badmaan kiyaa jataa hai aaj ke bache bhi kuch aisa hi hain parents ko bura samjhte hain !

kaha ham jaaye isi gulshan ko apna jahaa banaya tha
hamara ashiyaan hi ab hame mehmaan kehta hai

superb ji kyaa kahne ye baat dil ko bahut takleef pahuchaati hai aur aaj aisa ho rahaa hai allah raham kare !

har parastish se upar rakh k jiski parvarish ki thi
vo gul khilte hi hame ik mayus-o-muflis insaan kehta hai

bahut haseen aur maanikhez sher jo hum apne maan-baap ko samjhte hain allh ham sab ko sahi samjh de !

lagai hai umr kitni aur kitni mohabbatein isme
meri kahaani zarre zarre se ata hua rehaan kehta hai

kyaa baat hai ji ab kuch kahne ki zaroorat nahin bahut aalaa !

pahle to mubarkbaad ke saath rau iss behtreen kalaam per sps ji. main ne aap ko shaayad pahle baar padha hai aur main usi kalaam per comments karti hoo.n jo mujhe dil se bhhaa jaaye. agar comments me.n koi khataa ho to muaaf kare.n per main her uss kalaam pe comments karti hoo.n jo bahut pasand aaye main aksar mazahiya comments hi karti hoo.n per aap kaa kalaam bahut hi sanjeeda aur maanikhez hai ! aur haan mujhe hind aur hindi ke fonts me.n likha kalaam padhna nahin ataa hai yahaan ab zayaadaa tar loag hindi fonts me.n likhte hain to mere liye padhna namumkin hai !


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Re: Nashukra..........Sps

«Reply #3 on: June 09, 2016, 07:20:58 PM »

thank you adil ji...aapne ise saraa...achche kalaam likhne ki poori koshish kar rahi hu..seekh rahi hu!


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Re: Nashukra..........Sps

«Reply #4 on: June 09, 2016, 07:27:52 PM »

sheba ji bahot bahot shukriya...zarranawazi ...ap mujhe shayad bhool gai hain kyoki beech me 2-3 saal mai yo india se door rahi..par aap aur aapka comment karneka style mujhe tab bhi aur aaj bhi bahot bahot pasand hai..ye mere liye bahot bada reward hai ki aapne apne usi style me comment kia ...maine pehle khamosh ji...adil.ji..hriday ji aur aise bahot hi achche likhnewalo pe hi aapke comments padhe hain..so mer liye bahot hi khushi ki baat hai mera likha kalam aapko pasand aaya.
Aur ab se hindi aur english dono me likhungi..mai zyada hindi me hi likhti hu...fir se dil se ...thank you so sooo much!


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Re: Nashukra..........Sps

«Reply #5 on: June 09, 2016, 08:08:07 PM »

Bahot khooob bas waaaah hi waaah Applause


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Re: Nashukra..........Sps

«Reply #6 on: June 09, 2016, 08:24:12 PM »

Thank you so so much Rangila ji Usual Smile


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Re: Nashukra..........Sps

«Reply #7 on: June 11, 2016, 05:50:11 AM »

waah waah waah waah waah kyaa kehne ji, kyaa khoob likhaa hai aapne, mazaa aagayaa padh ke, bahut alag aur bahut hi masssttttt likhaa hai aapne.... sach mein humein bahut zyaadaa pasand aayi hai....!!!


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Re: Nashukra..........Sps

«Reply #8 on: June 11, 2016, 11:14:43 AM »

thank you so so so much Hriday ji...aapko ye bahot achchi lagi iski mujhe bahot bahot khushi hai...dekhiye Yoindia pe aane aur aap sab k kalaam padhne ka hi asar hai ye to aap sabko thank you Usual Smile