pagal larki

by anokhiladli on November 20, 2009, 05:05:33 AM
Pages: 1 [2]  All
ReplyPrint
Author  (Read 1355 times)
SURESH SANGWAN
Umda Shayar
*

Rau: 776
Offline Offline

Gender: Female
Waqt Bitaya:
27 days, 13 hours and 31 minutes.

I'm full of life !life is full of love

Posts: 8804
Member Since: Feb 2010


View Profile WWW
«Reply #15 on: April 05, 2010, 06:28:18 PM »
Reply with quote
bahut achhi hai ye pagal larki. icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
Logged
~Hriday~
Poetic Patrol
Mashhur Shayar
***

Rau: 114
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
101 days, 2 hours and 59 minutes.

kalam k chalne ko zamaana paagalpan samajhta hai.

Posts: 16238
Member Since: Feb 2010


View Profile WWW
«Reply #16 on: April 05, 2010, 06:35:10 PM »
Reply with quote
Bahut hi khoobsurat kavita likhi hai aapne Anokhiladli ji... bahut hi dard bhara hai isme... ek ek shabd se dard baras raha hai... adhuri mohabbat ki poori aur bahut pyaari tasveer pesh ki hai aapne.... hum to fida ho gaye aapke likhe pe... sach ... bahut khoob likha hai aapne ... too good... !!!  Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley

Aur ye lines chhu gayi dil ko...

"ab bhi uski baatein hongi,
ab bhi uski raatein hongi,
par ab ki baar
koi aur hi pagal ladki hogi..."
Logged
uzma(anokhiladli)
Guest
«Reply #17 on: April 06, 2010, 02:56:07 AM »
Reply with quote
Rajesh g,Rayaz g,Suresh g,and Klasker g,so nice of you all for liking my poem and encouraging me,this type of remarks always encourage someone to write more,remember me in your best wishes.
You all are doing very good job in this field,may God bless u with His Blessing
Logged
uzma(anokhiladli)
Guest
«Reply #18 on: April 06, 2010, 03:03:24 AM »
Reply with quote
Suresh G  ye pagal laki waqaee achi larki hay, icon_flower
Logged
madhuwesh
Umda Shayar
*

Rau: 1
Offline Offline

Gender: Female
Waqt Bitaya:
62 days, 22 hours and 36 minutes.

Don't think who you are ~ Just Respect your self.

Posts: 8109
Member Since: Feb 2009


View Profile
«Reply #19 on: April 06, 2010, 04:12:16 AM »
Reply with quote
Bahut khoob Uzma ji.ek alag soch ke saath bahut khoobsurti se aapne ye kavita likhi.great work. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
Logged
uzma(anokhiladli)
Guest
«Reply #20 on: April 06, 2010, 07:16:08 AM »
Reply with quote
Thanks mdhu g.ap ki hoslaafzai ka
,
kitni mohome  umeedon ko saja kay rakha hay
taq i dill main tairyi yadoon ka dea rakha hay

umer guzeri hay mager khud say juda ker na sakay
bholnay walay tairi yad main kuch to rakha  hay
Logged
vb
Khususi Shayar
*****

Rau: 29
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
16 days, 16 hours and 35 minutes.
Posts: 1241
Member Since: Apr 2010


View Profile
«Reply #21 on: May 17, 2010, 09:43:16 PM »
Reply with quote
buhat he achhi.. poem...
Logged
anokhiladli
Aghaaz ae Shayar
*

Rau: 1
Offline Offline

Waqt Bitaya:
2 days, 6 hours and 14 minutes.
Posts: 51
Member Since: Aug 2009


View Profile
«Reply #22 on: May 18, 2010, 07:00:59 AM »
Reply with quote
bhut shukria ap ka vb ji
Logged
Pages: 1 [2]  All
ReplyPrint
Jump to:  

+ Quick Reply
With a Quick-Reply you can use bulletin board code and smileys as you would in a normal post, but much more conveniently.


Get Yoindia Updates in Email.

Enter your email address:

Ask any question to expert on eTI community..
Welcome, Guest. Please login or register.
Did you miss your activation email?
February 25, 2020, 04:35:38 PM

Login with username, password and session length
Recent Replies
[February 25, 2020, 08:00:10 AM]

[February 25, 2020, 07:53:13 AM]

[February 25, 2020, 02:22:29 AM]

[February 24, 2020, 10:00:37 PM]

[February 24, 2020, 09:27:05 PM]

[February 24, 2020, 09:26:12 PM]

[February 24, 2020, 09:25:32 PM]

[February 24, 2020, 09:25:00 PM]

[February 24, 2020, 09:17:16 PM]

[February 24, 2020, 09:16:13 PM]
Yoindia Shayariadab Copyright © MGCyber Group All Rights Reserved
Terms of Use| Privacy Policy Powered by PHP MySQL SMF© Simple Machines LLC
Page created in 0.171 seconds with 24 queries.
[x] Join now community of 48462 Real Poets and poetry admirer