pagal larki

by anokhiladli on November 20, 2009, 05:05:33 AM
Pages: [1] 2  All
ReplyPrint
Author  (Read 1295 times)
anokhiladli
Aghaaz ae Shayar
*

Rau: 1
Offline Offline

Waqt Bitaya:
2 days, 6 hours and 14 minutes.
Posts: 51
Member Since: Aug 2009


View Profile
Reply with quote
HI freinds
i am here to share my nazam with u,hope u will like it,all best in words for all of U,

jub sham ghanairi hoti hay
to door ufaq k par
pagal c ik pagal larki
honton pay geet sajati hay
geet payar k hotay hain
geet wafa k hotay hain
yon lagta hay k jaisay
pagal c is larki ko
koi tanha ker k chor gaya hay
dil bhee us ka tor gaya hay
han aik rahee
jo perdais say aya tha
payar k tuhfay daita tha
batain kerta meher o wafa ki
laiken sub kuch sapna nikla
kuch bhee to na apna nikla
rahee chor gaya phir us ko

ab bhee us ki batain hon gee
ab bhee us ki ratain hon gee
laiken ab ki bar
koi or he pagal larki ho gee
jo bundhen us say bandh chuki ho ge
wo kaia janay
ik pagal c sada larki
aj bhee gili rait pay us kay
naqshay pa ko dhoond rahee hay
yay larki pagal larki hay
her roz he tanha ati hay
or ab tak rahin takti hay
kaia isay nahee maloom
k jo perdaisi ho jatain hain
wo phir wapis kub atay hain
wo phir wapis kub atay hain

uzma(anokhi ladli)
Logged
madhuwesh
Umda Shayar
*

Rau: 1
Offline Offline

Gender: Female
Waqt Bitaya:
62 days, 22 hours and 36 minutes.

Don't think who you are ~ Just Respect your self.

Posts: 8109
Member Since: Feb 2009


View Profile
«Reply #1 on: November 20, 2009, 09:49:31 AM »
Reply with quote
Wah bahut khoob Anokh ji,really touched,very beautiful creation.excellent. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
Logged
Rajesh Harish
Khaas Shayar
**

Rau: 1
Offline Offline

Waqt Bitaya:
38 days, 16 hours and 37 minutes.
Posts: 10584
Member Since: Aug 2008


View Profile
«Reply #2 on: November 20, 2009, 10:34:48 AM »
Reply with quote
Bahut khoob Umza Ji
Logged
Rishi Agarwal
Umda Shayar
*

Rau: 14
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
28 days, 5 hours and 40 minutes.

साहित्य सागर

Posts: 6756
Member Since: Jul 2009


View Profile
«Reply #3 on: November 20, 2009, 07:43:22 PM »
Reply with quote
Bahut Hi sundar Likha Hai Apne Excellent
Logged
anokhiladli
Aghaaz ae Shayar
*

Rau: 1
Offline Offline

Waqt Bitaya:
2 days, 6 hours and 14 minutes.
Posts: 51
Member Since: Aug 2009


View Profile
«Reply #4 on: November 21, 2009, 03:02:25 AM »
Reply with quote
Thanks madhu ji, Rajesh ji and Rishi ji for liking my poem,ap log isi thrahan himat dilatay rahay to naia likhnay walon ki hosla afzai hoti rahay gee,

       main mango us kay sukh he sukh
       jo derd main mujh ko chor gaya

sub kay leay dua go
anokhi ladli(uzma)
Logged
nazar ghouri
Shayari Qadrdaan
***

Rau: 0
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
3 days, 17 hours and 20 minutes.
Posts: 306
Member Since: Sep 2009


View Profile
«Reply #5 on: November 21, 2009, 06:40:57 AM »
Reply with quote

aj bhee gili rait pay us kay
naqshay pa ko dhoond rahee hay
yay larki pagal larki hay
her roz he tanha ati hay
or ab tak rahin takti hay
kaia isay nahee maloom
k jo perdaisi ho jatain hain
wo phir wapis kub atay hain
wo phir wapis kub atay hain

uzma(anokhi ladli)
[/quote]khass kar yeh lines achhi lagi
bahoot khoob
Logged
ovais
Newbie


Rau: 0
Offline Offline

Waqt Bitaya:
1 hours and 10 minutes.
Posts: 5
Member Since: Aug 2009


View Profile
«Reply #6 on: December 06, 2009, 07:39:28 AM »
Reply with quote
tu wahi kar jo tu chahta hai,
main wahi karta hon jo main chahta hon,
hota wahi hai jo tu chahta hai,
karta wahi hon jo main chahta hon.
Logged
Riyaz Ashna
Poetic Patrol
Yoindian Shayar
******

Rau: 2
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
29 days, 13 hours and 38 minutes.

Posts: 2728
Member Since: Nov 2009


View Profile
«Reply #7 on: January 06, 2010, 10:44:39 PM »
Reply with quote
Wah wah badi mu-assar aur anokhi nazm likhi Uzma ji. Keep it up.
Logged
anokhiladli
Aghaaz ae Shayar
*

Rau: 1
Offline Offline

Waqt Bitaya:
2 days, 6 hours and 14 minutes.
Posts: 51
Member Since: Aug 2009


View Profile
«Reply #8 on: January 07, 2010, 02:41:37 AM »
Reply with quote
thanks for liking the poem riyaz
Logged
ovais
Newbie


Rau: 0
Offline Offline

Waqt Bitaya:
1 hours and 10 minutes.
Posts: 5
Member Since: Aug 2009


View Profile
«Reply #9 on: January 08, 2010, 11:58:47 PM »
Reply with quote
 Applause masha allah bahut khoob uzma saheba aap ki jitni taref ki jaie kam hai
Logged
anokhiladli
Aghaaz ae Shayar
*

Rau: 1
Offline Offline

Waqt Bitaya:
2 days, 6 hours and 14 minutes.
Posts: 51
Member Since: Aug 2009


View Profile
«Reply #10 on: January 09, 2010, 06:43:59 AM »
Reply with quote
 Thanks,avais shb,apni likhi hoi nazmo main yae nazam mairi bhe favourite nazmo main say hay Usual Smile
Logged
Sonia01
Yoindian Shayar
******

Rau: 0
Offline Offline

Gender: Female
Waqt Bitaya:
10 days, 17 hours and 34 minutes.

Posts: 2640
Member Since: Apr 2008


View Profile
«Reply #11 on: January 10, 2010, 10:48:00 PM »
Reply with quote
bahut achi nazm aapne likha hai anokhiladli jee
Logged
anokhiladli
Aghaaz ae Shayar
*

Rau: 1
Offline Offline

Waqt Bitaya:
2 days, 6 hours and 14 minutes.
Posts: 51
Member Since: Aug 2009


View Profile
«Reply #12 on: April 05, 2010, 09:35:12 AM »
Reply with quote
jub sham ghanairy hoti hay
to door ufaq kay par
pagal c ik pagal larki
honto pay geet sajati hay
geet wafa kay hotay hain
geet paiyar kay hotay hain
yon lagta hay k jaisay
pagal c is larki ko
koi tanha ker k chor gaya hay
or dil bhee is ka tor gaya hay
han ik rahee
jo perdais say aya tha
paiyar kay tohfay daita tha
baitain kerta meher o wafa ki
laiken sub kuch sapna nikla
kuch bhee to na apna nikla
rahee chor gaya phir us ko
ab bhee us ki batain hon gee
ab bhee us ki ratain hon gee
lakin ab ki bar
koi or hee pagal larki ho ge
jo bundhen us say bandh chuki ho ge
wo kaia janay
ik pagal c sada larki
aj bhee gili rait pay us k
naqsh i pa ko dhond rahee hay
yay pagal larki pagal hay
her roz he tanha ati hay
or ab tak rahin takti hay
kaia isay nahee maloom
kay jo perdaisi ho jatay hain
wo phir wapis kub atay hain
wo phir wapis kub atay hain
Logged
Rajesh Harish
Khaas Shayar
**

Rau: 1
Offline Offline

Waqt Bitaya:
38 days, 16 hours and 37 minutes.
Posts: 10584
Member Since: Aug 2008


View Profile
«Reply #13 on: April 05, 2010, 09:40:48 AM »
Reply with quote
Good one
Logged
Riyaz Ashna
Poetic Patrol
Yoindian Shayar
******

Rau: 2
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
29 days, 13 hours and 38 minutes.

Posts: 2728
Member Since: Nov 2009


View Profile
«Reply #14 on: April 05, 2010, 06:25:17 PM »
Reply with quote
Anokhiladli ji bahut achhi aur dard bhari aur purkashish nazm likhi hai aapne. Afreen.
Logged
Pages: [1] 2  All
ReplyPrint
Jump to:  

+ Quick Reply
With a Quick-Reply you can use bulletin board code and smileys as you would in a normal post, but much more conveniently.


Get Yoindia Updates in Email.

Enter your email address:

Ask any question to expert on eTI community..
Welcome, Guest. Please login or register.
Did you miss your activation email?
August 24, 2019, 10:41:31 PM

Login with username, password and session length
Recent Replies
[August 24, 2019, 10:41:26 PM]

[August 24, 2019, 09:34:50 PM]

[August 24, 2019, 03:13:42 AM]

[August 23, 2019, 11:41:04 PM]

[August 23, 2019, 11:33:09 PM]

[August 23, 2019, 11:31:29 PM]

[August 23, 2019, 11:30:06 PM]

[August 23, 2019, 11:28:21 PM]

[August 23, 2019, 11:25:14 PM]

[August 23, 2019, 11:24:33 PM]
Yoindia Shayariadab Copyright © MGCyber Group All Rights Reserved
Terms of Use| Privacy Policy Powered by PHP MySQL SMF© Simple Machines LLC
Page created in 0.175 seconds with 24 queries.
[x] Join now community of 48363 Real Poets and poetry admirer