Ro Padoge Tum Bhi,.

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Aaj Bhula Diya Maine Tujhe Zamaane Ke Baad,.
Jab Tune Muskura Diya Mera Dil Jalaane Ke Baad,.

Tune Basa Liya Ghar Roshni Ke Sheher Mein,.
Mujhe Andheri Raahon Mein Le Jaane Ke Baad,.

Teri Ek Khushi Ke Liye Maine Duniya Bhar Ke Gham Sahe,.
Aaj Tu Khush Hai Mujhe Mitaane Ke Baad,.

Mere Pyaar Ko Tune Samjha Nahi Kabhi,.
Dekhna Ek Din Pachtaogi Mujhe Thukraane Ke Baad,.

Tumhare Saath Milkar Logon Ne Bhi Mujhpe Sitaam Dhaaye,.
Aur Aaj Sab Ro Rahe Hain Mujhe Aazmaane Ke Baad,.

Aaj Mere Halat Par Tum Hans Rahe Ho, Lekin,.
Ek Din Ro Padoge Tum Bhi Muskuraane Ke Baad,.

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«Reply #1 on: February 02, 2009, 10:46:04 PM »
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lovely poetry pyare bhai, vazan,behr,radeef,kafia, and takhyel all beautiuly joined together.asghr Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: February 02, 2009, 11:04:37 PM »
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lovely poetry pyare bhai, vazan,behr,radeef,kafia, and takhyel all beautiuly joined together.asghr Applause Applause Applause Applause

Shukriya Ashgr Bhaijaan,.
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«Reply #3 on: February 03, 2009, 03:50:27 AM »
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 Applause Applause

Wah BhaiJaan Bohat Khoob...
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Shukriya Sis,.
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«Reply #5 on: February 03, 2009, 08:51:13 AM »
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Quote from: Shihab on February 03, 2009, 08:46:22 AM
wow mere bhai jitni tareef karu kam hai
bohat hi khoob keep it up.



Har Pal Yun Jhutha Muskuraana Mushqil Bhi Kitna Tha
Zara Sa Raahat.e.Dil Ko Dard Ko Dil Mein Basa Liya



Shukriya Majid Bhai, Aapne Bhi Bohat Achchi Lines Likhi Hai..

Teri Muskurahaat Se Mujhe Ehsaas Ye Hua,.
Jo Dard Hai Tere, Uske Liye Ye Muskaan Kaafi Nahi,.
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«Reply #6 on: February 03, 2009, 10:00:09 AM »
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Shukariya Bhai Good One

Dil Ne Ik Soch Banayii Thi Ki Woh Hi Ek Mera Hai
Baad Mein Pata Chala Shihab Tu Kitna Galat Tha

Great Lines Again Bhai,.

Kaun Deta Hai Umar Bhar Ka Saath "Faraaz,.
Log To Janaaze Pe Bhi Kaandhe Badal Kar Saath Dete Hain,.

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«Reply #7 on: February 03, 2009, 10:40:31 AM »
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Baad mere woh ta Umr yu nazar aaya
Mano meri maut ki tasweer woh lage

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«Reply #8 on: February 03, 2009, 10:44:33 AM »
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Baad mere woh ta Umr yu nazar aaya
Mano meri maut ki tasweer woh lage

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Waah Waah Kya Baat Kahi Hai, Bohat Hi Badhiya Hai Bhai,.
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«Reply #9 on: February 03, 2009, 03:12:47 PM »
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Boht khoob, aapne to waakye hume rulaa diya.
"ishq karne ke bhi adaab hote hai
 jaagti aankho mein bhi khuwaab hote hai
 har koi ro ke dikhaaye ye zaroori to nahi
 khushk aankho me bhi sailaab hote hai"
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«Reply #10 on: February 03, 2009, 03:17:57 PM »
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Quote from: Jaanasheen on February 02, 2009, 10:33:37 PM
Aaj Bhula Diya Maine Tujhe Zamaane Ke Baad,.
Jab Tune Muskura Diya Mera Dil Jalaane Ke Baad,.

Tune Basa Liya Ghar Roshni Ke Sheher Mein,.
Mujhe Andheri Raahon Mein Le Jaane Ke Baad,.

Teri Ek Khushi Ke Liye Maine Duniya Bhar Ke Gham Sahe,.
Aaj Tu Khush Hai Mujhe Mitaane Ke Baad,.

Mere Pyaar Ko Tune Samjha Nahi Kabhi,.
Dekhna Ek Din Pachtaogi Mujhe Thukraane Ke Baad,.

Tumhare Saath Milkar Logon Ne Bhi Mujhpe Sitaam Dhaaye,.
Aur Aaj Sab Ro Rahe Hain Mujhe Aazmaane Ke Baad,.

Aaj Mere Halat Par Tum Hans Rahe Ho, Lekin,.
Ek Din Ro Padoge Tum Bhi Muskuraane Ke Baad,.

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Bahoth bahoth badiya azeem aur sajid sahab kya kahene apke bhi shihab sahab hamesha ki tarah zabardast !! Allah sub ko khush rakhe !! Ameen !!

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tearyeyed

Boht khoob, aapne to waakye hume rulaa diya.
"ishq karne ke bhi adaab hote hai
 jaagti aankho mein bhi khuwaab hote hai
 har koi ro ke dikhaaye ye zaroori to nahi
 khushk aankho me bhi sailaab hote hai"


Shukriya Aroob Ji,.
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Bahoth bahoth badiya azeem aur sajid sahab kya kahene apke bhi shihab sahab hamesha ki tarah zabardast !! Allah sub ko khush rakhe !! Ameen !!

Qadeer Toopchi

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inshaAllaah woh zaroor roye gain
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inshaAllaah woh zaroor roye gain

Are yaar Achchi Duaa Do,.
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