tajjub hai!!!

by amritamohini on March 27, 2007, 11:28:43 AM
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Ek jazba khak hua dil ki gehrayion me kahin
tajjub hai maut par uski koi roya tak nahin,
 
sahil se to chale the sath me hamsafar bankar
sagar ne duboya hami ko unhe to bhigoya tak nahin,

aankhon me zinda khwab the ya khwab me zinda ankhen
tutne k bad hi jana ki unhone to sanjoya tak nahin,

nadani me jinki khatir sab lutane nikle the hum
dekho humare na rehne par bhi unka kuch khoya tak nahin.
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dhadkan
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«Reply #1 on: March 27, 2007, 11:41:51 AM »
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wah kya khoob kaha aap ne....

isi baat par mujhe bhi kuch yaad aa gaya...

Wo milne ka wada kar gaye panchve din,
Jane kisse humne sun liya zindagi hai chaar din
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Pooja
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«Reply #2 on: March 27, 2007, 09:43:49 PM »
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bahoot hi acha likha hai AmritaMohini ji!!!

Apka yoindia mai sawagat hai

Third pehra bahoot hi acha laga!!
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vikrant29
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«Reply #3 on: March 27, 2007, 11:24:48 PM »
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Bahoot hi khubsoorat likha hai AMRITAMOHINI ji............. :lol:



Door reh kar bhi hum unko bhula nahin sakte,
Paas aa kar bhi apni manzil paa nahin sakte,
Ek faasla hum ko bana kar rakhna hai apni mohabbat me,
Kya hai majboori humari ye bhi bata nahin sakte....
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Talat
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«Reply #4 on: March 28, 2007, 05:36:52 PM »
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Amrita and Vikrant..bohot khoob !
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pushp24
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«Reply #5 on: March 28, 2007, 09:26:30 PM »
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very nice amritamohini...
2nd vala pehra bahut hi achha hai...

kya hua jo wo mera humsafar na raha...
dil ke dard ab bhi uske naam se mehakte hain...
sagar ki gehraeeyan kya duboyengi usse...
jise bhigone ke liye ye ashk har pal baraste hain...


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harashmahajan
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«Reply #6 on: April 05, 2007, 11:41:24 PM »
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waah amritji kyakhoob likha hai....daad kabool keejiyejanaab


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