Tod gaya !

by salma786 on February 10, 2009, 07:23:39 AM
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Tha parwan chada mohabbat me jiske,
Khud ko bhulakar baithi thi,
Duniya se rishte tod kar sare,
Hosh gawa kar baithi thi!


Jiski khatir khudko bhuli,
Aaj mujhe wo bhul gaya,
Sapno se jo ped tha sicha,
Sab ashqo me dhul gaya!


Bikhra kar armano ko mere,
Nasur banakar chod gaya,
Mitti ki mai murat thi,
Mujhe banakar tod gaya!
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«Reply #1 on: February 10, 2009, 07:36:01 AM »
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Hmm, Bohat Achche Salma Ji,.
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«Reply #2 on: February 10, 2009, 07:45:24 AM »
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Thanx janasheen ji!
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«Reply #3 on: February 10, 2009, 08:14:06 AM »
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nice lines salma ji....
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«Reply #4 on: February 10, 2009, 09:48:39 AM »
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Thanks fairy ji!
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«Reply #5 on: February 10, 2009, 10:03:11 AM »
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salma ji bahut khub likha hai

chhorh kar chala gaya woh tanha tujhe
mat kar dill udaas aaj tu "salma"
woh jo hai tera hai rahega tera apna
dill ki duniya ujarhne mat denaa
tu ummeed kabhi khone na dena.
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«Reply #6 on: February 10, 2009, 10:13:48 AM »
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Thanx alot rawat ji!!
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«Reply #7 on: February 10, 2009, 06:37:15 PM »
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Tha parwan chada mohabbat me jiske,
Khud ko bhulakar baithi thi,
Duniya se rishte tod kar sare,
Hosh gawa kar baithi thi!


Jiski khatir khudko bhuli,
Aaj mujhe wo bhul gaya,
Sapno se jo ped tha sicha,
Sab ashqo me dhul gaya!


Bikhra kar armano ko mere,
Nasur banakar chod gaya,
Mitti ki mai murat thi,
Mujhe banakar tod gaya!

nice poetry Salma ji.Asghr
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«Reply #8 on: February 11, 2009, 04:21:27 AM »
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Thanx lot Asghr ji!
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«Reply #9 on: February 11, 2009, 04:25:19 AM »
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nice work salma and rawat ji
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«Reply #10 on: February 11, 2009, 05:46:04 AM »
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Thanks pooja!
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«Reply #11 on: February 11, 2009, 06:56:07 AM »
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thanku pooja ji
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