Tujhe bhii chain na aaye

by honeyrose on December 12, 2007, 08:42:13 AM
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mujhe bhulaanevaale tujhe bhii
chain na aaye
tuu bhii jaage tuu bhii tadape
tuu bhii niir bahaaye
baadal garaje bijalii chamake
tadap tadap rah jaaye
patajhad aaye chhaye udaasii
man mein aag lagaaye
tuu bhii in ko yaad kare aur
thaam ke dil rah jaaye
aramaanon kaa mahal banaake
aap hii tuune tod diyaa
ek suhaanaa giit sunaayaa

merii niindein chhiin lii tuune
aise Khvaab dikhaaye
jab bhii saavan lekar aaye
pyaar bharii barasaaton ko
yaad kare tuu baiTh ke tanhaa
saath guzaarii raaton ko
merii tarah tere man mein bhii
barakha aag lagaaye

 

vo khaT ke puraze udaa rahaa thaa
havaaon kaa rukh dikhaa rahaa thaa
kuchh aur bhii ho gayaa numayaa
main apana likhaa miTaa rahaa thaa
usii kaa imaan badal gayaa hai
kabhii jo meraa Khudaa rahaa thaa
vo ek din ek ajanabii ko
merii kahaanii sunaa rahaa thaa
vo umr kam rahaa thaa merii
main saal apane badhaa rahaa thaa

 

main bhii shaayad buraa nahiin hotaa
vo agar bevafaa nahiin hotaa
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Shikha12
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«Reply #1 on: December 12, 2007, 09:40:54 AM »
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Very Nice One... Excellent Start Usual Smile

Keep Writing...
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«Reply #2 on: December 12, 2007, 10:23:36 AM »
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vo khaT ke puraze udaa rahaa thaa
havaaon kaa rukh dikhaa rahaa thaa
kuchh aur bhii ho gayaa numayaa
main apana likhaa miTaa rahaa thaa
usii kaa imaan badal gayaa hai
kabhii jo meraa Khudaa rahaa thaa
vo ek din ek ajanabii ko
merii kahaanii sunaa rahaa thaa
vo umr kam rahaa thaa merii
main saal apane badhaa rahaa thaa

 

main bhii shaayad buraa nahiin hotaa
vo agar bevafaa nahiin hotaa

Bahut khoob...
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«Reply #3 on: September 10, 2008, 05:45:04 AM »
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A re Waah...!! Honey Surooa'at Hi Dard Se kiye The..Sach Mein Ye To chhote chhote Lafzo Ko Lekar Taweel b' Tarteeb Badhiya si Nazm Taraashi Hai aapne..Tabhi Aaj Ye A'alum Hai aap ka Ki...Yo. ki JaaNe MaaNe Famous Star ho aap. koi kuch bhi kahein Kalaam Likhte ho badhiya hi..yo pe shayri-e-dard ya Bewafaai ya jo bhi kahiye ki Fehrist Me aap ki Jagaah Bhi Khaas dekhi hai Maine..bahot khoob Honey bahot hi khoob...Kya Kahein !!!
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«Reply #4 on: September 10, 2008, 10:14:04 AM »
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A re Waah...!! Honey Surooa'at Hi Dard Se kiye The..Sach Mein Ye To chhote chhote Lafzo Ko Lekar Taweel b' Tarteeb Badhiya si Nazm Taraashi Hai aapne..Tabhi Aaj Ye A'alum Hai aap ka Ki...Yo. ki JaaNe MaaNe Famous Star ho aap. koi kuch bhi kahein Kalaam Likhte ho badhiya hi..yo pe shayri-e-dard ya Bewafaai ya jo bhi kahiye ki Fehrist Me aap ki Jagaah Bhi Khaas dekhi hai Maine..bahot khoob Honey bahot hi khoob...Kya Kahein !!!

Bohat bohat shukriya Razaa aapka   happy9 aapko ye shayari pasand aaya
   
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«Reply #5 on: September 10, 2008, 12:28:01 PM »
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honerose ap ne bohat acha likha h khas ki last 2 lines.i like it
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