*Vyapari Hai*

by Roja on October 01, 2007, 07:57:52 AM
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नेकी की बातें सब झूठी
जिसको देखो व्यापारी है

तौल रहा हीरों से अजमत
जो धंधे से पंसारी है

पाव तले ये राख ना रौन्दो
इसके नीचे चिंगारी है

और भला क्या होगा बजनी
ख़ामोशी जितनी भारी है

अपनी वफ़ाएँ उनकी ज़फ़ाएँ
जंग अभी तक ये जारी है
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Apni roti-tarkari hai
Baki sab kuch sarkari hai

Har koyi ilzam lagaye
Galati kisne swikari hai

Nekhi ki bathein sab jhooti
Jisko dekho vyapari hai

Toul raha hiron ki ajamat
Jo dhandhe se pansaari hai

Paav tale ye raakh na raundo
Iske neeche chingari hai

Aur bhala kya hoga bajni
Khamoshi jitni bhari hai

Apni wafayen unki jafayein
Jang abhi tak ye jari hai
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«Reply #1 on: October 01, 2007, 12:46:56 PM »
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Nice one Roja. Good work.
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«Reply #2 on: October 03, 2007, 07:26:26 PM »
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Bahut khoob Roja acha likha hai.

 Aur bhala kya hoga vajni,
 Khamoshi jitni bhari hai.

 Aakhiri line mein agar thoda sa change kar de to gane main easy rahega jaise

  Apni wafayen unki jafayen,
  Ye jang abhi tak jaari hai.
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«Reply #3 on: October 05, 2007, 04:21:23 PM »
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Bahut khoob Roja. keep it up.

     "Rahul" ne manga tha sath unka,
                                     vo judai ka gam de gaye.
      Hum yaadon k sahare ji lete,
                                      vo bhool jane ki kasam de gaye.
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«Reply #4 on: October 05, 2007, 07:04:47 PM »
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Quote from: "rajrishi"
Bahut khoob Roja acha likha hai.

 Aur bhala kya hoga vajni,
 Khamoshi jitni bhari hai.

 Aakhiri line mein agar thoda sa change kar de to gane main easy rahega jaise

  Apni wafayen unki jafayen,
  Ye jang abhi tak jaari hai.


Shukhriya Rajrishi ... noted yr comment.  Usual Smile
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«Reply #5 on: October 05, 2007, 07:05:28 PM »
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Nice one Roja. Good work.


Thank you for reading Mr Ricky
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«Reply #6 on: October 05, 2007, 07:08:14 PM »
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Bahut khoob Roja. keep it up.

     "Rahul" ne manga tha sath unka,
                                     vo judai ka gam de gaye.
      Hum yaadon k sahare ji lete,
                                      vo bhool jane ki kasam de gaye.


thanks and nice sharing.

Jisko bhi thamayi humne apni muqaddar-e-kalam
Woh hi apne hathon se mera muqaddar badal gaya

Apna matlab nikal kar kiya kinara dosra
Is matlabi duniya ka ab humko bhi pata chal gaya..
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«Reply #7 on: October 06, 2007, 10:28:10 AM »
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Reply Karne k liye thanks, Roja.



       Kadam yun hi dagmga gye raaste se,
                                warna sambhlna hum bhi jante the.
       Thoker bhi lagi to us pather se,
                                 jise hum apna khuda mante the.



       Uske dil pe kya guzaregi pemano ka kya hoga,
             Khuda jane humare baad mehkhano ka kya hoga.
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«Reply #8 on: October 07, 2007, 02:29:21 AM »
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bohat acha likha ap ny roja ji
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