ye raste....

by manzil-e-ishq on November 27, 2010, 06:37:32 AM
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ye raste, ye manzile, ye zindagi meri
teri hi tarah mujhse sab khafa se lagte hai..

dur dur rahte hai ho humse paas nahi aate
mujhe rulane ke saare tere bahane lagte hai

thujhko bhulu bhi jau sochti hu aksar
tere mere afsaane ab saza se lagte hai

har ek mod pe deti hai koi ruswai dastak
humko azmane ke ye tarike ab purane lagte hai
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«Reply #1 on: November 27, 2010, 07:08:10 AM »
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taliyan taliyan...
tap tap taliyan Priya ji..bhot khoob.
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«Reply #2 on: November 27, 2010, 08:12:48 AM »
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hmm last one bahut badhiya laga..

bahut bahut khoob manzil ji~

yunhi likhte rahiye..

dher saari daad~
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«Reply #3 on: November 27, 2010, 08:17:06 AM »
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bht hi pyari rachna priya .....dard ko dikahne ka andaaz achcha lag...

 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

ab nahin hogi tumse shikayat mujhe koi
ab maine khudko tumse dur kar lena hai

nahin yaad aaoge ab tum mujhe reh reh kar
ab maine khudko tumse alag kar liya hai
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«Reply #4 on: November 29, 2010, 07:06:35 AM »
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thank u so much kb ji..........

taliyan taliyan...
tap tap taliyan Priya ji..bhot khoob.

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«Reply #5 on: November 29, 2010, 07:07:39 AM »
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waqt dene ka shukria abhi ji....

hmm last one bahut badhiya laga..

bahut bahut khoob manzil ji~

yunhi likhte rahiye..

dher saari daad~
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«Reply #6 on: November 29, 2010, 07:08:18 AM »
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thanx kasak di.............

bht hi pyari rachna priya .....dard ko dikahne ka andaaz achcha lag...

 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

ab nahin hogi tumse shikayat mujhe koi
ab maine khudko tumse dur kar lena hai

nahin yaad aaoge ab tum mujhe reh reh kar
ab maine khudko tumse alag kar liya hai
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«Reply #7 on: November 29, 2010, 07:14:27 AM »
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ye raste, ye manzile, ye zindagi meri
teri hi tarah mujhse sab khafa se lagte hai..

dur dur rahte hai ho humse paas nahi aate
mujhe rulane ke saare tere bahane lagte hai

thujhko bhulu bhi jau sochti hu aksar
tere mere afsaane ab saza se lagte hai

har ek mod pe deti hai koi ruswai dastak
humko azmane ke ye tarike ab purane lagte hai


Bahut Bahut Khoob Priyaji..

Bahut Ache Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #8 on: November 29, 2010, 07:53:04 AM »
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thanx alot khwaish ji.......
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«Reply #9 on: November 29, 2010, 11:24:15 AM »
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Priya ji mast hai aapki poem..... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Ye nazaare wo sitaare ye ghataayein
Sab kyu aaj mujhse naaraj lagte hain

Tune jab se toda mujh se nata hain
Ye sab mujhe begaane se lagte hain



ye raste, ye manzile, ye zindagi meri
teri hi tarah mujhse sab khafa se lagte hai..

dur dur rahte hai ho humse paas nahi aate
mujhe rulane ke saare tere bahane lagte hai

thujhko bhulu bhi jau sochti hu aksar
tere mere afsaane ab saza se lagte hai

har ek mod pe deti hai koi ruswai dastak
humko azmane ke ye tarike ab purane lagte hai

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«Reply #10 on: November 30, 2010, 07:52:51 AM »
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thanx koyal

Priya ji mast hai aapki poem..... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Ye nazaare wo sitaare ye ghataayein
Sab kyu aaj mujhse naaraj lagte hain

Tune jab se toda mujh se nata hain
Ye sab mujhe begaane se lagte hain



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