कर रही हूं इंतजार....

by Minakshi vats on July 05, 2014, 01:59:45 AM
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कर रही हूं इंतजार मै, अब भी तेरे लौट आने का,
मुझे कुछ वजह दे तू यूं बेरूखी जताने का,
 
थी कुछ पल की आस्कति तेरी जिसे महोब्त समझ बैठी,
अब शौक नही मुझको, तेरी आस्कति बढाने का,

तेरी कुछ शर्ते महोब्त थी जो रास नही मुझको,
कुछ शौक नही मुझको यूं तुम्हे आजमाने का,

तेरे जान इरादे अब, बिखरी हूं मैं तो खुद मे,
शायद हक ही नही था हमे ये इश्क फरमाने का,

पर तुम भी, जरा हमदम इतना सा समझ लेना,
जो ना हो समर्पित खुद, हक नही उसे समर्पण पाने का..

मिनाक्षी वत्स "निशा"
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«Reply #1 on: July 05, 2014, 03:01:12 AM »
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minakshi ji,

agar aap english ke font me.n likhe.n to main bhi padhoo.n mujhe hindi ke alfa-bets nahin aati aur naa hi hindi ke lafz zayada aate hain yaani agar english font me.n likha hua koi hindi ka mushkil word ho aur woh urdu me.n nahin bola jata ho to woh bhi mushkil ka baais hoga.

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«Reply #2 on: July 05, 2014, 03:23:22 AM »
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Minakshi jee Aadaab... !

Bahut khoob jee ... kafi umda ahsaas O khayaal ko khoob bayaaN kiya hai aapne ...
Sabhi sher khoob rahe ... is khoob kalaam par humari dheroN daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye ...

Likhte rahiye ... bazm meiN aate rahiye ...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye ...
Khuda Hafez ...

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«Reply #3 on: July 05, 2014, 10:53:10 AM »
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«Reply #4 on: July 05, 2014, 10:38:53 PM »
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waah waah bahut khoob
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«Reply #5 on: July 05, 2014, 10:49:26 PM »
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कर रही हूं इंतजार मै, अब भी तेरे लौट आने का,
मुझे कुछ वजह दे तू यूं बेरूखी जताने का,
 
थी कुछ पल की आस्कति तेरी जिसे महोब्त समझ बैठी,
अब शौक नही मुझको, तेरी आस्कति बढाने का,

तेरी कुछ शर्ते महोब्त थी जो रास नही मुझको,
कुछ शौक नही मुझको यूं तुम्हे आजमाने का,

तेरे जान इरादे अब, बिखरी हूं मैं तो खुद मे,
शायद हक ही नही था हमे ये इश्क फरमाने का,

पर तुम भी, जरा हमदम इतना सा समझ लेना,
जो ना हो समर्पित खुद, हक नही उसे समर्पण पाने का..

मिनाक्षी वत्स "निशा"

nice,ma'am
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«Reply #7 on: July 06, 2014, 10:13:06 PM »
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wah bahut khoob.
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«Reply #8 on: July 11, 2014, 11:42:20 AM »
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 Clapping Smiley Applause Applause Applause :clap:आपने बहुत अछ्छी तरह से अपने मन के भाव समर्पित किये है इसके लिए मेरे पास कुछ शब्द नही जिन्हें आपको समर्पित करू   राम कृष्ण
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