जंजीरे....अमित प्रकाश “मीत”

by amit_prakash_meet on April 07, 2012, 06:56:42 AM
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गया था मिलने उससे ये सोचकर 

कि वो सिर्फ मेरे लिए ही बनी थी |

 
बैठा देखकर गैरों को उसके दर पर

कुछ  कहने की हिम्मत न हुयी थी  |
 

चले आये  थे  बे-आबरू हो के वहां से हम 

जहाँ  पर  कभी इज्ज़त हमारी बड़ी  थी |

 
मुड़कर देखने का होसला भी न कर सके हम   

जबकि जानते थे वो दरवाज़े पे ही खड़ी थी |

 
कदम दो कदम ही चल पा रहे थे "मीत"

पैरों  में  जो वादों  की  जंजीरे  पड़ी  थी ||       
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«Reply #1 on: April 07, 2012, 08:54:42 AM »
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  Applause
 :clap:Nice post !
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«Reply #2 on: April 07, 2012, 09:37:27 AM »
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ati sunder rachnaa hardik badhaai aur daad
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«Reply #3 on: April 07, 2012, 09:56:50 AM »
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Thanks a lot
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 :clap:Nice post !
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«Reply #4 on: April 07, 2012, 09:59:11 AM »
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बहुत बहुत शुक्रिया, आपको भी MOTM के लिए बहुत बहुत बधाई
ati sunder rachnaa hardik badhaai aur daad
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«Reply #5 on: April 07, 2012, 10:55:43 AM »
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 notworthy notworthy
 Applause Applause Applause
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NICE AMITJII
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«Reply #6 on: April 07, 2012, 04:49:50 PM »
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Amit jee
Namaste

very nice

गया था मिलने उससे ये सोचकर 
कि वो सिर्फ मेरे लिए ही बनी थी | Applause
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«Reply #7 on: April 07, 2012, 04:51:52 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: April 07, 2012, 05:43:35 PM »
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Thank you Pramod Ji
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 Applause Applause Applause
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NICE AMITJII
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«Reply #9 on: April 07, 2012, 05:46:44 PM »
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Bahut bahut sukriya MKV ji
Amit jee
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very nice

गया था मिलने उससे ये सोचकर 
कि वो सिर्फ मेरे लिए ही बनी थी | Applause
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«Reply #10 on: April 07, 2012, 05:48:33 PM »
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गया था मिलने उससे ये सोचकर 
कि वो सिर्फ मेरे लिए ही बनी थी |
 
बैठा देखकर गैरों को उसके दर पर
कुछ कहने की हिम्मत न हुयी थी  |

चले आये थे बे-आबरू हो के वहां से
जहाँ  पे कभी हमारी बड़ी इज्ज़त थी |
 
मुड़कर देखने  होंसला  भी न  हुआ   
जानते थे वो दरवाज़े पर ही खड़ी थी |

कदम दो कदम ही चल पा रहे थे "मीत"
पैरों  में  वादों  की जंजीरे  पड़ी  थी ||


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«Reply #11 on: April 07, 2012, 05:51:56 PM »
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Thank you Theyash ji
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«Reply #12 on: April 07, 2012, 05:54:53 PM »
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«Reply #13 on: April 09, 2012, 06:18:15 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause bahut bahut sundar peshkash hai Amit ji.... bahut khoob likha hai aapne....!!!
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