जंजीरे...अमित प्रकाश “मीत”

by amit_prakash_meet on April 08, 2012, 06:37:55 PM
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गया था मिलने उससे ये सोचकर 

कि वो सिर्फ मेरे लिए ही बनी थी |

 
बैठा देखकर गैरों को उसके दर पर

कुछ  कहने की हिम्मत न हुयी थी  |

 
चले आये  थे  बे-आबरू हो के वहां से हम 

जहाँ  पर  कभी इज्ज़त हमारी बड़ी  थी |

 
मुड़कर देखने का होसला भी न कर सके हम   

जबकि जानते थे वो दरवाज़े पे ही खड़ी थी |

 
कदम दो कदम ही चल पा रहे थे "मीत"

पैरों  में  जो वादों  की  जंजीरे  पड़ी  थी ||       
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«Reply #1 on: April 08, 2012, 07:59:11 PM »
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गया था मिलने उससे ये सोचकर 

कि वो सिर्फ मेरे लिए ही बनी थी |
AISA CONFIDENCE PAHLI BAAR DEKH RAHI HOON..!
 
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बैठा देखकर गैरों को उसके दर पर

कुछ  कहने की हिम्मत न हुयी थी  |

 ISMEIN HIMMAT WALI KYA BAAT HAI. JO KAHNA THA BOL DETE AB BHUGTO..! Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased
चले आये  थे  बे-आबरू हो के वहां से हम 

जहाँ  पर  कभी इज्ज़त हमारी बड़ी  थी |

KYON USNE POOCHA NAHIN TUMHEIN KYAA...! icon_silent icon_silent icon_silent icon_silent icon_silent
मुड़कर देखने का होसला भी न कर सके हम   

जबकि जानते थे वो दरवाज़े पे ही खड़ी थी |
YE LO JANAAB KI AISI HALAAT HAI.AB KYA KAHEIN HUM.MAIN NE SOCHA AB TUM DEKHO GE TAB TUM DEKHO GE. PER YE KYA SEEEDHE HI CHALL DIYE JANAAB
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कदम दो कदम ही चल पा रहे थे "मीत"

पैरों  में  जो वादों  की  जंजीरे  पड़ी  थी || 

 KIS TARAH KE VAADE. NA CHALNE KE. BAAT SAMAJH NA AAYII JI 
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VERY GOOD............!
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«Reply #2 on: April 09, 2012, 03:54:26 AM »
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«Reply #3 on: April 09, 2012, 04:18:09 AM »
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sheba ji, thanks, your each quote will be taken in to due consideration
VERY GOOD............!
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«Reply #4 on: April 09, 2012, 09:50:08 AM »
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waaah bahut khoob.....Usual Smile
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«Reply #5 on: April 10, 2012, 05:22:02 AM »
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Thanks a lot
waaah bahut khoob.....Usual Smile
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«Reply #6 on: April 12, 2012, 04:55:15 AM »
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thanks
waaah bahut khoob.....Usual Smile
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