मत पूछ...................................

by sanjayudas on December 05, 2012, 06:05:11 PM
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मत पूछ कि किस तरह सफ़र गुज़रा,
इक क़यामत से क्या कमतर गुज़रा,
जिसे तुम सोँचके रातोँ मेँ जाग जाती थी,
वो ख़याल हमपे मर्तबा उम्रभर गुज़रा,
तेरी ज़ानिब मेरी सदा इस तरह भी नहीँ पँहुची,
मैँ कई दफ़ा तेरी दहलीज़ पे रोकर गुज़रा,
तेरी एड़ी के नीचे जहाँ हाथ रक्खे थे मैँने,
मेरी जान मैँ नंगे पाँव उन काँटोँ से होकर गुज़रा,
अपाहिज़ आँखोँ का एक ही सहारा रहा,
अपने शानोँ पे तेरे ख़्वाब मैँ ढ़ोकर गुज़रा,
मेरी तक़लीफ़ देख कहीँ तू रो ना दे,
तेरी ज़ानिब जब गुज़रा मैँ हँस कर गुज़रा,
मत पूछ कि किस तरह..............
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«Reply #1 on: December 05, 2012, 06:21:10 PM »
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Wah Sanjai ji aapne to kamaal ki poem likhi hai. Khayalon ki bahot unchi udan bhari aapne. Bahot achha laga parhkar. Daad pesh hai.
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«Reply #2 on: December 05, 2012, 07:16:44 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut khoob Sanjay ji... bahut umda likha hai aapne....!!!
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«Reply #3 on: December 06, 2012, 01:06:47 AM »
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 Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: December 06, 2012, 04:05:52 AM »
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acha likha hai sanjay ji keep writing
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«Reply #5 on: December 06, 2012, 05:13:53 AM »
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beautiful
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«Reply #6 on: December 06, 2012, 05:34:36 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
kitne gehre ehsaas sanjoye hai aapne dheron daad
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«Reply #7 on: December 06, 2012, 09:08:31 AM »
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Sanjay Je Aadaab!



WaaH janab waaH kia kahne behad umdaa khayaal aur
behad dilfareb andaaz ... kafi achche lafzoN meiN
aapne khayaaloN ko bayaaN kiya hai aapne... Usual Smile


Sabhi khayaal behad khoob rahe... dil ko lagte se
ahsaas O khayaal hai... Humari dheroN daad O mubbarakbad
kabul kijiye... Usual Smile


Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda hafez... Usual Smile

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«Reply #8 on: December 06, 2012, 09:17:03 AM »
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very nice
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«Reply #9 on: December 09, 2012, 04:44:23 PM »
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मत पूछ कि किस तरह सफ़र गुज़रा,
इक क़यामत से क्या कमतर गुज़रा,
जिसे तुम सोँचके रातोँ मेँ जाग जाती थी,
वो ख़याल हमपे मर्तबा उम्रभर गुज़रा,
तेरी ज़ानिब मेरी सदा इस तरह भी नहीँ पँहुची,
मैँ कई दफ़ा तेरी दहलीज़ पे रोकर गुज़रा,
तेरी एड़ी के नीचे जहाँ हाथ रक्खे थे मैँने,
मेरी जान मैँ नंगे पाँव उन काँटोँ से होकर गुज़रा,
अपाहिज़ आँखोँ का एक ही सहारा रहा,
अपने शानोँ पे तेरे ख़्वाब मैँ ढ़ोकर गुज़रा,
मेरी तक़लीफ़ देख कहीँ तू रो ना दे,
तेरी ज़ानिब जब गुज़रा मैँ हँस कर गुज़रा,
मत पूछ कि किस तरह..............


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