मय्यत...अमित प्रकाश “मीत”

by amit_prakash_meet on April 27, 2012, 07:26:30 AM
Pages: [1] 2  All
ReplyPrint
Author  (Read 1162 times)
amit_prakash_meet
Guest
Reply with quote
जिंदगी में जख्म ही जख्म मिले हर घड़ी
कभी भी कोई मरहम लगाने वाला नहीं मिला
 
तन्हा ही चलते ही रहे हर वक्त हर जगह
कभी भी कोई साथ निभाने वाला नहीं मिला

चाहत ही रह गयी कर जाऊं फ़ना खुद को
कभी भी कोई प्यार जताने वाला नहीं मिला

नहीं लगता "मीत" मिलेगा कब्र में भी आराम
कभी भी कोई मय्यत सजाने वाला नहीं मिला  
Logged
masoom shahjada
Guest
«Reply #1 on: April 27, 2012, 08:25:48 AM »
Reply with quote
Etne sikwe achche nahi hote mere bhai...
....
Thora sa to hamara dil rakh liya hota..
Mana ham aapke kaam kabhi nahi aaye par aapko pahle hame ahsas karana tha na baad me public karna tha....
.....
Wese aapki sayri ki baat kar to jabardast h...
Bhut dil ko choti huyi h....
Esliye hamari daad kabool kare
Logged
sksaini4
Ustaad ae Shayari
*****

Rau: 853
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
112 days, 8 hours and 51 minutes.
Posts: 36414
Member Since: Apr 2011


View Profile
«Reply #2 on: April 27, 2012, 10:09:39 AM »
Reply with quote
bahut khoob
Logged
amit_prakash_meet
Guest
«Reply #3 on: April 27, 2012, 10:19:59 AM »
Reply with quote
Thanks a lot Masoom Ji, jab aapse milenge to saare shikve-shikaayat door kar lenge
Etne sikwe achche nahi hote mere bhai...
....
Thora sa to hamara dil rakh liya hota..
Mana ham aapke kaam kabhi nahi aaye par aapko pahle hame ahsas karana tha na baad me public karna tha....
.....
Wese aapki sayri ki baat kar to jabardast h...
Bhut dil ko choti huyi h....
Esliye hamari daad kabool kare
Logged
goldy_shayar
Guest
«Reply #4 on: April 27, 2012, 10:27:25 AM »
Reply with quote
Bahut khoob kaha Meet Ji, kaabil-e-daad
जिंदगी में जख्म ही जख्म मिले हर घड़ी
कभी भी कोई मरहम लगाने वाला नहीं मिला
 
तन्हा ही चलते ही रहे हर वक्त हर जगह
कभी भी कोई साथ निभाने वाला नहीं मिला

चाहत ही रह गयी कर जाऊं फ़ना खुद को
कभी भी कोई प्यार जताने वाला नहीं मिला

नहीं लगता "मीत" मिलेगा कब्र में भी आराम
कभी भी कोई मय्यत सजाने वाला नहीं मिला   
Logged
~Hriday~
Poetic Patrol
Mashhur Shayar
***

Rau: 115
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
101 days, 3 hours and 51 minutes.

kalam k chalne ko zamaana paagalpan samajhta hai.

Posts: 16243
Member Since: Feb 2010


View Profile WWW
«Reply #5 on: April 27, 2012, 01:59:08 PM »
Reply with quote
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
bahut bahut khoob Amit ji.... bahut khoob likha hai aapne....!!!
Logged
dolly
Guest
«Reply #6 on: April 27, 2012, 03:50:08 PM »
Reply with quote
waaaaaaah waaaaaah amitjiii...bahut khoob....verrry good....bdiya....
Logged
deepika_divya
Guest
«Reply #7 on: April 27, 2012, 03:58:23 PM »
Reply with quote
Kya baat hai Bahoot Bahoot Khoob LIkha hai

Think Positive ! Don't Loose hope !
Logged
mann.mann
Yoindian Shayar
******

Rau: 113
Offline Offline

Waqt Bitaya:
22 days, 12 hours and 36 minutes.
Posts: 3703
Member Since: Aug 2011


View Profile
«Reply #8 on: April 28, 2012, 03:31:21 AM »
Reply with quote
bahut khub meetji
Logged
amit_prakash_meet
Guest
«Reply #9 on: April 28, 2012, 05:55:03 AM »
Reply with quote
Thank you Saini Ji
bahut khoob
Logged
amit_prakash_meet
Guest
«Reply #10 on: April 28, 2012, 10:02:28 AM »
Reply with quote
Thanks a lot goldy ji
Bahut khoob kaha Meet Ji, kaabil-e-daad
Logged
amit_prakash_meet
Guest
«Reply #11 on: April 28, 2012, 06:29:52 PM »
Reply with quote
Many many thanks Hriday Ji, God bless you
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
bahut bahut khoob Amit ji.... bahut khoob likha hai aapne....!!!

Logged
amit_prakash_meet
Guest
«Reply #12 on: April 28, 2012, 07:18:52 PM »
Reply with quote
Thanks a lot Dolly Ji for your overwhelming quotes
waaaaaaah waaaaaah amitjiii...bahut khoob....verrry good....bdiya....
Logged
amit_prakash_meet
Guest
«Reply #13 on: April 29, 2012, 02:30:45 PM »
Reply with quote
Many many thanks Nysha Ji, I always believe in positivity of life coz "WHAT EVER GOD DOES IS BETTERMENT FOR US"
Kya baat hai Bahoot Bahoot Khoob LIkha hai

Think Positive ! Don't Loose hope !
Logged
iAdmin
Administrator
Yoindian Shayar
*****

Rau: 14
Offline Offline

Waqt Bitaya:
49 days, 23 hours and 12 minutes.

Posts: 3125
Member Since: Dec 2003


View Profile
«Reply #14 on: April 30, 2012, 06:58:08 AM »
Reply with quote
Congratulations..

This work has been featured in Yoindia Shayariadab April 2012 newsletter. You may read more about it HERE.

Logged
Pages: [1] 2  All
ReplyPrint
Jump to:  

+ Quick Reply
With a Quick-Reply you can use bulletin board code and smileys as you would in a normal post, but much more conveniently.


Get Yoindia Updates in Email.

Enter your email address:

Ask any question to expert on eTI community..
Welcome, Guest. Please login or register.
Did you miss your activation email?
March 28, 2024, 01:10:59 PM

Login with username, password and session length
Recent Replies
by ASIF
[March 24, 2024, 04:34:54 AM]

by ASIF
[March 24, 2024, 04:30:44 AM]

by ASIF
[March 24, 2024, 04:26:39 AM]

by ASIF
[March 23, 2024, 08:50:46 AM]

[March 21, 2024, 08:02:59 PM]

[March 21, 2024, 07:59:38 PM]

[March 17, 2024, 02:01:29 PM]

[March 16, 2024, 03:26:05 PM]

[March 16, 2024, 03:25:04 PM]

[March 16, 2024, 03:21:26 PM]
Yoindia Shayariadab Copyright © MGCyber Group All Rights Reserved
Terms of Use| Privacy Policy Powered by PHP MySQL SMF© Simple Machines LLC
Page created in 0.182 seconds with 24 queries.
[x] Join now community of 8502 Real Poets and poetry admirer