~*~aaj unhe bebas saa paaya meine~*~:Shayri for Dard -e- Judai

kaushikbhawna008

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Mujhko bhula denge jo dawaa kiya karte the
Aaj unhe bebas saa paaya meine

Kehte the jo na naam hamara na lenge kabhi
Unki aawaz mei ek dard suna meine

Gurur tha jinko ki hai saath unke ye saari duniya
Unhi k khayalo mei bhi unhe tanha paaya meine

Najaro mei jinke shohrat k siwa kuch na tha kabhi
Khudki nigahon mei unko sharminda paaya meine

Bhale wo kehte rhe k unko hamse kabhi mohobbat na thi
Par meri yaadon se lipat kar aaj unhe rota paaya meine


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Re: ~*~aaj unhe bebas saa paaya meine~*~

«Reply #1 on: May 29, 2009, 04:37:47 AM »

Wah Kya Baat hai Bhawna.. Waqai Mohabbat Me Kisi Ko Bhulaana Itna aasan nahi hota.. Aur Is Such Ko aapne Bakhoobi Pesh kiya Hai..!!

Bhale wo kehte rhe k unko hamse kabhi mohobbat na thi
Par meri yaadon se lipat kar aaj unhe rota paaya meine

aur Yeh Last Jumla to Waqai Behad Khoob Likha Hai.. Lajawab Peshkash hai. Bahbut Bahut khooooooooooob... Applause

**~** Mann **~**


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kaushikbhawna008

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Re: ~*~aaj unhe bebas saa paaya meine~*~

«Reply #2 on: May 29, 2009, 05:08:57 AM »

bohut bohut shukriya mann ji

bilkul shi hai mann ji ki mohobbat mei kisi ko bhulana itna aasaan nahi hota ...........

tadap dil ki meri yahi kehti hai
ki dil k kisi kone mei unke mohobaat abhi baaki hai
yu hi nahi machal uth.ta hai dil mera
unke aagosh mei dam nikle mera ye hasrat abhi baaki hai


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Re: ~*~aaj unhe bebas saa paaya meine~*~

«Reply #3 on: May 29, 2009, 05:28:31 AM »

Quote from: kaushikbhawna008 on May 26, 2009, 11:04:40 AM

Quote from: kaushikbhawna008 on May 29, 2009, 05:08:57 AM

bilkul shi hai mann ji ki mohobbat mei kisi ko bhulana itna aasaan nahi hota ...........

tadap dil ki meri yahi kehti hai
ki dil k kisi kone mei unke mohobaat abhi baaki hai
yu hi nahi machal uth.ta hai dil mera
unke aagosh mei dam nikle mera ye hasrat abhi baaki hai

Bahut Bahut Khoob BhawnaJi..
Bahut Hi Khoobsurat Peshkash


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Re: ~*~aaj unhe bebas saa paaya meine~*~

«Reply #4 on: May 29, 2009, 07:08:00 AM »

Quote from: kaushikbhawna008 on May 29, 2009, 05:08:57 AM

Wah Kya Baat Hai Bhawna Ji.. Bahut khooooooob..!!

Dil Kahata hai Uske Pahaloo Me Simat Ke Raha Jaun,
Tadap Kar Uski Baahon Me, Khud Ko Bhula Ke Raha Jaun....

Ek Hasrat Bas Yehi Hai Baaqi, Is Naadaan-e-Dil Ki,
Wo Apna to Kahe Ek baar, Main Us Pe Qurbaan Ho Ke Raha Jaun...!!!

**~** Mann **~**


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kaushikbhawna008

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Re: ~*~aaj unhe bebas saa paaya meine~*~

«Reply #5 on: May 29, 2009, 08:41:01 AM »

Quote from: khwaish on May 29, 2009, 05:28:31 AM

Bahut Bahut Khoob BhawnaJi..
Bahut Hi Khoobsurat Peshkash

bohut bohut shukriya khwaish ji notworthy


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kaushikbhawna008

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Re: ~*~aaj unhe bebas saa paaya meine~*~

«Reply #6 on: May 29, 2009, 08:45:14 AM »

Quote from: Mann on May 29, 2009, 07:08:00 AM

wonderfull lines mann ji Applause

gar wo ruth jaate to ham unhe manaate
har naaz unke ham haskar uthaate

kehte to sahi do shabd hamse inkaar k hi chaahe
ham khayalo se bhi unke durr chale jaate


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Talat

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Re: ~*~aaj unhe bebas saa paaya meine~*~

«Reply #7 on: May 29, 2009, 10:31:39 AM »

Bohot Khoob Bhawna Applause

Nice reply, Mann Ji Applause


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kaushikbhawna008

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Re: ~*~aaj unhe bebas saa paaya meine~*~

«Reply #8 on: May 29, 2009, 10:33:59 AM »

thnk u so much celmira ji


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Re: ~*~aaj unhe bebas saa paaya meine~*~

«Reply #9 on: June 01, 2009, 07:50:57 AM »

Shukriya Talat Ji.. Usual Smile

**~** Mann **~**


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madhuwesh

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Re: ~*~aaj unhe bebas saa paaya meine~*~

«Reply #10 on: June 01, 2009, 07:57:36 AM »

very very nice and beautiful,Bhawna ji ana Mann ji. Clapping Smiley


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Re: ~*~aaj unhe bebas saa paaya meine~*~

«Reply #11 on: June 01, 2009, 08:06:39 AM »

Quote from: kaushikbhawna008 on May 29, 2009, 08:45:14 AM

wonderfull lines mann ji Applause

gar wo ruth jaate to ham unhe manaate
har naaz unke ham haskar uthaate

kehte to sahi do shabd hamse inkaar k hi chaahe
ham khayalo se bhi unke durr chale jaate

Shukriya Madhu Ji.. Usual Smile

Wah Kya Baat hai Bhawna.. Bahut Bahut Khooooooob.. Applause

Har Tamanna-e-Ishq Ko Is Dil Me, Dafna Gai Tu,
Apni Yaad Ko Bhi Is Dil Se Sanam, Mita Gai Tu....

Par Aankhen Tere Aaj Bhi Deedar Ko Tarasti Hain,
Kyun Apni Tasveer In Aankhon Me, Basa Gai Tu.....!!

**~** Mann **~**


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salil2002

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Re: ~*~aaj unhe bebas saa paaya meine~*~

«Reply #12 on: June 01, 2009, 08:10:11 AM »

bahut achche bhawna dear and mann bhai

zuda hone k baad kabhi mujhe teri yaad na aayi
mein har shaam isi khayal mein tujhe yaad karta hoon
yeh soch leta hoon kii bhula diya hai tujhe maine
apni shaam ko is tarah tabaah kiya karta hoon


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