Aane wala kal..

by nashwani on June 23, 2013, 08:12:39 AM
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Band ankho.N me paas mere har pal hai,,
    Khuli jo ankhe.N tu ojhal hai, tu ojhal hai..

Meri zindagi ka saveraa kaha.N hai tu,,
    Dekho phir shaam yaha.N aaj rahi dhal hai..

Mil jata hai har kisi ko ek saathi,,
    Magar yaar dil me to basi ek teri shakal hai..

Na milte tujhse to kuchh kho dete,,
    Ab saath hansti-rulaati yado.N ka daldal hai..

Tanhai me jeena thoda kathin hai,,
    Tere ehsaaso.N ke saath jeena zara saral hai..

Haqeeqat me raste judaa hain apne,,
    Par khwabo.N me tera mera ikk mahal hai..

Aaj poora sa lagta hun main,,
    Adhoora mera aane wala kal hai..

Khuda muqaddar ka malik hai,,
    Meri chahat pe na uska dakhal hai..!!! Ñ
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«Reply #1 on: June 23, 2013, 08:17:58 AM »
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Wow Its Simply Beautiful ji................
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«Reply #2 on: June 23, 2013, 08:23:03 AM »
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Bahut Khoob.
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«Reply #3 on: June 23, 2013, 08:38:40 AM »
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Wow Its Simply Beautiful ji................
Shukriya bhupinder jee..happy9
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«Reply #4 on: June 23, 2013, 08:40:35 AM »
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Bahut Khoob.
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Dhanyawaad ravi jee..happy9
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Dhanyawaad ravi jee..happy9
Ur Welcome Ji.
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«Reply #6 on: June 23, 2013, 09:27:09 AM »
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«Reply #7 on: June 23, 2013, 02:31:12 PM »
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«Reply #8 on: June 23, 2013, 05:35:00 PM »
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waah nashwani ji. bahut hi khoobsurat ghazal kahi hai aapne. bahut bahut dili daad daad daad.

Na milte tujhse to kuchh kho dete,,
    Ab saath hansti-rulaati yado.N ka daldal hai..

Tanhai me jeena thoda kathin hai,,
    Tere ehsaaso.N ke saath jeena zara saral hai..

Haqeeqat me raste judaa hain apne,,
    Par khwabo.N me tera mera ikk mahal hai..

superb... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #9 on: June 23, 2013, 09:03:16 PM »
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gud
Ty..
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«Reply #10 on: June 23, 2013, 09:03:59 PM »
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Thankyou !
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«Reply #11 on: June 23, 2013, 09:04:43 PM »
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waah nashwani ji. bahut hi khoobsurat ghazal kahi hai aapne. bahut bahut dili daad daad daad.

Na milte tujhse to kuchh kho dete,,
    Ab saath hansti-rulaati yado.N ka daldal hai..

Tanhai me jeena thoda kathin hai,,
    Tere ehsaaso.N ke saath jeena zara saral hai..

Haqeeqat me raste judaa hain apne,,
    Par khwabo.N me tera mera ikk mahal hai..

superb... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Thankyou ! very much aqsh jee..happy9
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«Reply #12 on: June 23, 2013, 09:26:51 PM »
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Bahaut khoob Nashwani ji ... Soz e ulfat ka zinda bayaan
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«Reply #13 on: June 24, 2013, 12:54:39 AM »
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Bahaut khoob Nashwani ji ... Soz e ulfat ka zinda bayaan

Bahut Dhanyawaad zarraa sahab..happy9
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«Reply #14 on: June 25, 2013, 09:53:44 PM »
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waah waah waah waah Nashwani ji... aapke har poem me ek alag aanand aataa hai... bahut achchaa likhte hain aap... achchaa lagaa padh ke....!!!
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