Aapke khwaab me

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Aapke khwaab me humne din guzaar diye
Har lamha mile jo aapse panno par utaar liye
Kuchh baaten toh chhoti thi,jo aapne na tauli thi
Wo sab humne apne yaadon me sambhaal liye
Kuchh baaton me wajan tha,kuchh kisson me tadap the
Kuchh milne ki baaten,kuchh naa milne ki hidaayaten
Saari baaton se humne aaj apne dil ko pareshaan kiye
Aapke khwaab me humne din guzaar diye

Saari nishaaniyan mit gayi, saare lamhe chhut gaye
Naa gaya toh wo silsila yaadon ka
Jo aankho me bas gaye
Aapke khwaab me humne din guzaar diye
Har lamha mile jo aapse panno par utaar liye
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«Reply #1 on: November 08, 2012, 10:51:26 PM »
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waaaah ek rau apka
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«Reply #2 on: November 09, 2012, 12:03:27 AM »
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bahut khoob vimmi ji... Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: November 09, 2012, 06:03:42 AM »
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wah wah Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: November 09, 2012, 06:15:56 AM »
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«Reply #5 on: November 09, 2012, 07:38:11 AM »
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Vimmi ji bahot hi sunder likha hai aapne. Ye lines to dil ko chhu gai - Kuchh batein to choti thi.....
Daad pesh hai.
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«Reply #6 on: November 09, 2012, 08:04:08 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
beautiful lines
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«Reply #7 on: November 09, 2012, 11:40:51 AM »
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waaaah ek rau apka
bahut bahut shukriya saahill ji aapka...........  Usual Smile Usual Smile
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«Reply #8 on: November 09, 2012, 11:46:02 AM »
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bahut khoob vimmi ji... Applause Applause

bahut bahut shukriya nishi ji.... Usual Smile Usual Smile
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wah wah Applause Applause
bahut bahut shukriya nandbahu ji...
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«Reply #10 on: November 09, 2012, 08:54:18 PM »
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beautiful

aapka bahut shukriya saini sir ji.......  Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile
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«Reply #11 on: November 12, 2012, 05:29:53 PM »
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very very nice Vimmy jee
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«Reply #12 on: November 12, 2012, 05:34:52 PM »
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Aapke khwaab me humne din guzaar diye
Har lamha mile jo aapse panno par utaar liye
Kuchh baaten toh chhoti thi,jo aapne na tauli thi
Wo sab humne apne yaadon me sambhaal liye
Kuchh baaton me wajan tha,kuchh kisson me tadap the
Kuchh milne ki baaten,kuchh naa milne ki hidaayaten
Saari baaton se humne aaj apne dil ko pareshaan kiye
Aapke khwaab me humne din guzaar diye

Saari nishaaniyan mit gayi, saare lamhe chhut gaye
Naa gaya toh wo silsila yaadon ka
Jo aankho me bas gaye
Aapke khwaab me humne din guzaar diye
Har lamha mile jo aapse panno par utaar liye
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«Reply #13 on: November 15, 2012, 11:40:48 PM »
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Vimmi ji bahot hi sunder likha hai aapne. Ye lines to dil ko chhu gai - Kuchh batein to choti thi.....
Daad pesh hai.

bahut bahut shukriya Riyaz Ashna ji........
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«Reply #14 on: November 15, 2012, 11:46:41 PM »
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 Crying
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
beautiful lines

bahut bahut shukriya aqsh ji........
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