Aas

by thycreator on January 09, 2005, 11:48:19 AM
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«Reply #15 on: May 07, 2005, 09:26:20 AM »
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Aaj bhi iss aas mein baithe hai hum wo aayega ik din,
Har ek saans bas issi ummeed pa hi aati jati hai,
Koi toh usko batlaye ki uske liye hi hum jinda hai,
Warna judai ki ye raatein toh dil ko cheer jati hai.


bahut achhe THY............
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«Reply #16 on: May 09, 2005, 01:38:33 AM »
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Aaj bhi iss aas mein baithe hai hum wo aayega ik din,
Har ek saans bas issi ummeed pa hi aati jati hai,
Koi toh usko batlaye ki uske liye hi hum jinda hai,
Warna judai ki ye raatein toh dil ko cheer jati hai.


bahut achhe THY............


Thanx Bond ji...........kuch aap bhi likhte!!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #17 on: May 09, 2005, 03:15:28 AM »
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Bohat khoob thycreator......

Tamaam Umr Jiye Aur Kuch Na Kar Paye
Kisi Ke ho Kar Rahe Aur Na Apna Kar Paye
Zamaana Uske Hawaaley Se Yaad Karta Hai
Keh Jis Se Apne Sitaarey Kabhi Na Mil Paye ....
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«Reply #18 on: May 10, 2005, 12:55:34 PM »
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Bohat khoob thycreator......

Tamaam Umr Jiye Aur Kuch Na Kar Paye
Kisi Ke ho Kar Rahe Aur Na Apna Kar Paye
Zamaana Uske Hawaaley Se Yaad Karta Hai
Keh Jis Se Apne Sitaarey Kabhi Na Mil Paye ....


Thanx Aaryan ji n gud words from you.......
Wo kehte hai jam chod du mai aaj hathon se,
Bade haq se hamare jindagi ka faisla karte hai,
Jane kyu tab nahi socha jab ruswa kiya hame,
Ab toh hamare peene pe bhi aitraz karte hai..
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«Reply #19 on: May 14, 2005, 09:33:30 AM »
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nice ones...sabne bahut achha likha hai...........................
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«Reply #20 on: May 14, 2005, 10:55:31 AM »
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Aaj bhi iss aas mein baithe hai hum wo aayega ik din,
Har ek saans bas issi ummeed pa hi aati jati hai,
Koi toh usko batlaye ki uske liye hi hum jinda hai,
Warna judai ki ye raatein toh dil ko cheer jati hai.


bahut achhe THY............


Thanx Bond ji...........kuch aap bhi likhte!!!!!!!!!!


mausam bhi hai , alam bhi hai mohabbat ka...
bas woh nahi saath, dhokha hai ye kismat ka....
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«Reply #21 on: May 14, 2005, 12:44:45 PM »
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nice ones...sabne bahut achha likha hai...........................


Thanx a lot suave ji.......... tongue3
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«Reply #22 on: May 14, 2005, 01:19:45 PM »
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nice things. everyone has written beautiful words. hats off 2 u guys


Aye khuda tere aage hum ek guzarish karte hain,
unse bas do pal milne ki hum aas rakhte hain,
tu reham karne wala hai, thodi si reham mujhe bhi karde,
duur se hi saahi bas unke ek jhalak ki faryaad karte hain
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«Reply #23 on: May 14, 2005, 01:22:01 PM »
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mausam bhi hai , alam bhi hai mohabbat ka...
bas woh nahi saath, dhokha hai ye kismat ka....


Wah bond........nice one.....
Kismat ka hi toh rona hai jo bhari mehfil mein tanha hai,
Gar wo sath hota toh veerane mein bhi mehfil sajate hum..
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«Reply #24 on: May 14, 2005, 01:25:43 PM »
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nice things. everyone has written beautiful words. hats off 2 you guys


Aye khuda tere aage hum ek guzarish karte hain,
unse bas do pal milne ki hum aas rakhte hain,
tu reham karne wala hai, thodi si reham mujhe bhi karde,
duur se hi saahi bas unke ek jhalak ki faryaad karte hain


wah awais ji........bahut khoob...........
Khuda se kyu ki fariyad, usko itna waqt hi kahan hai,
Apne mehboob se kehte toh shayad kuch bat bhi banti,
Tumhare pyar ki garmi se pighal jati wo mom si,
Tumhari ek nazar se hi wo kali se phool si khilti...
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«Reply #25 on: May 14, 2005, 01:55:18 PM »
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Nice creator ji

gar mere mehboob ko main yeh baat keh sakte
tou main kuhda se yeh fariyaad na karta
woh tou masroof hai apni zindagi main
woh hoti tou main bas unhi do dekhta rehta
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«Reply #26 on: May 14, 2005, 01:58:47 PM »
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hey guys the last line should b read as

"woh hoti tou main bas unhi ko dekhta rehta"

sorry 4r the typo error
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«Reply #27 on: May 15, 2005, 04:16:32 AM »
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Nice creator ji

gar mere mehboob ko main yeh baat keh sakte
tou main kuhda se yeh fariyaad na karta
woh tou masroof hai apni zindagi main
woh hoti tou main bas unhi do dekhta rehta


Wah awais ji..........waise aap apne post ko edit karke apni galati sudhar sakte the.......jarurat nahi thi ek aur post ki..........
Uski masroofiyat ko tum jano, uske bhi dil ko tum pehchano,
Gar pyar hai toh keh do,samader mein utaro,sahil ki khak na chano..
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«Reply #28 on: May 15, 2005, 01:42:08 PM »
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Nice creator ji

gar mere mehboob ko main yeh baat keh sakte
tou main kuhda se yeh fariyaad na karta
woh tou masroof hai apni zindagi main
woh hoti tou main bas unhi do dekhta rehta


Wah awais ji..........waise aap apne post ko edit karke apni galati sudhar sakte the.......jarurat nahi thi ek aur post ki..........
Uski masroofiyat ko tum jano, uske bhi dil ko tum pehchano,
Gar pyar hai toh keh do,samader mein utaro,sahil ki khak na chano..
thk u creator ji
i am new here so u can say still finding my feet in this forum.  :wink:

kaash uski masroofiyat ko main jaan sakta,
kaash mere dil ki tadap woh pehchaan sakta,
hua nahi kabhi mumkin unse izhaar-e-mohabbat karna,
kaash kabhi woh meri khamoshiyon ka sabab jaan sakta
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«Reply #29 on: May 17, 2005, 12:37:06 AM »
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koi tumhe itna chahe toh batana
koi tumhara dard mithaye toh batana
kpoi tumhara naaz uthaye to batana
dosti kar toh lega har koi
hamari tarha nibhaye toh batana
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