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by thycreator on January 09, 2005, 11:48:19 AM
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Unki hi ek ada thi ye, jisne iss dil ko dhadkaya,
Wo ruth gaye jis pal mujhse, har pal ne dil ko tadpaya.
Unke liye  bas ek khel tha ye, har kali magar jhukne si lagi,
Wo kya ruthe ek pal mujhse, bas sans meri rukne si lagi.

Koi jakar unse ye kahe, koi jakar ye batlaye,
Unke dum se hi dunia hai,koi unke ye samjhaye.
Unse hi humne hansna seekha, unse hi toh dil mein rangat hai,
Unse hi hai jana pyar hai kya, kya wafa hui kya ulfat hai.

Gar tanha hi rakhna tha hame, kyu iss dil mein yu aas bhari,
Kyu sapne saare dikhlaye,kyu kar di dunia hari bhari.
Ab tanhayi hai, ashq bhi hai, hum bas zakhmo ko seete hai,
Wo aayenge iss aas mein hi, hum sansein lete jeete hai.
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«Reply #1 on: January 09, 2005, 04:42:59 PM »
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wahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh bohot hi acha likha apne !!!!!!!!!!!!!!

aas unke ane ki hi to hai jiske lyie hum jeete hai,
mehendi mere khoon ki to hai, jo woh apne haaton me lagaye baithe hai!
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«Reply #2 on: January 09, 2005, 05:17:50 PM »
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Meena Ji
 
    Sahi kaha hai apne
   
    Humko bhi toh bas uss din ka hi intezaar hai,
    Jab rang jaiga unki jindagi, khoone jigar mera.
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«Reply #3 on: January 09, 2005, 05:20:22 PM »
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wah!!!!!!

dua karo unke liye jo chod ke apko is haal me,
na guzaro apni zindagi bewafa aur wafa ke sawal me!

 :D
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«Reply #4 on: January 09, 2005, 05:44:49 PM »
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Gud meena jee,
 
     Sawalon se bhag kar jiya toh kya jiya maine,
     Jawabon ki talash hi toh jindagi ka mayana raha.
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«Reply #5 on: January 09, 2005, 05:58:51 PM »
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wahhhhh!

un jawabo ka kya faida jo dukh de tumko,
un tasaliyon ka kya faida jo phir bhi na jeene de tumko!
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«Reply #6 on: January 09, 2005, 06:15:17 PM »
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Har kam jahan fayde nuksan ke liye kiya gaya,
     Aise bazar mein hum jindagi bechte nahi!!!
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«Reply #7 on: January 09, 2005, 06:27:46 PM »
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wahhhhhhhhhhhhh creator ji u r tooooooooooo gud!!!!! aab iska jawab koi nahin mere pas! but i love ur shayari!

 :D
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«Reply #8 on: January 09, 2005, 06:32:59 PM »
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Apke iss aakhiri bat ke jawab ka bhi man hai, par kya karu, kal se working day hai aur mai abhi tak lab mein hi hu. Kal milte hai agar apke pas time raha toh. Take care!!!
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«Reply #9 on: January 09, 2005, 06:34:39 PM »
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wahhhhhhhh kea baat hai ......meena and creator



diya jo dil tou liya dard is kay badlay mein
tammam umer yehi karobar hum nay kiya
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«Reply #10 on: January 09, 2005, 06:49:09 PM »
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Apke iss aakhiri bat ke jawab ka bhi man hai, par kya karu, kal se working day hai aur mai abhi tak lab mein hi hu. Kal milte hai agar apke pas time raha toh. Take care!!!


sure, i will wait for it! take care dost!
 :D
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«Reply #11 on: January 09, 2005, 06:50:39 PM »
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wahhhhhhhh kea baat hai ......meena and creator



diya jo dil tou liya dard is kay badlay mein
tammam umer yehi karobar hum nay kiya


thanxxxxxxx arifa sis!!!!!!  :D

dil ke badle dil mila,
wafa ke badle dard mila,
is ajnabi duniya me to
pyar ke badle sirf sitam mila!
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«Reply #12 on: January 09, 2005, 07:02:52 PM »
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bahot khoob MeenaJi and ArifaJi

Main kab tak sahun is dard e dil ko
bas ab aur tera intezaar karna nahi
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«Reply #13 on: January 10, 2005, 03:35:04 PM »
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thanx heart  :D

nice one!
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«Reply #14 on: May 07, 2005, 05:34:10 AM »
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Aaj bhi iss aas mein baithe hai hum wo aayega ik din,
Har ek saans bas issi ummeed pa hi aati jati hai,
Koi toh usko batlaye ki uske liye hi hum jinda hai,
Warna judai ki ye raatein toh dil ko cheer jati hai.
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