saahill
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apne gham mein mera ab pal pal kho raha hai
aankhien to sookhi hain par dil to ro raha hai
kya batlaoun ab main apne dil ka haal kisi se
mera to sab kuch is dunya se jaise dhoor ho raha hai
seene mein dafan karke main gham kaise jee raha hoon
ek ek gham ab to meri saanson ko maar raha hai
zakham dil par jo lage hain unke saath jee raha hoon
ab dard se mera rishta hi bas apna lag raha hai
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«Reply #1 on: February 03, 2011, 12:10:21 PM » |
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apne gham mein mera ab pal pal kho raha hai
aankhien to sookhi hain par dil to ro raha hai
kya batlaoun ab main apne dil ka haal kisi se
mera to sab kuch is dunya se jaise dhoor ho raha hai
seene mein dafan karke main gham kaise jee raha hoon
ek ek gham ab to meri saanson ko maar raha hai
zakham dil par jo lage hain unke saath jee raha hoon
ab dard se mera rishta hi bas apna lag raha hai
nice one dear waise kuch line bhut achi lagi likhty rahiye khushi ke sath rahiye dard to hazar hai |
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saahill
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«Reply #2 on: February 03, 2011, 12:15:12 PM » |
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thx rahi ji apka hausla afzayee ka
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«Reply #3 on: February 03, 2011, 12:24:42 PM » |
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thx rahi ji apka hausla afzayee ka
ji mai housala kahan se dunga mai to khud duniya se dara hua hu kabhi mila tha koi ham safar mujhko b aaj uske judai ke gam se mara hua hu |
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«Reply #4 on: February 03, 2011, 12:33:36 PM » |
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judaai ka gham hi aisa hota hai sahaa nahin jaata
dard aisa hota hai ke kaam kiya nahin jaata
tarhpta hai dil akele mein tanhayee mein
chahkar bhi yeh dard kisi se kaha nahin jaata
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«Reply #5 on: February 03, 2011, 12:40:12 PM » |
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judaai ka gham hi aisa hota hai sahaa nahin jaata
dard aisa hota hai ke kaam kiya nahin jaata
tarhpta hai dil akele mein tanhayee mein
chahkar bhi yeh dard kisi se kaha nahin jaata
kar to deta hu bayan mai apne dardon ko shabdon me badal deta hu mai apne dardon ko kabhi ro leta hu tanhai me akela baith kar kabhi hansta hu aur jalata hu dardon ko |
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«Reply #7 on: February 03, 2011, 02:44:38 PM » |
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wah sahilji... dard ka bahut gahara ehsas hai aapki rachana main
bahut khub
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«Reply #8 on: February 03, 2011, 02:58:32 PM » |
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saahill
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«Reply #9 on: February 03, 2011, 03:10:10 PM » |
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thx manjum ji and koyal ji
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«Reply #10 on: February 03, 2011, 03:14:19 PM » |
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shaadi jo hogi dard se to jindagi kaisi hogi
zakhmon ka hoga bistar our khoon ki khushboo hogi
toote dil ka hoga asshyan our kanto ka bistar hoga
gehri chot se mera ek naya rishta bana hoga
main our mera dard dono our tanhayee hogi
aise hi to dard se shaadi kareke meri jindagi hogi
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«Reply #11 on: February 03, 2011, 03:26:12 PM » |
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Good reply Saahill ji........ shaadi jo hogi dard se to jindagi kaisi hogi
zakhmon ka hoga bistar our khoon ki khushboo hogi
toote dil ka hoga asshyan our kanto ka bistar hoga
gehri chot se mera ek naya rishta bana hoga
main our mera dard dono our tanhayee hogi
aise hi to dard se shaadi kareke meri jindagi hogi
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«Reply #12 on: February 03, 2011, 03:28:09 PM » |
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tere uljhey hue sawaal ka jawaab de raha hoon
dil par jo zakham hai unka hisaab de raha hoon
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«Reply #13 on: February 03, 2011, 04:14:51 PM » |
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wahhhhhhhh saahil ji kyakehne bht khubb ji yunhi likhte rahiye
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«Reply #14 on: February 03, 2011, 04:17:05 PM » |
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thx dear
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