ab qAsM yEh BHeE uuthAa leNge hAm,........

by laaiba on September 17, 2013, 12:58:00 AM
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jab diloN main doorian badhtee hain toh mohabbat kahin door apne hoNe per bhee sharamsaar hotee hai ,...kaash mohabbat main aise maqaam kabhee naa ayeN joh aa jate hain haadse ban kar,,,


dar.d se dil ko sajaa deNgen hAm
jaa sanam tum ko bhulaa deNgen hAm
 
joh  likhaa thaa naa.m dil par teiRaa
aa.j uss ko hee mitaa deNgen hAm
 
joh diye hain zakh.m tum ne jaaNaa
un ko seeNey se lagaa leNgen hAm,

too.t ker barsaa hai gham kaa baadal
uss men yaaden sab bahaa deNge hAm

raakh ho chuukaa mohabbat men dil
khat vo saare bhee jalaa deNge hAm
 
raastey  sab hee badal chukey jub
ab jahan apNaa basaa leNge hAm,...

ab to nafrat  hee karen gen tum se
yun hi ab khud ko sazaa denge hAm,

yaa.d  bhoole se na aaye teiiRee,....
ab qasam yeh bhee uthaa leNge hAm
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«Reply #1 on: September 17, 2013, 01:02:26 AM »
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wah wah wah wah laaiba ji behad umda lajwab gazal bahut hee khubsurat dard sa labalab qalaam hazaron dilii daad o mubarakbad qabul karein...

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«Reply #2 on: September 17, 2013, 01:16:07 AM »
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Quote from: soudagar on September 17, 2013, 01:02:26 AM
wah wah wah wah laaiba ji behad umda lajwab gazal bahut hee khubsurat dard sa labalab qalaam hazaron dilii daad o mubarakbad qabul karein...

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bohat bohat shuqria soudagar ji ,...............
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«Reply #3 on: September 17, 2013, 02:26:30 AM »
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Quote from: laaiba on September 17, 2013, 12:58:00 AM

jab diloN main doorian badhtee hain toh mohabbat kahin door apne hoNe per bhee sharamsaar hotee hai ,...kaash mohabbat main aise maqaam kabhee naa ayeN joh aa jate hain haadse ban kar,,,


dar.d se dil ko sajaa deNgen hAm
jaa sanam tum ko bhulaa deNgen hAm
 
joh  likhaa thaa naa.m dil par teiRaa
aa.j uss ko hee mitaa deNgen hAm
 
joh diye hain zakh.m tum ne jaaNaa
un ko seeNey se lagaa leNgen hAm,

too.t ker barsaa hai gham kaa baadal
uss men yaaden sab bahaa deNge hAm

raakh ho chuukaa mohabbat men dil
khat vo saare bhee jalaa deNge hAm
 
raastey  sab hee badal chukey jub
ab jahan apNaa basaa leNge hAm,...

ab to nafrat  hee karen gen tum se
yun hi ab khud ko sazaa denge hAm,

yaa.d  bhoole se na aaye teiiRee,....
ab qasam yeh bhee uthaa leNge hAm



Bahut Bahut Aur Bahut Khoooooob Laaiba Ji...!!!!!!

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Har Lafz Dard Ki Ek Dastaan kehta Hua...Par Jab kissi Se Mohabbat Ho Jaaye Ussi Se Nafrat Karna Naa-Mumkin Sa Ho Jaata Hai...Isliye Yeh Saza To Khud Ko Koi Bhi Naa De Payega..
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«Reply #4 on: September 17, 2013, 02:38:56 AM »
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waah waah waaah waah..

kya kehne laaiba jee..

behad umda..laajawab..

Dhero dhero daad..happy9
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«Reply #5 on: September 17, 2013, 03:29:13 AM »
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«Reply #6 on: September 17, 2013, 11:45:00 AM »
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 bahut khoob 
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main bhi kahta hoon
Jise kadar na ho hamare pyar ki Usko bhula dena achha
Mohabat men agar rona pade to mohabat na karna achha
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«Reply #7 on: September 17, 2013, 01:39:29 PM »
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«Reply #8 on: September 17, 2013, 04:00:05 PM »
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aap sabhee kaa shukria,.............
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«Reply #9 on: September 17, 2013, 06:00:34 PM »
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Quote from: laaiba on September 17, 2013, 12:58:00 AM

jab diloN main doorian badhtee hain toh mohabbat kahin door apne hoNe per bhee sharamsaar hotee hai ,...kaash mohabbat main aise maqaam kabhee naa ayeN joh aa jate hain haadse ban kar,,,


dar.d se dil ko sajaa deNgen hAm
jaa sanam tum ko bhulaa deNgen hAm
 superb Applause Applause
joh  likhaa thaa naa.m dil par teiRaa
aa.j uss ko hee mitaa deNgen hAm
 waah waah Applause Applause
joh diye hain zakh.m tum ne jaaNaa
un ko seeNey se lagaa leNgen hAm,
touchy Thumbs UP
too.t ker barsaa hai gham kaa baadal
uss men yaaden sab bahaa deNge hAm
is per ek RAU Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
raakh ho chuukaa mohabbat men dil
khat vo saare bhee jalaa deNge hAm
 bohut achhe
raastey  sab hee badal chukey jub
ab jahan apNaa basaa leNge hAm,...
waah waah
ab to nafrat  hee karen gen tum se
yun hi ab khud ko sazaa denge hAm,
khoob kaha hai
yaa.d  bhoole se na aaye teiiRee,....
ab qasam yeh bhee uthaa leNge hAm
aisi qasam mat khana.

waah waah laaiba ji bohut umda ghazal  likhi hai apne,
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pyaar me expectations badh jatein hain,
aur dard jab hi hota hai jab expectations toot jate hain,

So less trust n expectations ,meri tarha,


comeon no more hardships  aapse ek semi-romantic ghazal sunege.
aaj RAU kisi aur ko dediya hai 8 hrs tak ni de sakta ,
apka RAU kal tak ke liye mujhpe udhar raha.

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«Reply #10 on: September 17, 2013, 06:23:41 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #11 on: September 17, 2013, 07:22:00 PM »
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Quote from: sahal on September 17, 2013, 06:00:34 PM

waah waah laaiba ji bohut umda ghazal  likhi hai apne,
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
pyaar me expectations badh jatein hain,
aur dard jab hi hota hai jab expectations toot jate hain,

So less trust n expectations ,meri tarha,


comeon no more hardships  aapse ek semi-romantic ghazal sunege.
aaj RAU kisi aur ko dediya hai 8 hrs tak ni de sakta ,
apka RAU kal tak ke liye mujhpe udhar raha.


shuqria sahal aapkaa, rau ke liye bhi our tafseelee raaye ke liye bhee,....... Usual Smile
jald hi ishq mein doobi ghazal share karoon gee :)ab to karni hee padegii Usual Smile
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«Reply #12 on: September 17, 2013, 08:08:12 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Thumbs UP Thumbs UP
Waaaaaaah waaaaaaaah waaaaaaaah laaiba ji.. badi hi pyaari peshkash rahi.. kya khoob ashaar hai.. sabhi achche hai par mujhe yeh do ashaar bahut pasand aaye

too.t ker barsaa hai gham kaa baadal
uss men yaaden sab bahaa deNge hAm

raakh ho chuukaa mohabbat men dil
khat vo saare bhee jalaa deNge hAm
  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #13 on: September 17, 2013, 08:16:23 PM »
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Dilqash Shayari,Bahut Khoob.
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«Reply #14 on: September 18, 2013, 02:16:00 AM »
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bohat shuqria aap sabhee kaa,.............
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