Ansu behene ko...

by brokenbyluv on February 17, 2010, 09:13:46 PM
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Aaj ek udasi dekhi maine uske chehre pe,
jaise tadap raha tha vo mujhse kuch kehne ko,

maine pucha bhi per vo chup raha,
jane kaun majbur kar raha hai use ye dard sehne ko,

main janti thi merri chahat uska ye haal kar degi,
isliye rok rakha hai khudko har haal mein usse door rehne ko,

uski mayusi bardasht nhi hoti mujhse..
taklif hoti hai mujhe aur machalte hai ansu ankho se behne ko......

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«Reply #1 on: February 17, 2010, 09:20:46 PM »
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thnx shihab ji...
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«Reply #2 on: February 17, 2010, 10:29:12 PM »
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Портал просто супер, порекомендую знакомым!
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madhuwesh
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«Reply #3 on: February 17, 2010, 10:50:00 PM »
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Hats off to you Geet ji.great creation.really touched.
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скандал
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«Reply #4 on: February 18, 2010, 03:53:48 AM »
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вот это позитив) просто класс)
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«Reply #5 on: February 18, 2010, 04:27:14 AM »
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kya baat hai    brokenbyluv ji.......

HAAN UDAASI DEKHI AAJ AAPNE USKE CHEHERE PAR
AUR TADAP RAHA THA JAISE TUMSE KUCH KAHENE KO

YE SACH HAI WO APNI JAAN SE BHI JAADA CHAHATA HAI TUJHKO
LEKIN APNI DIL KI BAAT KABHI KAHE NAHI PAAYENGA WO TUJHKO

USE MALUM HAI TERE DIL ME KISI AUR KA BHI PYAR PAL RAHA HAI
ISILIYE TOH APNI DIL KI BAAT TUJHSE KAHENE SE DAR RAHA HAI

WO JAANTA HAI ISME TERA KASOOR KUCH BHI NAHI HAI
YE NAHI JAANTA KI TERE DIL ME USKE LIYE PYAR HAI KI NAHI HAI 
WO YE MAANTA HAI USKE NASEEB MEIN HI LIKHA HAI "ANSU BEHENE KO"
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«Reply #6 on: February 18, 2010, 07:04:12 AM »
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 Clapping Smiley   Applause   Applause   icon_thumleft
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«Reply #7 on: February 18, 2010, 08:13:17 AM »
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Wah bahut bahut khoob Cara ji,very touching lines.hats off to you.
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«Reply #8 on: February 18, 2010, 10:48:17 AM »
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Wah wah bahaut achhi poem likhi hai BBL Ji. Nice creation. Bravo.
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«Reply #9 on: February 18, 2010, 05:53:12 PM »
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thnx alot madhu ji,think ji,riyaz ji n cara ji...

cara ji bahut khoob likha hai apne...
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«Reply #10 on: February 18, 2010, 06:46:44 PM »
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nice work BBL
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brokenbyluv
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«Reply #11 on: February 18, 2010, 08:33:15 PM »
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thnx alot pooja ji...
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Talat
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«Reply #12 on: February 19, 2010, 02:00:35 PM »
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Aaj ek udasi dekhi maine uske chehre pe,
jaise tadap raha tha vo mujhse kuch kehne ko,

maine pucha bhi per vo chup raha,
jane kaun majbur kar raha hai use ye dard sehne ko,

main janti thi merri chahat uska ye haal kar degi,
isliye rok rakha hai khudko har haal mein usse door rehne ko,

uski mayusi bardasht nhi hoti mujhse..
taklif hoti hai mujhe aur machalte hai ansu ankho se behne ko......



Bohot Khoob BBL ji
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brokenbyluv
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«Reply #13 on: February 20, 2010, 02:50:34 PM »
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Thnx alot celmira ji...
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«Reply #14 on: February 20, 2010, 02:54:42 PM »
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Waah Bahoot Khoob Geet !
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