Apni gazal chod jaunga:Shayri for Dard -e- Judai

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Apni gazal chod jaunga

« on: June 11, 2008, 03:12:09 AM »

Friends this is my first poem so please do give me all your comments:
Tere shaher se main jab apne shaher ko jaunga,apni yadon ke moti teri palkon pe chod jaunga...
yaad aunga shab-o-saher tujhko,bas yahi ek silsila chod jaunga,ashqon se nam karoge jb hamari muskurati tasveer ko,tere nazuk honto pe ek sisak chod jaunga...
jab yaad karoge wo beetey hue khubsurat pal,tere bheegey chehre pe zara si hasi chod jaunga...
aine me jb bhi dekho ge khud ko,tumhare peeche muskrata hua main nazar aunga...jo mehke gee hamesha tmhre badan me,apni khushboo se mahekta tjhe chod jaunga....
jb koi ho bechaini zndgi me kabhi,ankh band karna tera hath thaamey nazar aunga...
aj toot kar chaho mjhe k waqt ki nazakat hai ye,kal na jane main kahan aur kidhar jaunga...
tum samajhte ho "SAMAD" ko koi gham he nahi,sach to yeh hai tere sath apni zindagi chod jaunga....
Na kar paoge juda apne dil se mjhe,tere seeney me ye apni gazal chod jaunga....
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Re: Apni gazal chod jaunga

« Reply #1 on: June 11, 2008, 04:35:35 AM »

nice creation


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hame zindgi se koi shikwa nahi,
koi gila nahi ki wo hamko mila nahi,
jeene k liye unki yaadon ka sahara bohu hai,
koi gam nahi jo wo do kadam saath chala nahi.

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Re: Apni gazal chod jaunga

« Reply #2 on: June 11, 2008, 05:24:08 AM »

Bohat KhuuB

Mai ek din yu hi betab chhor jaaugi
Ke dasht me tujhe be aab chhor jaaugi

Woh khushk aankh bhi royegi meri hijrat par
Mai pat.thro me bhi kuchh aab chhor jaaugi

Mere bagair mukammal na ho sakega jo
Teri kitaab me woh baab chhor jaaugi

Na koi dekh sake khawab phir tere, tujh par
Mai apne hijr ka tezaab chhor jaaugi

chali to jaugi khud leke tishnagi lekin
Mai us ki aankh me sailab chhor jaaugi

Gazal suna k chali jaaugi ~Aansoo~ lekin
Yaha bhi apne kuchh ehbaab chhor jaaugi


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Re: Apni gazal chod jaunga

« Reply #3 on: June 12, 2008, 01:39:32 PM »

Quote from: Heart_throb620 on June 11, 2008, 03:12:09 AM

Accha likha hai aapne Heart Jee


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Bus koi Samjhe Zara...

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Re: Apni gazal chod jaunga

« Reply #4 on: June 12, 2008, 01:40:42 PM »

Quote from: Aansoo on June 11, 2008, 05:24:08 AM

Wah wah bahut accha likha hai aapne Aansoo jee


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Har Dil Main Arman Hotey to hain
Bus koi Samjhe Zara...

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Re: Apni gazal chod jaunga

« Reply #5 on: June 12, 2008, 02:17:24 PM »

Wow........amazing creation Heart_throb620 nd Aansoo !!!


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Re: Apni gazal chod jaunga

« Reply #6 on: June 13, 2008, 01:23:21 PM »

good sharing Sameer ji and nice reply Aansoo ji!!

App dono ka Yoindia mai sawagat hai!!


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