Apni Kismat Khel Ye Kaisa Khilati Hain ... Rishi

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Mein Apni Life Ki Dusri Poem Aap Sabhi Ke Sath Yaha Pe Share Kar Raha Hoon
Ye Poem Bhi Meine 2003 Mein Likhi Thi.. Mujhe Pta Nahi Us Samay Kya Ho Gya Tha
Kisi Ko Dekhkar Na Jane Kha Se Mein Itna Sab Likh Leta Tha..
Ab Ye Poem Aap Sabhi Ke Sath Share Kar Rha Hu.. Shayad Aap Sabhi Ko Pasand Aaye


Apni Kismat Khel Ye Kaisa Khilati Hain Humein
Yaad Us Jalim Ki Rah Rah Kar Satati Hai Humein

Kyu Kaleja Fukati Hain, Kyu Rulati Hai Humein
Zindagi Kis Rang Ke Sapane Dikhati Hain Humein

Dil Mein Hasarat Hain Ki Unke Rubru Ho Ek Din
Dekhiye Takdir Unse Kab Milati Hain Humein

Humko Sikha Di Mohbbat Ne Manane Ki Ada
Ruthna Dekhe Mohbbat Kab Sikhati Hain Humein

Jaan Jati Hain Humari,  Aap Ab To Aa Jaiye Sanam
Band Palke Ho Chali Hain, Ab Nind Aati Hain Humein
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«Reply #1 on: February 20, 2011, 03:34:16 PM »
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bahut khubsurat poem Rishi ji.
aap to starting se hi umda likhte hain ji.
aapka saadgi se yun likhna aur jo bholapan lafzon me dikhta hai --wo kamaal hai.
aapka andaaz aur ehsaas bahut khub hai rishi ji.
bahut achhi post aapki.
keep it up dear
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thanx
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«Reply #2 on: February 20, 2011, 04:00:18 PM »
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Apni Kismat Khel Ye Kaisa Khilati Hain Humein
Yaad Us Jalim Ki Rah Rah Kar Satati Hai Humein

Kyu Kaleja Fukati Hain, Kyu Rulati Hai Humein
Zindagi Kis Rang Ke Sapane Dikhati Hain Humein

Dil Mein Hasarat Hain Ki Unke Rubru Ho Ek Din
Dekhiye Takdir Unse Kab Milati Hain Humein

Humko Sikha Di Mohbbat Ne Manane Ki Ada
Ruthna Dekhe Mohbbat Kab Sikhati Hain Humein

Jaan Jati Hain Humari,  Aap Ab To Aa Jaiye Sanam
Band Palke Ho Chali Hain, Ab Nind Aati Hain Humein


Very Impressive ... Very Nice Poetry .. Rishi Ji !

dil se daad hazir hai ... aise hi likhte rahen ... khush rahen...

duaaoN ke saath ... !
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«Reply #3 on: February 20, 2011, 04:47:34 PM »
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bahut khubsurat poem Rishi ji.
aap to starting se hi umda likhte hain ji.
aapka saadgi se yun likhna aur jo bholapan lafzon me dikhta hai --wo kamaal hai.
aapka andaaz aur ehsaas bahut khub hai rishi ji.
bahut achhi post aapki.
keep it up dear
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thanx
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Shukriya Nirala Ji WO Samay Hi Aisa Tha Bhai
Aaap Bus Yuhi Sath Dete Rahiye Nirala JI
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«Reply #4 on: February 20, 2011, 04:49:27 PM »
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Very Impressive ... Very Nice Poetry .. Rishi Ji !

dil se daad hazir hai ... aise hi likhte rahen ... khush rahen...

duaaoN ke saath ... !

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Naresh Ji
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«Reply #5 on: February 20, 2011, 04:57:13 PM »
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 very-very nice rishi ji Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: February 20, 2011, 05:09:31 PM »
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very-very nice rishi ji Applause Applause Applause

Shukriya Kamal JI
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«Reply #7 on: February 20, 2011, 05:33:06 PM »
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wo samay shayd BachpaN ka hoga Usual Smile
hehehe
bachpan ke din bhi na bhulaye nahi bhulte
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«Reply #8 on: February 20, 2011, 06:37:38 PM »
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wo samay shayd BachpaN ka hoga Usual Smile
hehehe
bachpan ke din bhi na bhulaye nahi bhulte

Ha Yahi Manlo Nirla Ji
Kyuki Us Samay Hum 17 Saal Ke Jo The
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«Reply #9 on: February 20, 2011, 06:46:15 PM »
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wah chadhti jawani thi ya yun kahen bichdta bachpan tha!!
wo to aap kabhi nhi bhool paoge dear.
na bhuloge tabhi to aur achhe nagme hamare liye likhoge Usual Smile
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«Reply #10 on: February 20, 2011, 07:24:17 PM »
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wah chadhti jawani thi ya yun kahen bichdta bachpan tha!!
wo to aap kabhi nhi bhool paoge dear.
na bhuloge tabhi to aur achhe nagme hamare liye likhoge Usual Smile

Dono Hi Tha Bhai Jawani Ruwan Pe Thi Aur
Bachpan Apne Aap Sath Chhod Rha Tha
Haan Bhai Koshis Krunga Accha Likhne Ki
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«Reply #11 on: February 20, 2011, 07:33:37 PM »
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haan ye sahi hai aap likhte raho --
aapke liye ye lines hai shayd pasand aaye aapko--
""
meri har tasabbar me woh hai
     ye sahadat nhi to kya hai!!
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«Reply #12 on: February 20, 2011, 07:39:01 PM »
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haan ye sahi hai aap likhte raho --
aapke liye ye lines hai shayd pasand aaye aapko--
""
meri har tasabbar me woh hai
     ye sahadat nhi to kya hai!!
""
thanx
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Shukriya Nirala JI
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