<>*Bht haseen the wo pal *<>

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<>*Bht haseen the wo pal *<>

Bht haseen the wo pal jab main roz tumse mila karti thi
Sajti thi sanwarti thi  roz ek naye rang me dhala karti thi

Mehak uthti thi meri sansein jab main teri soch se machalti thi
Khanak uthti thi ye hasi jab tujhe khud me mehsus kiya karti thi

Ladkahadte kadmon se jab main tere kareeb se jaya karti thi
Thaam loge mujhe tum apni baahon me isly khudko aazmaya karti thi

Aaj bhi sanwarti hun main aur nikharti hun main usi tarah magar
Nahin hai wo bat mere shringaar me jo tere liye sajne pe hua karti thi

Khona padta hai aaj bhi mujhe unn mazboot baahon k ghere me
Par nahin wo athkheliyan jo tujhe mehsus bhar kar lene se hua karti thi

Aajao k ab to nahin sahi jaati ye jalan ye tadap mahobbat me doorie ki
Tujh bin beete har kaali raat yahan ..mujhe kaali naagin si dasa karti thi…!!!
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«Reply #1 on: December 15, 2010, 02:34:44 PM »
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wahhhh kya baat kya baat--
kisi ki yaad aagai ye padh kar
--bahut sundar pyar bhari wah wah--
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«Reply #2 on: December 15, 2010, 02:36:57 PM »
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Good one ANU Ji
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«Reply #3 on: December 15, 2010, 02:48:22 PM »
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mastammmmmmmmmmmmmmm hai reeeeeeeeeee...........
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haan aaj bhi ye raat waisi hi hai jaisa hua karti thi,
raat me pyaar ki wo baat waisi hi hai jaisa hua karti thi,

aaj bhi mere khwaab me tum mere baahon ke ghere me hoti ho,
angraayi waise hi leti ho jaisa ki pehle liya karti thi,

ye doorie ka ehsaas hota hai jab main aankhen kholta hoon,
band aankhon me mere paas hoti ho jaise pehle hua karti thi,

ye pyaar bhi waisa hi hai, ye khumaar bhi wisa hi hai,
bas doorie jismon ki hai, par dil me aaj bhi ho jaise hua karti thi....
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«Reply #4 on: December 15, 2010, 02:50:07 PM »
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Good one Kapil
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«Reply #5 on: December 15, 2010, 02:55:58 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Rajesh ji....!!!
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«Reply #6 on: December 15, 2010, 03:46:43 PM »
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Bahut Khub Ati Sunder Likha Hai Aapne Kasak JI Aur Nice Response Kapil JI
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«Reply #7 on: December 15, 2010, 04:13:06 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Rishi ji...!!!
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«Reply #8 on: December 15, 2010, 04:31:45 PM »
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pyaara pyaara sa ehsaas hai bahut aapka... likhte rehiye aate rehiye...
aur Hriday ji bhi bahut badhiya hain ji... yun hi jawaab likhte rehiye... !

kyon naye rang mein dhal gaye tum
dekhte dekhte kitna badal gaye tum

reh gaya main ulajh kar tujhme aisa
meri saanson ko bhi mehka gaye tum

har baar maine mehsoos kiya tujhe kareeb
jab jab kareeb aakar aazmaa gaye tum

tere us sanwarne mein jaane kya raaz the
jis tarah saadgi se mujhe apna bana gaye tum

ehsaas tujhe ab bhi meri giraft ka hoga
mere jism ko nahi rooh ko jo chhu gaye tum

ki tujh bin main bhi jalta raha is aag me
jo kareeb aakar mere dil me lagaa gaye tum... !

Intezar !
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«Reply #9 on: December 15, 2010, 06:42:21 PM »
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kAMAAL-dHAMAAL MACHA DIYA AAJ TOU.....AAPNE Anu-di..... icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower Applause Applause Applause Applause Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bahut Dilkash they wo lamhe....
Par kho gaye samay ki dhaar mai...
Beh gaye Teri-meri pakadd se durr...
Ab kewal yaadein hain bas yaadein....

Lautenge kabhi wo pal kaise karun mein vishwaash
Sajti hu sawarti hu ab bhi par mann rehta niraash

Lagee hai Sakhee ab bhee unsey milan kee aass
Par jaanti hoon kabhee naa poori hogi ye aass


<>*Bht haseen the wo pal *<>

Bht haseen the wo pal jab main roz tumse mila karti thi
Sajti thi sanwarti thi  roz ek naye rang me dhala karti thi

Mehak uthti thi meri sansein jab main teri soch se machalti thi
Khanak uthti thi ye hasi jab tujhe khud me mehsus kiya karti thi

Ladkahadte kadmon se jab main tere kareeb se jaya karti thi
Thaam loge mujhe tum apni baahon me isly khudko aazmaya karti thi

Aaj bhi sanwarti hun main aur nikharti hun main usi tarah magar
Nahin hai wo bat mere shringaar me jo tere liye sajne pe hua karti thi

Khona padta hai aaj bhi mujhe unn mazboot baahon k ghere me
Par nahin wo athkheliyan jo tujhe mehsus bhar kar lene se hua karti thi

Aajao k ab to nahin sahi jaati ye jalan ye tadap mahobbat me doorie ki
Tujh bin beete har kaali raat yahan ..mujhe kaali naagin si dasa karti thi…!!!
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«Reply #10 on: December 15, 2010, 06:46:50 PM »
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wahhhhhhh gudiya chha gai re..........
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«Reply #11 on: December 15, 2010, 06:56:59 PM »
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Wah wah wah aaj Anu-di mud mai aa gayee re..... icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower love4 love4 wave wave hello hello
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«Reply #12 on: December 15, 2010, 07:12:57 PM »
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wowwwww kasak ji........kya likha he maja aa gaya......but ek baat achi nahi lagi......na ji post me nahi balki sign ki.....ye rote huey ka pic nahi jama.....kasak must bhi cheering and happy....think about that please...post is mast
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«Reply #13 on: December 15, 2010, 07:58:25 PM »
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nahiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
****kasak ko wapis laooo bas****
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«Reply #14 on: December 15, 2010, 08:18:15 PM »
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Bahut bahut Khoob Anuji.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


Bahut Hi Khoob Andaz-E-Bayaan!!!!Par Kuch Lafzon Mein Ek Ajeeb Si Mayusi nazar Aa Rahi hai..Rabb Kare Sab Khair Ho..
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