bhulna chahta hun tujhe

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bhulna chahta hun tujhe bhula nahi pata hun..
kiyon teri yaado ko dil se mita nahi pata hun...

chayi rehti hai tu khayalo per har lamha mere
kiyon juda hoker bhi tujhse juda ho nahi pata hun..

mujhe to adat thi hanste rehne ki sada
kiyon aj mehfilo me bhi muskura nahi pata hun..

kaash tu dekh pati akar ek baar is deewane ko
maut bhi ati nahi main jee bhi nahi pata hun..

jin rahon per mila karte the hum aksar
kiyon un galiyon se main  guzar nahi pata hun

tu to khush hai apni duniya me bhula kar mujhe
teri yaad ati hai to main so bhi nahi pata hun

bhulna chahta hun tujhe bhula nahi pata hun..
kiyon teri yaado ko dil se mita nahi pata hun...



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«Reply #1 on: November 19, 2009, 06:35:48 PM »
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Nice 1 bahot ahchcha lihka hai aapne
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«Reply #2 on: November 19, 2009, 09:26:56 PM »
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Nice 1 bahot ahchcha lihka hai aapne

thanks a lot.
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«Reply #3 on: November 19, 2009, 09:45:44 PM »
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Bahut Hi Umda Likha Hai Samir Sahab.
Badi Hi Sadgi Ke Saath Aapne Dard Ko
Lafzon Mein Piroya Hai Good Job...

Daad Hazir Hai..Janab...

Khush Rahe...


bahot bahot shukriya shihab ji... apko pasand ayi. thanks a lot.
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«Reply #4 on: November 20, 2009, 04:50:47 PM »
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Bahut Hi sundar Rachana hai har ek dard bhare lamhe ko aapne bahut hi khubsurti ke sath pesh kiya hai nice and excellent Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: November 20, 2009, 05:04:09 PM »
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bhulna chahta hun tujhe bhula nahi pata hun..
kiyon teri yaado ko dil se mita nahi pata hun...

chayi rehti hai tu khayalo per har lamha mere
kiyon juda hoker bhi tujhse juda ho nahi pata hun..

mujhe to adat thi hanste rehne ki sada
kiyon aj mehfilo me bhi muskura nahi pata hun..

kaash tu dekh pati akar ek baar is deewane ko
maut bhi ati nahi main jee bhi nahi pata hun..

jin rahon per mila karte the hum aksar
kiyon un galiyon se main  guzar nahi pata hun

tu to khush hai apni duniya me bhula kar mujhe
teri yaad ati hai to main so bhi nahi pata hun

bhulna chahta hun tujhe bhula nahi pata hun..
kiyon teri yaado ko dil se mita nahi pata hun...



samir "dilse"
KYA BAAT HAI SAMIR_BC JI.....

BHULNA CHAHTA HUN TUJHE BHUL NAHIN PATA HUN
JITNA DOOR JATA HUN TUJSE UTNA HI KAREEB PATA HUN
KHAYALON KHWABON SE BHI DOOR RAHENA CHAHTA HUN TERE
TERE BIN JEENA CHAHTA HUN JEE NAHIN PATA HUN BIN TERE.
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«Reply #6 on: November 20, 2009, 05:22:14 PM »
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Very Nice Sameer Bhai Applause Applause Applause
Cara ji Aapne bhi Khoob Likha  Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: November 21, 2009, 02:49:38 AM »
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Wah bahut khoob Samir ji,lovely creation excellent,Cara ji beautiful lines by u. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: November 21, 2009, 11:01:03 AM »
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Bahut Hi sundar Rachana hai har ek dard bhare lamhe ko aapne bahut hi khubsurti ke sath pesh kiya hai nice and excellent Applause Applause

bahot bahot shukriya Rishi Agarwal ji........
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«Reply #9 on: November 21, 2009, 11:05:36 AM »
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KYA BAAT HAI SAMIR_BC JI.....

BHULNA CHAHTA HUN TUJHE BHUL NAHIN PATA HUN
JITNA DOOR JATA HUN TUJSE UTNA HI KAREEB PATA HUN
KHAYALON KHWABON SE BHI DOOR RAHENA CHAHTA HUN TERE
TERE BIN JEENA CHAHTA HUN JEE NAHIN PATA HUN BIN TERE.

thanks cara ji..........nice reply.
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«Reply #10 on: November 21, 2009, 02:28:28 PM »
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Very Nice Sameer Bhai Applause Applause Applause
Cara ji Aapne bhi Khoob Likha  Applause Applause Applause

thanks pankshivam ji...
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Wah bahut khoob Samir ji,lovely creation excellent,Cara ji beautiful lines by u. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause

bahot bahot shukriya madhuwesh ji....
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«Reply #12 on: November 21, 2009, 02:38:18 PM »
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bhulna chahta hun tujhe bhula nahi pata hun..
kiyon teri yaado ko dil se mita nahi pata hun...

chayi rehti hai tu khayalo per har lamha mere
kiyon juda hoker bhi tujhse juda ho nahi pata hun..

mujhe to adat thi hanste rehne ki sada
kiyon aj mehfilo me bhi muskura nahi pata hun..

kaash tu dekh pati akar ek baar is deewane ko
maut bhi ati nahi main jee bhi nahi pata hun..

jin rahon per mila karte the hum aksar
kiyon un galiyon se main  guzar nahi pata hun

tu to khush hai apni duniya me bhula kar mujhe
teri yaad ati hai to main so bhi nahi pata hun

bhulna chahta hun tujhe bhula nahi pata hun..
kiyon teri yaado ko dil se mita nahi pata hun...



samir "dilse"

Bahut Bahut Khoooooob Samir Bhai.. Lajawab Alfaazon se Saji aapki Yeh Rachna Dil Me utar gai.. Bahut dino Baad aapki Qalam se kuch Padhne ko Mila.. aur wo bhi itna Umda..!! Applause Applause



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«Reply #13 on: November 21, 2009, 11:24:31 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoooooob Samir Bhai.. Lajawab Alfaazon se Saji aapki Yeh Rachna Dil Me utar gai.. Bahut dino Baad aapki Qalam se kuch Padhne ko Mila.. aur wo bhi itna Umda..!! Applause Applause



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bahot bahot  shukriya mann ji.............apko meri likhi yeh poetry pasand ayi.... hausla afzai ka bahot bahot shukriya.
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«Reply #14 on: November 21, 2009, 11:27:51 PM »
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bhulna chahta hun tujhe bhula nahi pata hun..
kiyon teri yaado ko dil se mita nahi pata hun...

chayi rehti hai tu khayalo per har lamha mere
kiyon juda hoker bhi tujhse juda ho nahi pata hun..

mujhe to adat thi hanste rehne ki sada
kiyon aj mehfilo me bhi muskura nahi pata hun..

kaash tu dekh pati akar ek baar is deewane ko
maut bhi ati nahi main jee bhi nahi pata hun..

jin rahon per mila karte the hum aksar
kiyon un galiyon se main  guzar nahi pata hun

tu to khush hai apni duniya me bhula kar mujhe
teri yaad ati hai to main so bhi nahi pata hun

bhulna chahta hun tujhe bhula nahi pata hun..
kiyon teri yaado ko dil se mita nahi pata hun...

samir "dilse"

Bahut hi umda likha hai aap ne Samir Ji
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