bin tumhare.................

by ranjana on May 16, 2006, 12:56:59 AM
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Bin tumhare,
Main aur mera jeevan ritta,

Her yug mein tum saath they mere,

Yugo se yeh pyaar hamara,

Jaise pawan "Gita"

Satyug mein, main Lakshmi" thi tumahari,

Fir agle yug mein bani tumahari"Sita,"

Dwaper main "Radha "ban aayi pass tumahre......

Fir kalyug kyu bin tere, jaye bita..........Huh?Huh???
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«Reply #1 on: May 16, 2006, 05:20:45 AM »
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good ranjana.... good... very good...

yugon beet jaye toh kya hua
jab main tujh mein aur tu mujh mein
sama hone ke baad kya raha...

kahin bhi dekhu toh main
tu hi nazar aaoge...
aankhon mein ho aur mann
mein ghar basa kar...

woh laal kamal suraj ke liye
sone ki kamal tu mere liye

kaun sa nadi hain jo sagar se milan nahin hota...
kaun sa din hain jo suraj bin hota...
tujhse mile bina yeh jaan chale jaata..

yugon...
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«Reply #2 on: May 16, 2006, 06:21:16 AM »
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ranjana ji bahut khoob.... bahut acha likha hia apney...

Manjoo wonderful bahut khoob likha hia


Nadi ki reth hutey hum, nadi key sath behjatey,
Tumhari anjumen mey hum shama key sath jal jatey.

halo es dur mey tum ney humey apna to betlaya,
 Nigahey tum huratey ger yeaha kes kenarey reh patey.

Ye apni rehguzer eysi ki esmey hai dekhal apna,
 Yehaan hum dushmani k iraah mey reysey na chal patey.

Koi ah ker humari ahkhoon sey ahsoon chura leyta,
Humari ahnkh key moti enhi raho mey dhal jatey.

Utha ker es terhaan perda meyrey der pey ager ahey,
Geri hai bijli jin per vo dil ki baat keh jatey.

Nazer sey ger milatey tum nazer kuh to nazer kehti,
vahi gum ki khani hai jo mukh sey hum na keh patey.
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«Reply #3 on: May 16, 2006, 06:41:04 AM »
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good ranjana.... good... very good...

yugon beet jaye toh kya hua
jab main tujh mein aur tu mujh mein
sama hone ke baad kya raha...

kahin bhi dekhu toh main
tu hi nazar aaoge...
aankhon mein ho aur mann
mein ghar basa kar...

woh laal kamal suraj ke liye
sone ki kamal tu mere liye

kaun sa nadi hain jo sagar se milan nahin hota...
kaun sa din hain jo suraj bin hota...
tujhse mile bina yeh jaan chale jaata..

yugon...



bahut khub MK JI................
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«Reply #4 on: May 16, 2006, 06:42:00 AM »
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ranjana ji bahut khoob.... bahut acha likha hia apney...

Manjoo wonderful bahut khoob likha hia


Nadi ki reth hutey hum, nadi key sath behjatey,
Tumhari anjumen mey hum shama key sath jal jatey.

halo es dur mey tum ney humey apna to betlaya,
 Nigahey tum huratey ger yeaha kes kenarey reh patey.

Ye apni rehguzer eysi ki esmey hai dekhal apna,
 Yehaan hum dushmani k iraah mey reysey na chal patey.

Koi ah ker humari ahkhoon sey ahsoon chura leyta,

Humari ahnkh key moti enhi raho mey dhal jatey.

Utha ker es terhaan perda meyrey der pey ager ahey,
Geri hai bijli jin per vo dil ki baat keh jatey.

Nazer sey ger milatey tum nazer kuh to nazer kehti,
vahi gum ki khani hai jo mukh sey hum na keh patey.



BAHUT SUNDAR LIKHA AAPNE SONU JI..................
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«Reply #5 on: May 16, 2006, 06:47:39 AM »
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Ranjana ji shukirya.. app bhi bahut acha likhti hai

mahubatt gazel hai, gazel hai mahubatt,
koi taja khilta kevel hai maubatt.

hakikat hia keya ahow tum ko batayeh,
sadiyaao pey bhair hai mahubatt.

mahubatt ka koi badel he nahi hia,
ager hai badel, vo badel hai mahubatt.

badeltey hai musem, badelta hai ahlem,
jhaa mey hameysha atel hai mahubatt.

yea zezba, yea ehsaas herdem naya hai,
key kel bhi thi, aahj bhi hai mahubatt.

 bedaa husen hai 'ashk' es hadso mey,
dilo key milen ka amel hai mahubatt.

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ranjana ji bahut khoob.... bahut acha likha hia apney...

Manjoo wonderful bahut khoob likha hia


Nadi ki reth hutey hum, nadi key sath behjatey,
Tumhari anjumen mey hum shama key sath jal jatey.

halo es dur mey tum ney humey apna to betlaya,
 Nigahey tum huratey ger yeaha kes kenarey reh patey.

Ye apni rehguzer eysi ki esmey hai dekhal apna,
 Yehaan hum dushmani k iraah mey reysey na chal patey.

Koi ah ker humari ahkhoon sey ahsoon chura leyta,

Humari ahnkh key moti enhi raho mey dhal jatey.

Utha ker es terhaan perda meyrey der pey ager ahey,
Geri hai bijli jin per vo dil ki baat keh jatey.

Nazer sey ger milatey tum nazer kuh to nazer kehti,
vahi gum ki khani hai jo mukh sey hum na keh patey.



BAHUT SUNDAR LIKHA AAPNE SONU JI..................
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«Reply #6 on: May 16, 2006, 06:57:08 AM »
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shukriya Sonu............and nice lines again.............

teri meri gataha hai  yugon puraani
peera yah meri kisi ne na jaani
tum chalte rahe , ham machalte rahe
tum milte rahe ham samwarate  rahe
phool  khilte rahe, ham taraste rahe
yugon ke bandan ,janmo mein badalte rahe...........
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«Reply #7 on: May 16, 2006, 07:05:22 AM »
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Ranjana thanks... apney bhi bahut acha likha hia

hakikat keysey chipa sakta hia koi,
keo yaadoo ka nishaa chudta hai koi.

hai ahkhoon mey nazer ahti tasvir koi,
jo bahut legi hai apni si koi. meyney lakh chaha bedlna jazbatoo ko,
 chyera vohi nazer ataa hai raato ko.
ghadi do ghadi to mujhey miley sakoon,
jhaa huta na ho meyri hasratoo ka khoon.

chahet to insaan ki buri adadet hai,
na milney per shuru huti ebadet hai.
silsilaa sath ka benta hai,
vahaan umer bhar koi sath chalta hai khaa?

 
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shukriya Sonu............and nice lines again.............

teri meri gataha hai  yugon puraani
peera yah meri kisi ne na jaani
tum chalte rahe , ham machalte rahe
tum milte rahe ham samwarate  rahe
phool  khilte rahe, ham taraste rahe
yugon ke bandan ,janmo mein badalte rahe...........
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«Reply #8 on: May 16, 2006, 07:22:04 AM »
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nice sonu...........

hai prem tumhara amrit  varsha ki dhara
par dur nahii ho paata man ka andhiyara
tum kah do woh vishwas main ab kaha se laau
paani toh hai , per woh jeene  ki pyas kaha se laau
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«Reply #9 on: May 16, 2006, 08:11:43 AM »
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Thanks Ranjana... bahut khub keya bat hai javab nahi apka...


choti si hai zindgi jee le
khushi se tu apne hissey ki pee le
fikar na kar duniya ki maara jaayega
aag jab lagegi tu saara... jal jaayega

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nice sonu...........

hai prem tumhara amrit  varsha ki dhara
par dur nahii ho paata man ka andhiyara
tum kah do woh vishwas main ab kaha se laau
paani toh hai , per woh jeene  ki pyas kaha se laau
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«Reply #10 on: May 16, 2006, 08:49:05 AM »
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very nice sonu.............

pyar ki maut ka tamasha ham
mil ke duniya ke saath dekhange
aankho  ki nam udasi mein
ham khud haath jalaynge aur khud hi senkage
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«Reply #11 on: May 17, 2006, 04:26:54 AM »
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thanks Ranjana... apney bahi bahut acha likha hai...

jhootha uuska pyar de gaya zillat
khud hi ki nazron se gira gaya mujhe
aitbaar toh thaa unhe bhi hum par..
phir bhi nibhaa na paaye pyar tanha iss dil se



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very nice sonu.............

pyar ki maut ka tamasha ham
mil ke duniya ke saath dekhange
aankho  ki nam udasi mein
ham khud haath jalaynge aur khud hi senkage
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«Reply #12 on: May 17, 2006, 05:09:02 AM »
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nice sonu............

tum dur ho kar bhi mere dil se ja na sake
tumne bhula diya ham tumhe bhula na sake
yeh aankhe talah karti hai aaj bhi pyar ke nishaan
bhule nahi hai yeh lab ab bhi woh pyar ki dastaan......n/m
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«Reply #13 on: May 17, 2006, 05:15:14 AM »
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Ranjana thanks... G :D  :D D   :D ne


pyar main unki yaad aati rahegi
zindgi humey yuin hi sataati rahegi
inthaa hai meri unko dard jo diya
tanha hum kuch na kar sakey,
zindgi bas unke jaaney ki jhalaq dikhlaati rahegi


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nice sonu............

tum dur ho kar bhi mere dil se ja na sake
tumne bhula diya ham tumhe bhula na sake
yeh aankhe talah karti hai aaj bhi pyar ke nishaan
bhule nahi hai yeh lab ab bhi woh pyar ki dastaan......n/m
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«Reply #14 on: May 17, 2006, 06:50:25 AM »
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ek asha ka deep jalaya hamne
tu fir bhi na milne aaya hame
kyu bhule woh pyar ki kasame
rah gayi baate dil ki dil mein
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