Chaandanee raat hai, dam-ghotatee tanhaayee hai!

by abdbundeli on April 11, 2009, 07:11:11 AM
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Jaagtey-jaagtey phir us ki yaad aayee hai!
Chaandanee raat hai, dam-ghotatee tanhaayee hai!
Patah naheen, ki, kahaan par qayaam hai us kaa?
Woh wafaadaar hai bey-shak, magar harjaayee hai!!

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«Reply #1 on: April 11, 2009, 12:38:03 PM »
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Humko pata hain, kaha tera harjaiee hain

Par kise se na kahege, humne unki kasam khayee hain

Chalo ishare me bata dete hain Qayam unka

Dil se mere aazwaz unki aayee hain

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«Reply #2 on: April 11, 2009, 01:47:52 PM »
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Humko pata hain, kaha tera harjaiee hain

Par kise se na kahege, humne unki kasam khayee hain

Chalo ishare me bata dete hain Qayam unka

Dil se mere aazwaz unki aayee hain

-SG-

Khushnaseeb ho, sun sakey
Tum us kee aawaaz!
Warnah rahtee saadh chup,
Sharmeelee shahnaaz!!

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«Reply #3 on: April 11, 2009, 02:12:51 PM »
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Jaagtey-jaagtey phir us ki yaad aayee hai!
Chaandanee raat hai, dam-ghotatee tanhaayee hai!
Patah naheen, ki, kahaan par qayaam hai us kaa?
Woh wafaadaar hai bey-shak, magar harjaayee hai!!

                              - abd bundeli

Humko pata hain, kaha tera harjaiee hain

Par kise se na kahege, humne unki kasam khayee hain

Chalo ishare me bata dete hain Qayam unka

Dil se mere aazwaz unki aayee hain

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jahan par aap sono ho wahan par toh kasam se tufaan hi aa jaat hai ..............aap dono is nacheez kii daad qabool kijiyega

ek raat main beitha raha tere saaye k tale
 aur tune ji bhar k mujhse baat kii
subah ko saaya dhal gaya tera roshni main aakar
 aur woh mere saath teri aakhiri raat thi
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«Reply #4 on: April 11, 2009, 04:57:06 PM »
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jahan par aap sono ho wahan par toh kasam se tufaan hi aa jaat hai ..............aap dono is nacheez kii daad qabool kijiyega

ek raat main beitha raha tere saaye k tale
 aur tune ji bhar k mujhse baat kii
subah ko saaya dhal gaya tera roshni main aakar
 aur woh mere saath teri aakhiri raat thi
Thanks salil2002 ji!

Chhaayaa aisee khojiye,
Sar par ho wat-bruksh!
Utreygee wah paksh mein,
Hogaa dhwast wipaksh!!

Sangee aisaa khojiye,
Lagey nayee har raat!
Aanchal sey chhan har timir,
Bantaa rahey prabhaat!!

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«Reply #5 on: April 11, 2009, 05:00:19 PM »
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bahoot hi acha likha hai ABD ji aapne..

Nice one salil & saijd ji
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bahoot hi acha likha hai ABD ji aapne..

Nice one salil & saijd ji

Thanks Sophi ji!
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«Reply #7 on: April 11, 2009, 05:14:15 PM »
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Very Nice Abd Ji Sajid Ji & Salil Ji,
 Applause  Applause  Applause

Shally.
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«Reply #8 on: April 11, 2009, 07:34:59 PM »
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Very Nice Abd Ji Sajid Ji & Salil Ji,
 Applause  Applause  Applause

Shally.
Thanks Shally ji!
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