Dard-e-judai abh jaan pe ban aayi hai....

by Ritesh Modi on September 11, 2012, 09:05:05 PM
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Mout ki choukhat se nikal ke ye kaisi zindagi ham ne payi hai,
Jidhar dekho nazar uthe ke bas ruswayi hi ruswayi hai,
Sannate hai dard ke aur khamoshi gehrayi hai,
Dil ka haal na poocho, dard-e-judai abh jaan pe ban aayi hai…
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«Reply #1 on: September 11, 2012, 09:05:56 PM »
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Mout ki choukhat se nikal ke ye kaisi zindagi ham ne payi hai,
Jidhar dekho nazar uthe ke bas ruswayi hi ruswayi hai,
Sannate hai dard ke aur khamoshi gehrayi hai,
Dil ka haal na poocho, dard-e-judai abh jaan pe ban aayi hai…


waah very good
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«Reply #2 on: September 11, 2012, 09:13:10 PM »
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«Reply #3 on: September 11, 2012, 09:55:21 PM »
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bahut badhiya...
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«Reply #4 on: September 11, 2012, 11:53:32 PM »
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good going ritesh ji..

keep writing.
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«Reply #5 on: September 12, 2012, 12:32:35 AM »
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Mout ki choukhat se nikal ke ye kaisi zindagi ham ne payi hai,
Jidhar dekho nazar uthe ke bas ruswayi hi ruswayi hai,
Sannate hai dard ke aur khamoshi gehrayi hai,
Dil ka haal na poocho, dard-e-judai abh jaan pe ban aayi hai…



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«Reply #6 on: September 12, 2012, 12:13:31 PM »
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bahut badhiya...
thank you gaytri ji...
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«Reply #7 on: September 12, 2012, 12:13:59 PM »
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good going ritesh ji..

keep writing.
shukariya mohammad ji...
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«Reply #8 on: September 12, 2012, 12:14:38 PM »
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