Ehsaas

by archana_gudia2k2 on October 29, 2004, 02:03:33 PM
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Yaar ne dil ka haal batana chor diya,
Humne bhi gehrayi mein jana chor diya,
Jab usko hi doori ka ehsaas nahi,
Humne bhi ehsaas dilana chor diya.
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«Reply #1 on: November 28, 2004, 07:46:22 PM »
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Wah Wah! Ji Archana ji!! Very Nice!


Jab se Usne meri janib aankh Uthana Chorh Diya!
ek Chiriya ke Jode ne apna Aashiyana Chorh Diya!

Jab dekha Mohabbat mein Ruswa woh ho jaayenge,
Humne Bhi phir Un ki Gali Mein aana-Jaana Chorh Diya!

Nahin Lenge ab Naam-e-Mohabbat Chahe jo bhi ho Anzaam,
Humne to Ab Unse Milne Khwaabon mein bhi Jaana Chorh Diya!

Baithe hain tanhaai Mein Andhere Humein raas aa gaye,
Aankhon mein Bhi Khushki Hai, Aansuon ne bhi Aana Chorh Diya!

Khamoshi se Sun lena Tum bhi Jab bhi aaye yeh Khabar,
Ek Deewaane ne Marzi se Yeh Duniya yeh zamana Chorh Diya!
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«Reply #2 on: November 29, 2004, 08:26:03 AM »
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.........hmmm very well written!
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«Reply #3 on: November 29, 2004, 10:59:15 AM »
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arun ji
thanks for reply,its a real gud answer!!!
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«Reply #4 on: November 29, 2004, 01:55:20 PM »
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Shukriya Nedura ji & Archana ji!!
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«Reply #5 on: November 29, 2004, 01:59:07 PM »
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unhone pyar karke pyaar ko bhula diya
kya hua jo kisi aur k liya aapna humein rula diya
hum toa waisa bhi akele the
kya hua jo aapne ehsaas dila diya (nm)
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«Reply #6 on: November 29, 2004, 02:11:13 PM »
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wah!! Good Nedura!!
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«Reply #7 on: November 29, 2004, 02:28:16 PM »
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Yaar ne dil ka haal batana chor diya,
Humne bhi gehrayi mein jana chor diya,
Jab usko hi doori ka ehsaas nahi,
Humne bhi ehsaas dilana chor diya.


wow gudia bahut khoob

yaar ne dil ka haal batana chor diya
hum ne bhi gahraai me jaana chor diya
jab usko hi doori ka ehsaaas nahi
humne bhi ahsaas dilana chor diya

very nice
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«Reply #8 on: November 29, 2004, 02:57:28 PM »
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Very Nice Nedura ji & Samnoj ji!!!Waah!
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«Reply #9 on: November 30, 2004, 07:42:38 PM »
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WOWOW BAHOOT KHOOB AKS JI !!!!Nice Gurdia, samnoj, Talat and Nedura!!!!!
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«Reply #10 on: November 30, 2004, 07:54:22 PM »
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Thanks Ji Pooja ji!!!
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«Reply #11 on: December 01, 2004, 09:02:37 AM »
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thanks everybody

samundar apney gum deekha nahee sakta
aansso kitney bhi ho anko tuk la nahee skata
tum chor kar ja rahey mera sath ismey tumhaaree khta kya hey
har koi mera sath nibha bhi nahee skata
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«Reply #12 on: December 01, 2004, 09:04:44 AM »
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Aa kaar hamaree qabar paar tum nay jo muskura diya
bijli chamak kaay gir paree sara kafan jala diya
aram say so raha tha main orray kafan mazar main
yahan bhee satanay a gaya kiss nay pata bata diya
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«Reply #13 on: December 01, 2004, 09:27:11 AM »
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Aaye hain woh mazaar pe Ghunghat Utaar ke!
Mujh se naseeb achchhe hain mere mazaar ke...

(NM)
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«Reply #14 on: December 01, 2004, 09:33:09 AM »
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thanks everybody

samundar apney gum deekha nahee sakta
aansso kitney bhi ho anko tuk la nahee skata
tum chor kar ja rahey mera sath ismey tumhaaree khta kya hey
har koi mera sath nibha bhi nahee skata


Wah Archana ji! Waseem bareilwee ki Yeh Gazal bahut achchhi hai!!
I have posted it few days back  in Gazal section on following link. U May enjoy it in full

http://www.yoindia.com/forums/ftopic3936.html
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