faNaa hou jaayeiN gaiN,.......

by laaiba on June 24, 2013, 11:32:26 PM
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lamhey fuRqat ke sazaa hou jaayien gaiN
ish.q main hum to fanaa hou jaayien gaiN

shaam ke saaye lage haiN badhne ab
dar.d ke panchee rihaa ho jaayien gaiN
 
dar.d kii  rutt  dil men bas  jaayegii
aap gar hAm se khafaa ho jaayien gaiN
 
jo  beete hain saath tumhaare vo pal
naqsh dil par ab sadaa ho jaayein gaiN

lafz  jo tehhre qalam kee nok par
aaj woh dil sey adaa ho jaayein gaiN,..

 
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«Reply #1 on: June 24, 2013, 11:49:00 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Wah,Wah,Wah Laiba ji,
Really nice.
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«Reply #2 on: June 25, 2013, 12:04:22 AM »
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Quote from: laaiba on June 24, 2013, 11:32:26 PM

lamhey fuRqat ke sazaa hou jaayien gaiN
ish.q main hum to fanaa hou jaayien gaiN

shaam ke saaye lage haiN badhne ab
dar.d ke panchee rihaa ho jaayien gaiN
 
dar.d kii  rutt  dil men bas  jaayegii
aap gar hAm se khafaa ho jaayien gaiN
 
jo  beete hain saath tumhaare vo pal
naqsh dil par ab sadaa ho jaayein gaiN

lafz  jo tehhre qalam kee nok par
aaj woh dil sey adaa ho jaayein gaiN,..

 
Bahut Hi Khoob Surt Peshqash Ki Hai Aapne.
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«Reply #3 on: June 25, 2013, 12:32:03 AM »
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nice lines
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«Reply #4 on: June 25, 2013, 12:34:23 AM »
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Quote from: laaiba on June 24, 2013, 11:32:26 PM

lamhey fuRqat ke sazaa hou jaayien gaiN
ish.q main hum to fanaa hou jaayien gaiN

shaam ke saaye lage haiN badhne ab
dar.d ke panchee rihaa ho jaayien gaiN
 
dar.d kii  rutt  dil men bas  jaayegii
aap gar hAm se khafaa ho jaayien gaiN
 
jo  beete hain saath tumhaare vo pal
naqsh dil par ab sadaa ho jaayein gaiN

lafz  jo tehhre qalam kee nok par
aaj woh dil sey adaa ho jaayein gaiN,..

 

waaaaaaaaaah Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: June 25, 2013, 01:32:22 AM »
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shaam ke saaye lage haiN badhne ab
dar.d ke panchee rihaa ho jaayien gaiN
 
dar.d kii  rutt  dil men bas  jaayegii
aap gar hAm se khafaa ho jaayien gaiN
 
jo  beete hain saath tumhaare vo pal
naqsh dil par ab sadaa ho jaayein gaiN

lafz  jo tehhre qalam kee nok par
aaj woh dil sey adaa ho jaayein gaiN,....

bahut umda khayaal lekar aayee hain aap.
wah wah wah
Maqte aur 2nd sher...ka javaab naheen
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«Reply #6 on: June 25, 2013, 08:18:26 AM »
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WAAH WAAH...
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: June 25, 2013, 09:12:14 AM »
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waah waah beautiful ek rau
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«Reply #8 on: June 25, 2013, 02:03:47 PM »
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bahut khoob laaiba ji. badi khoobsurat ghazal pesh kee hai aapne. aur sher bahut pasand aaye

shaam ke saaye lage haiN badhne ab
dar.d ke panchee rihaa ho jaayien gaiN
 
dar.d kii  rutt  dil men bas  jaayegii
aap gar hAm se khafaa ho jaayien gaiN
 
jo  beete hain saath tumhaare vo pal
naqsh dil par ab sadaa ho jaayein gaiN

hazaron dili daad qubool ho.   Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #9 on: June 25, 2013, 03:02:58 PM »
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Quote from: Sudhir Ashq on June 24, 2013, 11:49:00 PM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Wah,Wah,Wah Laiba ji,
Really nice.
shukria ash.k ji,..............
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Quote from: Advo.RavinderaRavi on June 25, 2013, 12:04:22 AM
Bahut Hi Khoob Surt Peshqash Ki Hai Aapne.
bohat shukria aapkaa,...............
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«Reply #11 on: June 25, 2013, 03:04:51 PM »
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Quote from: RAJAN KONDAL on June 25, 2013, 12:32:03 AM
nice lines
thnx,.......................
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Quote from: adil bechain on June 25, 2013, 12:34:23 AM

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thnxxxxxxxxxxxx,...................
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«Reply #13 on: June 25, 2013, 03:22:54 PM »
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Quote from: laaiba on June 24, 2013, 11:32:26 PM

lamhey fuRqat ke sazaa hou jaayien gaiN
ish.q main hum to fanaa hou jaayien gaiN

shaam ke saaye lage haiN badhne ab
dar.d ke panchee rihaa ho jaayien gaiN
 
dar.d kii  rutt  dil men bas  jaayegii
aap gar hAm se khafaa ho jaayien gaiN
 
jo  beete hain saath tumhaare vo pal
naqsh dil par ab sadaa ho jaayein gaiN

lafz  jo tehhre qalam kee nok par
aaj woh dil sey adaa ho jaayein gaiN,..

 

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«Reply #14 on: June 25, 2013, 04:43:02 PM »
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Quote from: mkv on June 25, 2013, 01:32:22 AM
shaam ke saaye lage haiN badhne ab
dar.d ke panchee rihaa ho jaayien gaiN
 
dar.d kii  rutt  dil men bas  jaayegii
aap gar hAm se khafaa ho jaayien gaiN
 
jo  beete hain saath tumhaare vo pal
naqsh dil par ab sadaa ho jaayein gaiN

lafz  jo tehhre qalam kee nok par
aaj woh dil sey adaa ho jaayein gaiN,....

bahut umda khayaal lekar aayee hain aap.
wah wah wah
Maqte aur 2nd sher...ka javaab naheen

shukria mkv ji,................
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