<>*Fir tujhpe marne ki ijaazat dede*<>

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<>*Fir tujhpe marne ki ijaazat dede*<>


In lafzon me pehle si nazakat dede
Aa fir wo pehle si mahobbat dede

Main tere liye hi bani hun o sanam
Mujhe har pal tu apni sohbat dede

Tu gaya to gaya yauvan bhi mera
Aa fir dil lubhaati adaavat dede

Tujhe khoya to khoya wajood mera
Fir nazmon se apni shohrat dede

Ban jaungi fir se teri sabz pari
Tu bas mujhe thodisi mohlat dede

Kasak keh rahi ae mere janasheen
Fir tujhpe marne ki ijaazat dede...!!
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«Reply #1 on: May 06, 2016, 02:08:12 AM »
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waah waah waah kyaa khoob likhaa hai aapne, dheron daad w/ RAO
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«Reply #2 on: May 06, 2016, 11:50:28 AM »
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Bahut Khub ...Lady Ghalib


Shad o Aabaad Rahiye

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«Reply #3 on: May 06, 2016, 02:16:24 PM »
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waahhh very nice aapko pehli baar padh rahe hai aur pehli bar me hi jaadu ker diya....bahot khoobsurat likha hai....humari taraf se dili daad aur mubarakbaad...



<>*Fir tujhpe marne ki ijaazat dede*<>


In lafzon me pehle si nazakat dede
Aa fir wo pehle si mahobbat dede

Main tere liye hi bani hun o sanam
Mujhe har pal tu apni sohbat dede

Tu gaya to gaya yauvan bhi mera
Aa fir dil lubhaati adaavat dede

Tujhe khoya to khoya wajood mera
Fir nazmon se apni shohrat dede


Ban jaungi fir se teri sabz pari
Tu bas mujhe thodisi mohlat dede


Kasak keh rahi ae mere janasheen
Fir tujhpe marne ki ijaazat dede...!!
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«Reply #4 on: May 06, 2016, 05:02:44 PM »
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bahut khoob mohtarma.... dhero daad mubaarkbaad..
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«Reply #5 on: May 07, 2016, 12:29:38 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause :clap:Bahut khoob, Hamesha khush raho. Dili dad qubool fermein.
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«Reply #6 on: May 07, 2016, 03:09:38 PM »
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bahut bahut khoob ji....kyaa kehne.... aap bhi aate hain yahaan maaloom nahi thaa humein...!!!


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samundar se  main  fir  nikal  kahaan  paayaa hoon
tere jaane se  main sambhal  kahaan  paayaa hoon

ladkhadaake gir  padaa  kuch  duur  chal  kar  main
tere  bin  tanhaa  kabhi  chal kahaan  paayaa hoon

kismat mein  thaa  nahi milnaa hamaaraa  shaayad
lakeeron  ko  main  bhi badal  kahaan paayaa hoon

lafz  sab  bikhre  pade  hain   tere  chale  jaane  se
unhein jodkar banaa ghazal  kahaan  paayaa  hoon

achchaa  lagtaa hai  ban kamre  mein  akele rehnaa
apni tanhaai se  baahar  nikal  kahaan paayaa hoon

aadat si ho chuki hai  shaayad  gham  mein jeene ki
apni aadat ko  fir  main badal kahaan  paayaa hoon

samundar  se  main  fir  nikal  kahaan  paayaa hoon
tere jaane  se main sambhal  kahaan  paayaa hoon


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«Reply #7 on: May 08, 2016, 12:08:44 PM »
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Bahot khooob waaaah waaah  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: May 10, 2016, 11:47:15 PM »
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waah waah waah kyaa khoob likhaa hai aapne, dheron daad w/ RAO
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bht shukriya surindran ji aapka.. koshihs ko pasand kiya aapne
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«Reply #9 on: May 10, 2016, 11:48:09 PM »
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Shad o Aabaad Rahiye

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khush raho bhai ... salamat raho... yunhi hum par pyaar barsate raho :*
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«Reply #10 on: May 10, 2016, 11:49:37 PM »
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waahhh very nice aapko pehli baar padh rahe hai aur pehli bar me hi jaadu ker diya....bahot khoobsurat likha hai....humari taraf se dili daad aur mubarakbaad...




thnx alot pooja ... par ye jaadu mere shabdon ka nahin aapki feelings ka hai jo is nazm k sath judi ... yunhi judte rahiye shabdon ko mehsoos karte rahiye
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«Reply #12 on: June 03, 2016, 09:23:11 PM »
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kya baat...kitna khoobsoorat mam...commendable...just wow.. Applause Applause Applause Applause
Love to be back on this forum and get to learn so much from all you talented people!
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«Reply #13 on: June 05, 2016, 11:56:18 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
bahut khoob mohtarma.... dhero daad mubaarkbaad..

thnx aarzoo ji
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«Reply #14 on: June 05, 2016, 11:57:03 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause :clap:Bahut khoob, Hamesha khush raho. Dili dad qubool fermein.

ismail ji behad shukriya pasand karne ka
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