Guzar Rahi Andheron Mein

by riyaz106 on March 03, 2010, 12:59:24 PM
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«Reply #15 on: March 04, 2010, 01:40:03 PM »
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bahut khoob likha hai Riyaz ji  Applause Applause Applause Applause
Koyal ji,BBL ji,Pandey ji aapne bhi khoob likha hai  Applause Applause Applause

Aapka tahe-dil se shukriya BBL ji. Main aapka mashkoor hun. Aapne bhi jawaban bahut shandaar lines likhi hain.

ur welcome kaash ji n riyaz ji...
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«Reply #16 on: March 05, 2010, 01:27:43 AM »
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Madhu-di apka dher sara shukriya . Karam, inayat aur meherbani.  Sorry keh ke kyon sharminda karti ho.
Wah wah Riyaz bhai,bahut dard aur khoobsurti se likha aapne ye gazal.sori abhi dekhi.great work. Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Thumbs UP
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«Reply #17 on: March 05, 2010, 02:24:52 AM »
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Bahut Khoob Riyaz Ji
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«Reply #18 on: March 05, 2010, 04:52:52 AM »
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Thank you very much Pandey sahab. Aapne bhi bahut achhe aur shandaar ashaar share kiye hain.
Riyaz Sahab achchhi sharing..halaat aur lamhaat ke isi zameen per ek sher yaad aa gaya hai...arz karna chahta hun...

Quid rahta hun to tauheen baal-o-par ki hai,
Aur ud jaun to syyaad ki ruswaai  hai,
May chhalak jaye to kamzarf hai peene wale,
Jaam khali ho to shaqi teri ruswaai  hai... (-NM-)

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«Reply #19 on: March 05, 2010, 09:21:15 AM »
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Kaash ji aapka tahe-dil se shukriya, Ghazal pasand karne aur hausala afzai ke liya
bahut khoob likha hai Riyaz ji  Applause Applause Applause Applause
Koyal ji,BBL ji,Pandey ji aapne bhi khoob likha hai  Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #20 on: March 05, 2010, 09:31:17 AM »
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bahut khoob riyaz ji bohut hi acha likha hai aapne
keep writing Applause Applause

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«Reply #21 on: March 05, 2010, 11:13:27 AM »
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Rajesh ji aapka tahe dil se shukriya.
Bahut Khoob Riyaz Ji
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«Reply #22 on: March 05, 2010, 05:46:11 PM »
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Bhawna Ji aapka bahut bahut shukriya, ghazal pasand karne aur hausla afazaai ka.
bahut khoob riyaz ji bohut hi acha likha hai aapne
keep writing Applause Applause


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«Reply #23 on: March 05, 2010, 07:09:46 PM »
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Wah Geet-di kitni haseen mushkil hai teri..... Winking Winking Winking Giggle Giggle Giggle
 
Karti ho ikraar naino k isharo se
Banti ho anjaan ankho ki bhasha se

Kyu chahti ho k sunn le fizayen bhi
K wo kewal tum se he pyaar karta hai

bahut hi khoob riyaz ji...

Ek mushkil hai merri tum suljha jao,
kar do mujhe fanaa ya mujhe apna jao,
aati jati hawaye karti hai kuch ishare..
apni ankho ki bhasha ko apne labo se samjha jao......
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #24 on: March 05, 2010, 07:16:22 PM »
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Very good response to Geet,Koyal Ji
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KOYAL46
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«Reply #25 on: March 05, 2010, 07:24:31 PM »
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Hamne sunna tha kahin.....

'Khudi ko kar buland itna ki
Khuda bhi puchhe taqdir likhne se pehle ki
Bande teri razaa kya hai...'

THEEK se yaad nahi hai ....kuchh line reh gayi hai shayad....

Haalat se ladna aur vijay paana he pursharth kehlata hai Riyaz-bhai....


Koyal Ji aapka behad shukriya ghazal pasand karne ka. Aapki baat sahi hai ke ismein negativity hai, magar aisa bhi to hota hai na. Kisi ne kya khoob kaha hai:

Insaan ke halaat hain kiske bas mein
Udte hue lamhaat hain kiske bas mein
Ek raat mili thi ittifaqan warna
Duniya tere din raat hain kiske bas mein.
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«Reply #26 on: March 05, 2010, 07:26:28 PM »
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THANKS Rajeshji once again....

Very good response to Geet,Koyal Ji
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«Reply #27 on: March 05, 2010, 07:43:15 PM »
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Wah Geet-di kitni haseen mushkil hai teri..... Winking Winking Winking Giggle Giggle Giggle
 
Karti ho ikraar naino k isharo se
Banti ho anjaan ankho ki bhasha se

Kyu chahti ho k sunn le fizayen bhi
K wo kewal tum se he pyaar karta hai


thnx sweetu...

Janti hu phir bhi sunna chahti hu,
uske hotho se nikla har lafz merri jaan hai,
kar chuki hu apni har khushi ko uske naam..
ab wahi merra kalma hai wahi merri quran hai......
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«Reply #28 on: March 06, 2010, 12:10:31 PM »
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Aapki baat bilkul sahi hai Koyal-di. Halaat se lade baghair vijay pana mushkil hai. Jivan ek sangharsh hai.
Wo sher sahi tarah se yun hai:

Khudi ko kar buland itna ke har taqdeer se pahle
Khuda bande se khud poochey bata teri razaa kya hai
(Allama Iqbal)
Hamne sunna tha kahin.....

'Khudi ko kar buland itna ki
Khuda bhi puchhe taqdir likhne se pehle ki
Bande teri razaa kya hai...'

THEEK se yaad nahi hai ....kuchh line reh gayi hai shayad....

Haalat se ladna aur vijay paana he pursharth kehlata hai Riyaz-bhai....


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«Reply #29 on: March 06, 2010, 02:39:08 PM »
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Bahut khoob BBL ji, bahut achhi lines likhi hain aapne. Shandaar, umdah.
thnx sweetu...

Janti hu phir bhi sunna chahti hu,
uske hotho se nikla har lafz merri jaan hai,
kar chuki hu apni har khushi ko uske naam..
ab wahi merra kalma hai wahi merri quran hai......
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