Guzar Rahi Andheron Mein

by riyaz106 on March 03, 2010, 12:59:24 PM
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        GHAZAL
Guzar rahi hai andheron mein ab to aa jaao
Agar chiragh nahi to ye ghar jalaa jaao
Umeed ho rahi kamzor din-ba-din ab to
Tumhara faisla kya hai hamein suna jaao
Hamara ghar se nikalna bhi ho gaya mushkil
Main begunah hun ye duniya ko tum bataa jaao
Main tum se rah ke juda aur jee na paaunga
Na mere ban sako to mujhko hi mita jaao


Riyaz "Ashna"
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«Reply #1 on: March 03, 2010, 01:01:04 PM »
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Bohot bohot khoob Riyaz Ji
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«Reply #2 on: March 03, 2010, 01:03:26 PM »
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Bahut shukriya Talat Ji. Zarranawazi.
Bohot bohot khoob Riyaz Ji
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«Reply #3 on: March 03, 2010, 01:07:23 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Riyaz Bhai.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #4 on: March 03, 2010, 01:11:06 PM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya Khwaish ji. Nawazish.
Bahut Bahut Khoob Riyaz Bhai.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #5 on: March 03, 2010, 02:01:25 PM »
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WAH WAH BAHUT KHOOB RIYAZ JI.
 Applause Applause Applause Applause
       GHAZAL
Guzar rahi hai andheron mein ab to aa jaao
Agar chiragh nahi to ye ghar jalaa jaao
Umeed ho rahi kamzor din-ba-din ab to
Tumhara faisla kya hai hamein suna jaao
Hamara ghar se nikalna bhi ho gaya mushkil
Main begunah hun ye duniya ko tum bataa jaao
Main tum se rah ke juda aur jee na paaunga
Na mere ban sako to mujhko hi mita jaao


Riyaz "Ashna"

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«Reply #6 on: March 03, 2010, 02:39:18 PM »
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Wah wah kya khoob gazal hai.... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Dard aur mayusi se bhari hui ye negativity ko jaahir karti hai....



        GHAZAL
Guzar rahi hai andheron mein ab to aa jaao
Agar chiragh nahi to ye ghar jalaa jaao
Umeed ho rahi kamzor din-ba-din ab to
Tumhara faisla kya hai hamein suna jaao
Hamara ghar se nikalna bhi ho gaya mushkil
Main begunah hun ye duniya ko tum bataa jaao
Main tum se rah ke juda aur jee na paaunga
Na mere ban sako to mujhko hi mita jaao


Riyaz "Ashna"

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«Reply #7 on: March 03, 2010, 03:32:30 PM »
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bahut hi khoob riyaz ji...

Ek mushkil hai merri tum suljha jao,
kar do mujhe fanaa ya mujhe apna jao,
aati jati hawaye karti hai kuch ishare..
apni ankho ki bhasha ko apne labo se samjha jao......
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«Reply #8 on: March 04, 2010, 02:19:30 AM »
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Aapka bahut bahut shukriya Suresh ji.
WAH WAH BAHUT KHOOB RIYAZ JI.
 Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: March 04, 2010, 03:40:16 AM »
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        GHAZAL
Guzar rahi hai andheron mein ab to aa jaao
Agar chiragh nahi to ye ghar jalaa jaao
Umeed ho rahi kamzor din-ba-din ab to
Tumhara faisla kya hai hamein suna jaao
Hamara ghar se nikalna bhi ho gaya mushkil
Main begunah hun ye duniya ko tum bataa jaao
Main tum se rah ke juda aur jee na paaunga
Na mere ban sako to mujhko hi mita jaao


Riyaz "Ashna"

Bahut khoob Riyaz sahab, masa-allah..kya khubshurat ghazal pesh kiya hai..
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«Reply #10 on: March 04, 2010, 05:55:03 AM »
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Koyal Ji aapka behad shukriya ghazal pasand karne ka. Aapki baat sahi hai ke ismein negativity hai, magar aisa bhi to hota hai na. Kisi ne kya khoob kaha hai:

Insaan ke halaat hain kiske bas mein
Udte hue lamhaat hain kiske bas mein
Ek raat mili thi ittifaqan warna
Duniya tere din raat hain kiske bas mein.
Wah wah kya khoob gazal hai.... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Dard aur mayusi se bhari hui ye negativity ko jaahir karti hai....
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«Reply #11 on: March 04, 2010, 07:26:39 AM »
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Wah wah Riyaz bhai,bahut dard aur khoobsurti se likha aapne ye gazal.sori abhi dekhi.great work. Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Thumbs UP
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«Reply #12 on: March 04, 2010, 08:40:02 AM »
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Koyal Ji Kisi ne kya khoob kaha hai:

Insaan ke halaat hain kiske bas mein
Udte hue lamhaat hain kiske bas mein
Ek raat mili thi ittifaqan warna
Duniya tere din raat hain kiske bas mein.
Riyaz Sahab achchhi sharing..halaat aur lamhaat ke isi zameen per ek sher yaad aa gaya hai...arz karna chahta hun...

Quid rahta hun to tauheen baal-o-par ki hai,
Aur ud jaun to syyaad ki ruswaai  hai,
May chhalak jaye to kamzarf hai peene wale,
Jaam khali ho to shaqi teri ruswaai  hai... (-NM-)
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«Reply #13 on: March 04, 2010, 12:24:38 PM »
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Aapka tahe-dil se shukriya BBL ji. Main aapka mashkoor hun. Aapne bhi jawaban bahut shandaar lines likhi hain.
bahut hi khoob riyaz ji...

Ek mushkil hai merri tum suljha jao,
kar do mujhe fanaa ya mujhe apna jao,
aati jati hawaye karti hai kuch ishare..
apni ankho ki bhasha ko apne labo se samjha jao......
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«Reply #14 on: March 04, 2010, 01:13:09 PM »
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Pandey Sahab aapka tahe dil se shukriya, is ghazal ko pasand farmane ke liye. Aapka mashkoor hun. karam, nawazish.
Bahut khoob Riyaz sahab, masa-allah..kya khubshurat ghazal pesh kiya hai..
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