~*~Hal-e-Dil~*~

by pankshivam on January 06, 2009, 03:34:42 PM
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Kya puchhe koi khushiyo ka pataa mujhse,
               Jo khud hi gumshuda hota hai...

Har mukam pe akela paata hai dil khud ko,
               Har mod pe manzil ka gumaa hota hai...

Aata hai sawalo ka karva jab dil pe,
               Har jawaab me khamooshi ka sama hota hai..

Rokna chahata hai dil har khushi ke manzar ko,
               Beh jate hai ashk jab vo chupchap judaa hota hai...

Uthati hai lapate jasbaato ke jalne se,
               Dikhta nahi rasta jab yaado ka dhnuaa hota hai...

Reh jati hai tutkar sanse raho pe uski,
               Kya kahun hothon se kuch bhi,ye dastan-e-manzar to ashko se bayaa hota hai...

Dhundhta hun har ghadi apne khwabo ke aasma pe usko,
               Par vo rehta hai bekhbar meri halat se, jo meri sanso me basa hota hai...

Kaisa ye dil hai jiska na tha majhab hi koi,
               Aaj uske khatir kaise ek insaan me khudaa hota hai...
             
~Pank~
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«Reply #1 on: January 06, 2009, 03:38:31 PM »
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Waah Ji Waah,.
Kya Khoob LIkha Hai Pank Bhai Tumne,.
Nice One,.
Pardhkar Achcha Laga,.
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«Reply #2 on: January 06, 2009, 03:40:25 PM »
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Waah Ji Waah,.
Kya Khoob LIkha Hai Pank Bhai Tumne,.
Nice One,.
Pardhkar Achcha Laga,.
Shukriya Jaanasheen Sahab
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«Reply #3 on: January 06, 2009, 03:42:10 PM »
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Bahut Khoob Pank ji,
Wonderful Creation,

Samne se hi gujar jaaye jo yaar bina kuch kahe,
sach hai uss waqt sab kuch luta-luta sa hota hai,

Hass ke widaa karna to majboori thi hamari, kya
tujh jaane wale ko ki widaayi ka dard kitna bura hota hai,

U to kabhi haath bhi na lagya jaam ko, par har
chandni raat me tere saroor-e-yaad ka nasha hota hai,

Ham to u hi chale jaate hai mehfil me haal-e-dil to
sirf tujhse hi bayaan hota hai...

Shally.

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«Reply #4 on: January 06, 2009, 03:47:12 PM »
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Waah Mere Dost Kamaal Ki Shayari Banaai Hai,.
Pardhkar Mazaa Aa Gaya,.
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«Reply #5 on: January 06, 2009, 03:57:25 PM »
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Bahut Khoob Pank ji,
Wonderful Creation,

Samne se hi gujar jaaye jo yaar bina kuch kahe,
sach hai uss waqt sab kuch luta-luta sa hota hai,

Hass ke widaa karna to majboori thi hamari, kya
tujh jaane wale ko ki widaayi ka dard kitna bura hota hai,

U to kabhi haath bhi na lagya jaam ko, par har
chandni raat me tere saroor-e-yaad ka nasha hota hai,

Ham to u hi chale jaate hai mehfil me haal-e-dil to
sirf tujhse hi bayaan hota hai...

Shally.


Shukriya Shallyji
Aur Shukriya is Khubsurat Reply ke liye


Dard to hissa hai in sanso ka,
              Hame kya pata dard ka aalam kya hota hai...
Rakhte hai kabhi dil pe dard ko,
              To kabhi dard pe dil rakha hota hai....
Aaj har ehsas mit gaya hai dard ka,
              Bar bar bhool jate han ye ehsas kis tarah hota hai...
~Pank~
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«Reply #6 on: January 06, 2009, 04:00:51 PM »
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Aapko Hamara Likha Pasand Aaya Uske Liye Shukriya Jaanasheen Sahab..
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«Reply #7 on: January 06, 2009, 04:05:10 PM »
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pank ji aapka likha hua itna acha hai ki taarif k liye shbd kam se lag rahe hain .....hamesha bhagwan ka aashirwad aap par rahe aur aap yu hi likhte rahein.  

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«Reply #8 on: January 06, 2009, 04:10:25 PM »
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pank ji aapka likha hua itna acha hai ki taarif k liye shbd kam se lag rahe hain .....hamesha bhagwan ka aashirwad aap par rahe aur aap yu hi likhte rahein.  

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«Reply #9 on: January 06, 2009, 04:46:02 PM »
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bahut badiya pankshivamji.....

hal-e-dil unse puchho kya hota hai,
jo dukh, dard, sadhmo ki raha se gujra hai.
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«Reply #10 on: January 06, 2009, 05:21:53 PM »
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«Reply #11 on: January 06, 2009, 05:23:31 PM »
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bahut badiya pankshivamji.....

hal-e-dil unse puchho kya hota hai,
jo dukh, dard, sadhmo ki raha se gujra hai.
Shukriya CARA JI
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«Reply #12 on: January 08, 2009, 03:29:29 PM »
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Aapko Hamara Likha Pasand Aaya Uske Liye Shukriya Jaanasheen Sahab..

Yunhi Likhte Raho,.
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«Reply #13 on: January 08, 2009, 06:44:52 PM »
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Yunhi Likhte Raho,.
Ji bilkul Jaanasheen Sahab
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«Reply #14 on: January 08, 2009, 07:05:29 PM »
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Bohat khoob pankshivam...

Bohat khoob shally

Bohat khoob cara
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