<>*Har sham ka ye hi manzar tha.*<>

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<>*Har sham ka ye hi manzar tha.*<>

har sham hum tere intezar me baithe rahe
har sham hum umeed ki shama jalaye rahe
har sham tere aane ki aas me palkein bichaye rahe
har sham hum saj sanwar k darwaze pe kahde rahe

har sham ye dhadkanein tez hui
har sham hum ise pyar se behlate rahe
har sham ye dil machal jata tha
har sham ise thapki de hum samjhate rahe

har sham ka ye manzar hota tha
hum chhat par ghanton baithe rehte the
suraj chhipne aata to deta dua
aur chand hume dekh aanhein bharta tha

sham ki gulabi chadar hume aanchal apna udhati thi
sham ki thandi hawa in palkon k ashk sukhane aati thi
sham se leke raat tak fir tanha raat se  bhatakti sham tak
hum wahin tanha khade paaye jate the

har sham ka ye hi manzar tha.......
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«Reply #1 on: July 30, 2010, 11:25:59 PM »
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Wah kya baat hai.....bahot hi sunder aur jajbaati intezaar ka maarmic chitran kiya hai Kasak aapne..... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause


Har sham tune kiya mera intezaar
Par hum ko kyu hui na iski khabar

Sham kee thandi hawa idhar se bhee gujri thee
Par tere ashko ki koi khabar usne bhee nahi dee

Sham ki gulaabi chader mujhe bhi pallu odhati thi
Par tera koi bhi samaachaar mujhe nahi sunaati thi

Chand har raat mujh se ghanto baatein karta tha
Teri he sab baatein mein uss kay saath karta tha

Har sham ka ye hi manjar tha
Tanha tu thee,tanha mein tha

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«Reply #2 on: July 30, 2010, 11:55:10 PM »
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waahhhh anaam ji kya khub kahi hai... Applause Applause Applause

mere intezar ki tujhe khabar na lagi
ye kaise mumkin hai sanam

tum hi to keh gaye the uss dhalti sham me
mera intezaar karna jaanam

ye hawa jo hoke paas se mere guzarti thi
ye lati thi mahek mere pyaar ki

kyun tujhe na mehsuss hui sanam
ye aanch mere intezar ki

te chand bhi bada beraham hai
yahan sath mere rota tha

par ye na kaha kabhi kya usne tujhe
tujhe yaad kar wahan koi rota tha

mere sajan yehi rang har pal
tere pyaar ka mujhpar chchaya raha

main til til marti rahi yahan
tu bhi wahan yaad me meri tilmilata raha

haan bas ye hi tha hamari har sham ka manzar...
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«Reply #3 on: July 31, 2010, 12:04:29 AM »
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Abhi tou jaana hai...
khanaa abhi khaanaa hai.....

reply phir kabhi dunga ji.....
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«Reply #4 on: July 31, 2010, 12:13:01 AM »
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sure ji....apna khyal rakhiyega...thnx for the reply
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«Reply #5 on: July 31, 2010, 12:40:12 AM »
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bahut khub kasak ji akhir ki chaar lines gazab ki likhi hai....
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«Reply #6 on: July 31, 2010, 06:00:32 AM »
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wah Kasak ji wah.... kya likhti hain aap... ek se badhkar ek... bahut khoobsurat shabdon me aapne apne tanhaayi ke dard ko bataya hai,.... bahut sundar kavita likhi hai aapne... bahut khoob sarkaar...!!!
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«Reply #7 on: July 31, 2010, 09:04:31 AM »
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Aapka uttar padh kar kuchh ajeeb sa ehsaas hua.....
kyu ye kaaynaat ki hastiyein saath nahi de rahi......Ye Chand...Ye hawa....


                 haan bas ye hi tha hamari har sham ka manzar...

                Chand se shekaayat hum bhiee karte they
                Tanhaayee ka jikra hawa0n se karte they
                Kuchh samachar tera lekar aao kehte they
                Dil ko apne hum eesy tarah behlaate they

                
               haan bas ye hi tha hamari har sham ka manzar...

               Teri yaado se shuru hoti thee meri har sham
                Ab nashaa nahi dete hain madhu ke bhi jaam
                Phir bhi mann karta aa k koi le mujhe thaam
                Yaad aata tha har pal sanam bas tera hi naam

                haan bas ye hi tha hamari har sham ka manzar...
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«Reply #8 on: July 31, 2010, 11:31:51 AM »
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yu to aap meri in lines ko padh chuke he Anu ji ..par yah jab apki post padhi to man nahi mana reply kiye bina~~

Har shaam meri ankhon me koi manjar hota tha....
har raat par bhi to taron ka samandar hota tha....
har subah mere man ko samjhati thi "Abhi"....
ki kisi shaam tum mere liye subah laoge or ye raat khatm hogi~~
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«Reply #9 on: July 31, 2010, 11:52:32 AM »
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tumhare replies k bina meri poems adhuri lagti hain bataya tha na abhi ji aapko....

fir bhi aapki replies k wait karne padte hain...
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«Reply #10 on: July 31, 2010, 02:38:16 PM »
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<>*Har sham ka ye hi manzar tha.*<>

har sham hum tere intezar me baithe rahe
har sham hum umeed ki shama jalaye rahe
har sham tere aane ki aas me palkein bichaye rahe
har sham hum saj sanwar k darwaze pe kahde rahe

har sham ye dhadkanein tez hui
har sham hum ise pyar se behlate rahe
har sham ye dil machal jata tha
har sham ise thapki de hum samjhate rahe

har sham ka ye manzar hota tha
hum chhat par ghanton baithe rehte the
suraj chhipne aata to deta dua
aur chand hume dekh aanhein bharta tha

sham ki gulabi chadar hume aanchal apna udhati thi
sham ki thandi hawa in palkon k ashk sukhane aati thi
sham se leke raat tak fir tanha raat se  bhatakti sham tak
hum wahin tanha khade paaye jate the

har sham ka ye hi manzar tha.......

Wonderful indeed Kasak Ji
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«Reply #11 on: July 31, 2010, 03:33:34 PM »
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Aapka uttar padh kar kuchh ajeeb sa ehsaas hua.....
kyu ye kaaynaat ki hastiyein saath nahi de rahi......Ye Chand...Ye hawa....


                 haan bas ye hi tha hamari har sham ka manzar...

                Chand se shekaayat hum bhiee karte they
                Tanhaayee ka jikra hawa0n se karte they
                Kuchh samachar tera lekar aao kehte they
                Dil ko apne hum eesy tarah behlaate they

               
               haan bas ye hi tha hamari har sham ka manzar...

               Teri yaado se shuru hoti thee meri har sham
                Ab nashaa nahi dete hain madhu ke bhi jaam
                Phir bhi mann karta aa k koi le mujhe thaam
                Yaad aata tha har pal sanam bas tera hi naam

                haan bas ye hi tha hamari har sham ka manzar...


superbbbbb reply anaam ji....aapki kta tareef karen..itna khubsirat likhte hain aap k bas apne aap wahh nikla hi jata hai..
shukriya ji reply karna ka
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«Reply #12 on: July 31, 2010, 03:34:26 PM »
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bahut khub kasak ji akhir ki chaar lines gazab ki likhi hai....

thnx geet ji ...apne ise pasand kiya...
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«Reply #13 on: July 31, 2010, 03:35:01 PM »
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Wonderful indeed Kasak Ji
thnx harish ji meri poem pasand karne k liye and sarahne k liye
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«Reply #14 on: July 31, 2010, 04:09:09 PM »
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<>*Har sham ka ye hi manzar tha.*<>

har sham hum tere intezar me baithe rahe
har sham hum umeed ki shama jalaye rahe
har sham tere aane ki aas me palkein bichaye rahe
har sham hum saj sanwar k darwaze pe kahde rahe

har sham ye dhadkanein tez hui
har sham hum ise pyar se behlate rahe
har sham ye dil machal jata tha
har sham ise thapki de hum samjhate rahe

har sham ka ye manzar hota tha
hum chhat par ghanton baithe rehte the
suraj chhipne aata to deta dua
aur chand hume dekh aanhein bharta tha

sham ki gulabi chadar hume aanchal apna udhati thi
sham ki thandi hawa in palkon k ashk sukhane aati thi
sham se leke raat tak fir tanha raat se  bhatakti sham tak
hum wahin tanha khade paaye jate the

har sham ka ye hi manzar tha.......

Aapki tareef karna Ab Suraj ko Roshni dikhaane Wali Baat Hogi

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