intzar (nam)

by poonamA on August 30, 2012, 07:07:46 AM
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lagta nahi dil kahi tujhe bin
kate nahi kat rahe hai din
raate katu mai tare gin gin
laut ke aa jao ab o mere king  
intjar karu mai pal chin palchin tearyeyed
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«Reply #1 on: August 30, 2012, 07:10:03 AM »
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Dard vaali post hai..
chahhat saaf jhalak rahi hai.
par presentation aisa ki hase bina na rah saka.
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«Reply #2 on: August 30, 2012, 07:13:10 AM »
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thx mukesh..kuch galti hai to pls bataiye
Dard vaali post hai..
chahhat saaf jhalak rahi hai.
par presentation aisa ki hase bina na rah saka.
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«Reply #3 on: August 30, 2012, 07:15:21 AM »
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thx mukesh..kuch galti hai to pls bataiye
nahi..rahne do accha hai..
post should be always attractive and that's it.
smileys ki baat ki maine bas.
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«Reply #4 on: August 30, 2012, 07:20:07 AM »
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Aap thode changes try kar sakti hai! Dard bhara sher...thoda majakiya ho gaya hai! Aap chahe toh smilies hata sakti hai!
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«Reply #5 on: August 30, 2012, 07:24:16 AM »
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thx shireen
Aap thode changes try kar sakti hai! Dard bhara sher...thoda majakiya ho gaya hai! Aap chahe toh smilies hata sakti hai!
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«Reply #6 on: August 30, 2012, 08:42:44 AM »
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bahut khoob
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«Reply #7 on: August 30, 2012, 09:21:28 AM »
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«Reply #8 on: August 30, 2012, 12:19:55 PM »
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lagta nahi dil kahi tujhe bin
kate nahi kat rahe hai din
raate katu mai tare gin gin
laut ke aa jao ab o mere king  
intjar karu mai pal chin palchin tearyeyed


     poonamA ji Manoj ji aksar aise andaaz mein likhte hain aap to aisaa pahle nahin likha karti thiein phir aaj aisa  kyon. aap key jazbe ki qadr karta hoon per kalaam ko aap phir sey revise karein khud sey aur post karein. aap acha likhtey ho yaqin jaano.try again Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile
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«Reply #9 on: August 31, 2012, 12:57:03 AM »
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nice
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«Reply #10 on: August 31, 2012, 04:24:07 AM »
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thx
bahut khoob
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«Reply #11 on: August 31, 2012, 04:26:12 AM »
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KA jee aapne bilkul sahi farmaya hai..ab mujhe likhna to aata nahi hai..thoda kuch likhna sikha hai vo manoj jee se he sikha hai

      poonamA ji Manoj ji aksar aise andaaz mein likhte hain aap to aisaa pahle nahin likha karti thiein phir aaj aisa  kyon. aap key jazbe ki qadr karta hoon per kalaam ko aap phir sey revise karein khud sey aur post karein. aap acha likhtey ho yaqin jaano.try again Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile
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«Reply #12 on: August 31, 2012, 04:27:07 AM »
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thx
nice
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«Reply #13 on: September 18, 2012, 08:00:35 PM »
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lagta nahi dil kahi tujhe bin
kate nahi kat rahe hai din
raate katu mai tare gin gin
laut ke aa jao ab o mere king 
intjar karu mai pal chin palchin tearyeyed


AANKHE BAND KARO AUR SO JAO
MERI TARAH BUS MUJHMEI KHO JAO
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