Jaagee raat, prabhaat tak

by abdbundeli on May 18, 2009, 06:23:43 AM
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Jaagee raat, prabhaat tak;
Mein jaagee akulaaya!
Aaye Shyaam na kyoun bhalaa:
Koyee to batlaaya?

Path sammukh hain, pathik bhee;
Duniyaa aaye-jaaya!
Arunodaya mein, kyaa karoon,
Yadi andhiyaaraa chhaaya?

   - Ram Prakash Garg ' Ramwatiya'

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madhuwesh
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«Reply #1 on: May 18, 2009, 06:47:30 AM »
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very very nice abd ji,bahut acha likha aapne.
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«Reply #2 on: May 18, 2009, 06:58:08 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob, Abd Ji, Har baar kuch nayi aur behtreen lines. Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley

Kab se niharo.n raaho ko mein radha,
Jaane kyun aab talak na mera kanha aaya.

Tarse hai mann hoke baichain bansi ki taan ko,
Bhor-bhaye panghat pe aab talak na mera kanha aaya.

Mein bawli simroo pal pal kanha kanha din rain,
Aur kanha ko to pyaar mera aab talak na bhaya.

Shally.
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«Reply #3 on: May 18, 2009, 09:14:02 AM »
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Jaagee raat, prabhaat tak;
Mein jaagee akulaaya!
Aaye Shyaam na kyoun bhalaa:
Koyee to batlaaya?

Path sammukh hain, pathik bhee;
Duniyaa aaye-jaaya!
Arunodaya mein, kyaa karoon,
Yadi andhiyaaraa chhaaya?

   - Ram Prakash Garg ' Ramwatiya'




GUD SHARING ABD
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«Reply #4 on: May 18, 2009, 10:08:50 AM »
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Bahoot bahoot khoob ABD ji.. bahoot khoob as Always!

Very Beautiful written Shally!
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abdbundeli
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«Reply #5 on: May 18, 2009, 11:08:22 AM »
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very very nice abd ji,bahut acha likha aapne.
Thanks a lot, Madhu ji!
               - abd bundeli
       
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«Reply #6 on: May 18, 2009, 11:20:20 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob, Abd Ji, Har baar kuch nayi aur behtreen lines. Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley

Kab se niharo.n raaho ko mein radha,
Jaane kyun aab talak na mera kanha aaya.

Tarse hai mann hoke baichain bansi ki taan ko,
Bhor-bhaye panghat pe aab talak na mera kanha aaya.

Mein bawli simroo pal pal kanha kanha din rain,
Aur kanha ko to pyaar mera aab talak na bhaya.

Shally.

Thanks a lot, Shally ji!
               
Wah sab kaa hai eik-saa;
Kartaa sab ko pyaar!
Aawasyak hai kintu yah,
Hon nit aankheyn chaar!!

          - Ramwatiya
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«Reply #7 on: May 18, 2009, 11:26:23 AM »
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GUD SHARING ABD
Thanks a lot, khamosh_aawaaz ji! 'Ramwatiya' is my second pen-name, used in my Hindi writings! For my English writings, I use a third pen-name : G.R.Prakash.
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«Reply #8 on: May 18, 2009, 11:27:31 AM »
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Bahoot bahoot khoob ABD ji.. bahoot khoob as Always!

Very Beautiful written Shally!
Thanks a lot, Sophi ji!
             - abd bundeli
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«Reply #9 on: May 18, 2009, 01:19:51 PM »
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Jaagee raat, prabhaat tak;
Mein jaagee akulaaya!
Aaye Shyaam na kyoun bhalaa:
Koyee to batlaaya?

Path sammukh hain, pathik bhee;
Duniyaa aaye-jaaya!
Arunodaya mein, kyaa karoon,
Yadi andhiyaaraa chhaaya?

   - Ram Prakash Garg ' Ramwatiya'



Bohot achcha hai Babu Ji
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«Reply #10 on: May 18, 2009, 02:28:02 PM »
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Bohot achcha hai Babu Ji
Thanks, Talat bitia!
            - abd bundeli
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