Jo Tum Sath Hote........ Suman

by suman59 on January 03, 2014, 11:01:42 PM
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Jalaya tha zamane ne mere jism ko,
Jataya tha sabne meri maut ke gam ko,
Tum jo do aansu bahate toh barsat hoti
Jo tum sath hote toh aur baat hoti...

Teri muskilo ka sahara bante hum,
Meri zarurato mein aasra bante tum,
Tum mere naav hote jab mai lehron mein fasti
Jo tum sath hote toh aur baat hoti...

Bhari rahti h ye aankhe tere bin,
Yaaden tadpati hai mujhe sare din,
Zindagi meri na yu vanvaas hoti,
Jo tum sath hote toh aur baat hoti..
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«Reply #1 on: January 03, 2014, 11:49:13 PM »
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Jalaya tha zamane ne mere jism ko,
Jataya tha sabne meri maut ke gam ko,
Tum jo do aansu bahate toh barsat hoti
Jo tum sath hote toh aur baat hoti...

Teri muskilo ka sahara bante hum,
Meri zarurato mein aasra bante tum,
Tum mere naav hote jab mai lehron mein fasti
Jo tum sath hote toh aur baat hoti...

Bhari rahti h ye aankhe tere bin,
Yaaden tadpati hai mujhe sare din,
Zindagi meri na yu vanvaas hoti,
Jo tum sath hote toh aur baat hoti..



boss!!!!!!!!! iss pyaree nazm per ek rau deta ho.N
vaise aap ke shrimaan ji kisee aur ke saath chale gaye hain kya


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«Reply #2 on: January 03, 2014, 11:51:57 PM »
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boss!!!!!!!!! iss pyaree nazm per ek rau deta ho.N
vaise aap ke shrimaan ji kisee aur ke saath chale gaye hain kya


 Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile

aailaa yeh kya keh diya.... Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard ( unki himmat hogi kya  tongue3)
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«Reply #3 on: January 03, 2014, 11:57:08 PM »
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aailaa yeh kya keh diya.... Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard ( unki himmat hogi kya  tongue3)


boss!!!!!!!!!!!!!

main bhee toh vahee sochh raha tha kee JHANSEE KEE RAANEE ko aisa challenge dene vala mard kab paida ho gaya


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«Reply #4 on: January 03, 2014, 11:59:53 PM »
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kaash kaash kaash   bahut bahut khoob
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«Reply #5 on: January 04, 2014, 12:03:50 AM »
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बहुत ही सुन्दर.....ढेरों दाद....
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«Reply #6 on: January 04, 2014, 12:09:54 AM »
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wha wha bhut he khub
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«Reply #7 on: January 04, 2014, 12:11:42 AM »
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nice
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«Reply #8 on: January 04, 2014, 12:24:18 AM »
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beautiful nazm
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«Reply #9 on: January 04, 2014, 01:01:29 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Waaaaaaah suman ji bahut hi pyaari nazm rahi... mujhe bahut pasand aayi... hazaron hazaron daad qubool kare..
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«Reply #10 on: January 04, 2014, 02:10:04 AM »
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Teri muskilo ka sahara bante hum,
Meri zarurato mein aasra bante tum,
Tum mere naav hote jab mai lehron mein fasti
Jo tum sath hote toh aur baat hoti... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Bhari rahti h ye aankhe tere bin,
Yaaden tadpati hai mujhe sare din,
Zindagi meri na yu vanvaas hoti,
Jo tum sath hote toh aur baat hoti.. Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
bahut khooooooooooooob suman ji
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«Reply #11 on: January 04, 2014, 05:52:25 AM »
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waah waah waah suman ji.. bahut bahut khoob Usual Smile

Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #12 on: January 04, 2014, 06:58:55 AM »
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बहुत   खूब:clap: Applause Applause
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«Reply #13 on: January 04, 2014, 02:19:40 PM »
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bahut bahut khoob.........

 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #14 on: January 06, 2014, 02:41:52 AM »
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kaash kaash kaash   bahut bahut khoob

thank you saini sb
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