judai (nam)

by poonamA on August 29, 2012, 07:00:00 AM
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judai aapki rula rahi hai
yaad aapki sata rahi hai
jaan pal pal ja rahi hai
jab tak jaan hai jism me
sans meri pyar nibha rahi hai
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«Reply #1 on: August 29, 2012, 07:02:35 AM »
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WAAH BOHUT KHUB ,,

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«Reply #3 on: August 29, 2012, 08:17:24 AM »
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«Reply #4 on: August 29, 2012, 10:34:07 AM »
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«Reply #5 on: August 29, 2012, 11:08:02 AM »
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«Reply #6 on: August 29, 2012, 03:00:18 PM »
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«Reply #7 on: August 29, 2012, 07:23:34 PM »
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judai aapki rula rahi hai
yaad aapki sata rahi hai
jaan pal pal ja rahi hai
jab tak jaan hai jism me
sans meri pyar nibha rahi hai


bahut bahut khoob poonamA...........!inn chaar lines mein itna mazboot pyaar nazar aaya ki poori ghazal mein koi jaldi kah nahin paata hai..........!!

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«Reply #8 on: August 30, 2012, 06:53:06 AM »
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Shebaji thx..aapke comments pad kar bahot acha laga

bahut bahut khoob poonamA...........!inn chaar lines mein itna mazboot pyaar nazar aaya ki poori ghazal mein koi jaldi kah nahin paata hai..........!!

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«Reply #9 on: August 30, 2012, 06:56:39 AM »
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thx
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«Reply #11 on: September 18, 2012, 07:34:43 PM »
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judai aapki rula rahi hai
yaad aapki sata rahi hai
jaan pal pal ja rahi hai
jab tak jaan hai jism me
sans meri pyar nibha rahi hai
JINDA HAI TU GALATFAIMI HAI TERI
JO SAANS CHAL RAHI HAI WO HAI MERI
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