***Kandia'n Di Chubhan***

by AVTAR RAYAT on October 05, 2009, 07:28:38 AM
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>>>> Leejiye MADHU JI Aapki Farmayish Par Is Poem Ko
English Mein Translate Kiye Dete Hein <<<


Kayia'n Nu Chubhde Haa Asi'n Kandiya'n Waangu,
Te Kayi Saanu Rab Banaayi Phirde Ne,
Kayi Dekh Ke Saanu Badal Lainde Ne Raaha'n,
Te Kayi Saade Raaha'n Vich Phul Vichhaayi Phirde Ne,
Nit Hundia'n Ne Bahut Duaawa Mere Layi,
Kayi Haunkai Mere Layi Bharde Phirde Ne,
Kayi Mangde Ne Har Dum Ithay Maut Meri,
Te Kayi Apni Umar Vi Mere Naam Likhaayi Phirde Ne.
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«Reply #1 on: October 05, 2009, 08:25:43 AM »
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Avtar ji phir bhi achi tarah se nahi samajh mein aayee.
sirf ye line samjhi,tu kahe toh teri raah pe phool bichaye.
duaa karte hai ere liye,
tu kahe toh apna  umar tere naam  kar du.
anyway beautiful poem ,wonderful creation. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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Rishi Agarwal
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«Reply #2 on: October 05, 2009, 06:27:32 PM »
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beautiful poem Applause
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«Reply #3 on: October 05, 2009, 07:13:42 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Vadiya Avtarji..

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