!!Karz!!

by amrita on June 13, 2005, 07:12:54 AM
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Paas aakar duur jaane ka,iraada toh nahi tha
Duur jaakar pyaar karne ka wada toh kiya tha
Pyaar ka karzz chukane ka waada toh kiya tha
kharidaar nahi mila,bikne ka iraada toh tha..
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«Reply #1 on: June 14, 2005, 10:04:38 PM »
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kharidar tu har mod pe bethey hain Amrita
kahin tum khud ka sasta mol na lagwalena
jab kabhi ho kisi mushikal mein tu
mujhay ek awaz de kr bas tum pas bula lena
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«Reply #2 on: June 15, 2005, 05:09:25 PM »
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Paas aakar duur jaane ka,iraada toh nahi tha
Duur jaakar pyaar karne ka wada toh kiya tha
Pyaar ka karzz chukane ka waada toh kiya tha
kharidaar nahi mila,bikne ka iraada toh tha..


beautiful!!! par yeh koi ghazal to nahin?
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«Reply #3 on: June 15, 2005, 06:10:38 PM »
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Paas aakar duur jaane ka,iraada toh nahi tha
Duur jaakar pyaar karne ka wada toh kiya tha
Pyaar ka karzz chukane ka waada toh kiya tha
kharidaar nahi mila,bikne ka iraada toh tha..


beautiful!!! par yeh koi ghazal to nahin?


humare dil se nikli yeh baat hai meena
agar yeh koi ghazal hui toh isse itefaq samjhna..
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«Reply #4 on: June 15, 2005, 06:19:43 PM »
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woh yun aa kr dil mein bas gaye hain k
aab tu har baat un k bina adhoori hai
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«Reply #5 on: June 17, 2005, 05:17:18 PM »
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woh yun aa kr dil mein bas gaye hain k
aab tu har baat un k bina adhoori hai


har baat mein unka zikar na kiya karo
adhoori yaadon ko pura karne ki koshish na kiya karo

jaane wale logon ki yaad mein raatein na guzara karo
apni zindagi ko khushi se jeena shuru karo...
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«Reply #6 on: June 17, 2005, 08:35:46 PM »
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Zindgi yun naye sire s aab guari nahin jati hai
yaad unki dil s mujhs  utari  nahin jati hai
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«Reply #7 on: October 13, 2008, 11:12:12 AM »
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Paas aakar duur jaane ka agar tera iraada nahi tha
To duur jaakar pyaar karne ka wada kyon kiya tha
Pyaar ka karzz chukane ka waada bhi kyon kiya tha
Kharidaar theh nahi to bikne ka iraada kyon kiya tha
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«Reply #8 on: October 13, 2008, 11:27:36 AM »
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achchha khayal likha hai aapne amrita ji....khoob.... Applause
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«Reply #9 on: October 15, 2008, 04:35:49 PM »
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Bahoot Achcha Likha Hai Amrita And Nice One,.
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«Reply #10 on: October 15, 2008, 04:42:37 PM »
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Ek Kar Mohabbat Ka Baakhi Rehgaya,.
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