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« on: June 10, 2007, 08:14:41 AM »

Hai sab kuch, phir bhi ek kami hai
Sath jo tu nahi, duniya kuch bhi nahi hai
Mil kar bhi nahi mil paati, kaisa yah milan hai
Tere payaar mai bheeg kar bhi, nahi buj paati, kasie yah agan hai


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« Reply #1 on: June 10, 2007, 08:26:28 AM »

Really Nice thoughts Vipal... =D>
Keep Writing...

I will try to write something on this topic.
But need some time...


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« Reply #2 on: June 11, 2007, 01:57:37 AM »

Quote from: "VIPAL"

Hai sab kuch, phir bhi ek kami hai
Sath jo tu nahi, duniya kuch bhi nahi hai
Mil kar bhi nahi mil paati, kaisa yah milan hai
Tere payaar mai bheeg kar bhi, nahi buj paati, kasie yah agan hai

very nice,

iksh ke samandar me tairte rahe
wo kinara nahi mila jise dhundte rahe
wo to jaan hee n paye the hame kabhi
jinkee mohabbat me pagal ham hote rahe

netra.....[/b]


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yaa hoo dar par tere kuch pane kee aas hai
pyaasa hoo do ghoot palde samander se tere
na rah jayega daman kahalee tera e rahnooma
kai kboobsoorat fool khile hai daman me tere.

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« Reply #3 on: June 11, 2007, 02:16:40 AM »

Nice Vipal ji and Netra ji


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« Reply #4 on: June 11, 2007, 05:00:13 AM »

Thanks shikha aor Tumhein pehle bhi kaha tha jaldi na karo...Take ur time.Mujhe koi jaldi nahi hai.. tongue3

Naseeb humare... jo aap jaisi shayara ne haunsla afzai ki iss na cheez ki.Thank u very much Pooja :D

kya baat hai netra.Its too good.

haste huye labhon se main
kab talak unko dhoka de paunga
aor woh bhi kab tak khud ki najrein
mere dard ke zakhmon se phereinge...!!!


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« Reply #5 on: June 11, 2007, 05:17:25 AM »

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Thanks shikha aor Tumhein pehle bhi kaha tha jaldi na karo...Take ur time.Mujhe koi jaldi nahi hai.. tongue3

dard se darte nahi hai ashik iskh me
kya darenge dohko se, rahe-kanto pe chalne wale
dil bhee tadafta hai darde-dil se unka
chale the jab se wo rahe-aashiki me

netra.....


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yaa hoo dar par tere kuch pane kee aas hai
pyaasa hoo do ghoot palde samander se tere
na rah jayega daman kahalee tera e rahnooma
kai kboobsoorat fool khile hai daman me tere.

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« Reply #6 on: June 11, 2007, 08:32:07 AM »

Great job.. Pooja di, Vipal and Netra... Usual Smile

Sabne bahut hi achha likha hai... =D> =D>

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Thanks shikha aor Tumhein pehle bhi kaha tha jaldi na karo...Take ur time.Mujhe koi jaldi nahi hai.. tongue3

Ok... :D

Just a Try from My Side:

POETRY DELETED BY SHIKHA...


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« Reply #7 on: June 11, 2007, 09:23:48 AM »

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Great job.. Pooja di, Vipal and Netra... Usual Smile

Sabne bahut hi achha likha hai... =D> =D>

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Thanks shikha aor Tumhein pehle bhi kaha tha jaldi na karo...Take ur time.Mujhe koi jaldi nahi hai.. tongue3

Ok... :D

Just a Try from My Side:

Taraste hue dil ke armaano ko,
Koi naya kaydaa na sikha...
Sanam tu hai Chaand Mera magar,
Mujhe Duur reh kar na sata...

Aag si hai tumhaare jehan mein,
Ek nadiya ki dhaara main...
Mujhe utaar le apni dhadkano mein,
Aur Nafraton ki agan bujha...

Tujhe dekhti hoon khwaabon mein,
Tujhe maanga hai dua.on mein...
Mera Gam bhi Tu aur Khushi bhi Tu,
Tu hi Hasraton ka Aasraa...

Bahut tapish hai teri baaton mein,
Sailaab hai koi chupa hua...
Aa chuppa loon tujhe aagosh mein,
Bechainiyon sab doon mitaa...

bhoot achaa likha sikha ji aapne

netra....


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yaa hoo dar par tere kuch pane kee aas hai
pyaasa hoo do ghoot palde samander se tere
na rah jayega daman kahalee tera e rahnooma
kai kboobsoorat fool khile hai daman me tere.

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« Reply #8 on: June 12, 2007, 12:45:07 PM »

Quote from: "Shikha12"

Great job.. Pooja di, Vipal and Netra... Usual Smile

Sabne bahut hi achha likha hai... =D> =D>

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Thanks shikha aor Tumhein pehle bhi kaha tha jaldi na karo...Take ur time.Mujhe koi jaldi nahi hai.. tongue3

aap jaisi shayara ke samne iss na-cheez ka likha bohaat feeka hai.. phir bhi aapni ki gayi koshish ko sab ke sath share karne ki gustakhi karta hu ....

lagan hai tujhse meri
tujhse door kaise ja paon
door hai tikhana mera
iss ko bhi na main jhoothlaun

payar tera har dum sath hai mere
dil ,dhadkan ko pal-pal samjhaun
door ho kar bhi rehti ho tum pass
par machlate mann ko kya batalaun

khawab saja liya hai ek mann mein
usse paane ke liye kuch bhi kar jaun
na dena kabhi tum aapni judai ka ghum
warna jeete jee,issi pal mar jaun...!!!


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« Reply #9 on: June 13, 2007, 01:23:43 PM »

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aap jaisi shayara ke samne iss na-cheez ka likha bohaat feeka hai.. phir bhi aapni ki gayi koshish ko sab ke sath share karne ki gustakhi karta hu ....

lagan hai tujhse meri
tujhse door kaise ja paon
door hai tikhana mera
iss ko bhi na main jhoothlaun

payar tera har dum sath hai mere
dil ,dhadkan ko pal-pal samjhaun
door ho kar bhi rehti ho tum pass
par machlate mann ko kya batalaun

khawab saja liya hai ek mann mein
usse paane ke liye kuch bhi kar jaun
na dena kabhi tum aapni judai ka ghum
warna jeete jee,issi pal mar jaun...!!!

Nice Creation Vipal.... =D>
Kya baat hai... Achha laga padh kar....
Yeh agar Gustaakhi hai to... Puzzled !

Aaisi gustaakhian karte rehna... :D


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« Reply #10 on: June 13, 2007, 05:07:35 PM »

Vipal, Netra, Shikha

Bahut ache !

Chaa rahe ho sab dost :D


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« Reply #11 on: July 09, 2007, 12:59:03 AM »

bahoot khoob Shikha and Vipal!!


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