Khilvat-e Dil (loneliness of the heart)

by Abul Asad on December 31, 2012, 10:44:00 PM
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Ham ko na door karo ye dil murjhah jaayega
Qatra-e ansu  ka kiya hai, behte  behjaayega

Kuch to mere khilvat-e dil ka bharam dekhiyega
Doobte doobte ishq men, khud ko bhi bhuljayega

Toofaan ka hai na darr ab, na bhanvar  men doobne ka
Meherbani-e jaana  ke saath ye darr bhi behjayega

Kuch chashm-e dilbar ka raha hoga asar mehfil par
Mareez-e dil apna dard younhi na  bhulayega
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Meanings of difficult words
Murjhah- to wilt away, like a flower that has died
Qatra-e ansu- a tear drop
Khilvat: loneliness
Bharam:  distrust, skepticism
Bhanvar: whirlpool / vortex in the water
Chashm: eyes, eyeglasses
Dilbar: sweetheart
Mareez: patient
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«Reply #1 on: December 31, 2012, 11:18:50 PM »
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Abul Asad saheb, 2nd aur 3rd she'r laajawaab haiN, just great, keep it up. DheroN daad aur mubarakbaad meri taraf se qubool kareiN aur saath meiN ek Rau bhi.
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«Reply #2 on: January 01, 2013, 01:03:25 AM »
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«Reply #4 on: January 01, 2013, 04:28:22 AM »
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bahut achhe
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«Reply #5 on: January 01, 2013, 04:56:41 AM »
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kYA BAAT BAAT HAI BOHUT KHOOB KEEP WRITING
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«Reply #6 on: January 01, 2013, 05:30:57 AM »
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bahut bahut bahut hi khoob
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«Reply #8 on: January 01, 2013, 08:29:47 AM »
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Asad Sahaab Aadaab!


Bahut khoob janab bahut umdaa... bade hi achche aur khoobsurat khayaalat
ko kafi dilfareb lafzoN meiN baNdha hai aapne.. Usual Smile


Humari dheroN daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #9 on: January 01, 2013, 11:29:07 AM »
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«Reply #10 on: January 01, 2013, 03:54:55 PM »
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Abul Asad saheb, 2nd aur 3rd she'r laajawaab haiN, just great, keep it up. DheroN daad aur mubarakbaad meri taraf se qubool kareiN aur saath meiN ek Rau bhi.

Iftekhar saheb,
bahut bahut shukriya aapki nazr-e-inayat ki
aapke daad ki, aapko jo ashar pasand aye unki
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«Reply #11 on: January 01, 2013, 03:55:17 PM »
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Shukriya suman ji aapka
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Dr. Saheb shukriya bahut ma'ine rakhte hain aapki taliyan ham par
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«Reply #13 on: January 01, 2013, 03:57:00 PM »
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bahut achhe

Shukriya nandbahu ji aapki daad ka
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«Reply #14 on: January 01, 2013, 03:57:58 PM »
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kYA BAAT BAAT HAI BOHUT KHOOB KEEP WRITING

Shukriya sir ji,
I will keep trying, hopefully someday i might even write a proper poem.
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