<>*Kitne pal taras jaye*<>

by *KasaK*....Dil Ki on April 14, 2011, 12:09:39 PM
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<>*Kitne pal taras jaye*<>


Zindagi ki kitaab ka panna jane kab palat jaye
Kaunsa lamha jane kab kahan udkar bikhar jaye

Har lamhe ko khulkar jina chaha tha humne yahan
Lekin najane kaunsa lamha humse kahan chhut jaye

Aaj jeelo jee bharke saath hamare ye pal pyaar se
K na jane kal hum kahan aur kahan par tu chala jaye

Aaj paas hain aapke to kadar karo kuch to iss pal ki
Na jane ye pal ko pane ko fir kitne pal hum taras jaye…!!!
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«Reply #1 on: April 14, 2011, 04:48:42 PM »
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Bahut baddiya Kasak ji aapke ye khoobsurat peshkash humin kich laayi,great work. Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: April 14, 2011, 04:53:01 PM »
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<>*Kitne pal taras jaye*<>


Zindagi ki kitaab ka panna jane kab palat jaye
Kaunsa lamha jane kab kahan udkar bikhar jaye

Har lamhe ko khulkar jina chaha tha humne yahan
Lekin najane kaunsa lamha humse kahan chhut jaye

Aaj jeelo jee bharke saath hamare ye pal pyaar se
K na jane kal hum kahan aur kahan par tu chala jaye

Aaj paas hain aapke to kadar karo kuch to iss pal ki
Na jane ye pal ko pane ko fir kitne pal hum taras jaye…!!!

Bahut khoob kasak ji akhri line khaas dil ko chhu gyi...
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«Reply #3 on: April 14, 2011, 05:35:00 PM »
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bht aachi theme he anamika ji.........as always words r also beautiful..........ek request he jo mene kuch waqt pahle ki thi wahi yaha bhi kar raha hu....yaad kar lijiye mene kya kaha tha....
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«Reply #4 on: April 14, 2011, 05:36:08 PM »
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thnx madhu ji  k aap khinche chale aaye hamare bulane se..yunhi aate rahiye aur sath nibhate rahiye

geet thnx yaar tumne pasand kiya meri creation ko....
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«Reply #5 on: April 14, 2011, 05:39:20 PM »
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oo ji rajaji..aapko to pata hai meri yaadasht kitni hai...so plz ek bar aur wo rqst bata do na..... mujhe yaad nahin aaraha....

aur aapko achchi lagi ye poem to ye likhna safal hua ji.......fhh ji...
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«Reply #6 on: April 14, 2011, 06:32:29 PM »
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boht khoob kasak ji realy nice work
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«Reply #7 on: April 14, 2011, 08:05:16 PM »
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<>*Kitne pal taras jaye*<>


Zindagi ki kitaab ka panna jane kab palat jaye
Kaunsa lamha jane kab kahan udkar bikhar jaye

Har lamhe ko khulkar jina chaha tha humne yahan
Lekin najane kaunsa lamha humse kahan chhut jaye

Aaj jeelo jee bharke saath hamare ye pal pyaar se
K na jane kal hum kahan aur kahan par tu chala jaye

Aaj paas hain aapke to kadar karo kuch to iss pal ki
Na jane ye pal ko pane ko fir kitne pal hum taras jaye…!!!


Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Likha hai Anamika ji.. Judai sabse buri hoti hai.. aur Jo seh raha hai usko jayda pada hota hai ki kitna dard hota hai judai mein..

aapne uss judai ke lamhaahato ko bakubi bayaan kiya hai.. bahoot bahoot Umda !!!
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«Reply #8 on: April 19, 2011, 05:40:21 PM »
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<>*Kitne pal taras jaye*<>


Zindagi ki kitaab ka panna jane kab palat jaye
Kaunsa lamha jane kab kahan udkar bikhar jaye

Har lamhe ko khulkar jina chaha tha humne yahan
Lekin najane kaunsa lamha humse kahan chhut jaye

Aaj jeelo jee bharke saath hamare ye pal pyaar se
K na jane kal hum kahan aur kahan par tu chala jaye

Aaj paas hain aapke to kadar karo kuch to iss pal ki
Na jane ye pal ko pane ko fir kitne pal hum taras jaye…!!!

bahut pyara kasak ji
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«Reply #9 on: April 21, 2011, 06:14:56 PM »
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ye to dard bhar kar likha hai kasak ji aapne...
bahut khoob ,likhte rahiye.
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