Mere jaane k baad.....koyal

by KOYAL46 on July 15, 2010, 05:34:31 AM
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Mere jaane k baad........

Sanam Mere jaane ke baad
N hona kabhee tum uudaas
N houngi mein tere aas-paas
Kar-na tum mujhe dilse yaad

Jab-jab hogi suhaanee bhour
Usha kee sunehri lalima dekh
Udte pakshiyo ka kalrav sunn
Tum kar-na har-roj mujhe yaad

Jab karo saier bageeche me
Gulab kee pankhuriyon par
Nannhi oos ki bundein dekh
Mujhko tum kar-lena yaad

Tab koi nahi hoga tumhaare aas-paas
Koyal key koohakne ki aawaaj sunna
Mitt jaayega mere n hone ka aehsaas
Paaoge tum mujhe apne dil key paas


--------koyal----------------
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«Reply #1 on: July 15, 2010, 05:42:04 AM »
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   Nice creation Koyal dear, Realy Nice thought. Yun hi likhti raho.
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«Reply #2 on: July 15, 2010, 05:44:58 AM »
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minblowing n awesome creation koyal........ Clapping Smiley  Applause   Applause    Applause


jab na hoge ham tumhare aap-pas tab yaad karna SANAM,
wo sath bitaya hua har pal or hamari pehli-aakhri mulaqat......
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«Reply #3 on: July 15, 2010, 07:21:34 AM »
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Thanks a lot Tamanna-di....aapko pasand aayee tou likhna safal.... icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower

   Nice creation Koyal dear, Realy Nice thought. Yun hi likhti raho.
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«Reply #4 on: July 15, 2010, 07:47:19 AM »
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 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Waah...!!! Kya baat hai Koyal ji.. bahut khoob likha hai aapne... bahut sundar...!!!
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«Reply #5 on: July 15, 2010, 08:00:14 AM »
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very very nice komal ji


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«Reply #6 on: July 15, 2010, 08:05:15 AM »
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Taro bahuj aabhaar baku.... icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
taare jode-jode hu pan lakhtee jaaun chhu... Winking Winking Winking

Aaj intezaar karte hain hum unka sakhee
Jaane k baad bahut yaad hum unko aayenge


minblowing n awesome creation koyal........ Clapping Smiley  Applause   Applause    Applause


jab na hoge ham tumhare aap-pas tab yaad karna SANAM,
wo sath bitaya hua har pal or hamari pehli-aakhri mulaqat......

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«Reply #7 on: July 15, 2010, 11:44:23 AM »
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Thanks a lot Klaskar-ji.....aapne saraha achha laga....

Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Waah...!!! Kya baat hai Koyal ji.. bahut khoob likha hai aapne... bahut sundar...!!!
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«Reply #8 on: July 15, 2010, 11:55:57 AM »
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Bahut sundar rachna hai aap ki Koyal Ji
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«Reply #9 on: July 15, 2010, 12:26:15 PM »
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Good work koyal..Applause Applause
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