missing u hurts.......

by vikas2210 on May 23, 2009, 11:27:58 AM
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Bulane se kuch kareeb aa jate wo shayad
par labo ko bhi mujhse hilaya na gaya

ashko ko tere poonch detta mai sahayd
par haath bhi mujhse hilaya na gaya

teri sanso se mil jati meri sanse shayad
par dil ki dhadkano ko sambhala na gaya

teri doli aati mere aagan mein shayd
par lal jodaa humse tujhe pahnaya na gya

yun to bahut hai chahne wale tere JAANA
teri kismat mein mera naam likhaya na gya
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«Reply #1 on: May 23, 2009, 01:10:53 PM »
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Nice One Again Vikas Ji,.
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«Reply #2 on: May 23, 2009, 01:19:20 PM »
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Bulane se kuch kareeb aa jate wo shayad
par labo ko bhi mujhse hilaya na gaya

ashko ko tere poonch detta mai sahayd
par haath bhi mujhse hilaya na gaya

teri sanso se mil jati meri sanse shayad
par dil ki dhadkano ko sambhala na gaya

teri doli aati mere aagan mein shayd
par lal jodaa humse tujhe pahnaya na gya

yun to bahut hai chahne wale tere JAANA
teri kismat mein mera naam likhaya na gya



Bahut bahut khoobsurat likha hia Vikas... Usual Smile
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«Reply #3 on: May 23, 2009, 01:52:56 PM »
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Quote from: vikas2210 on May 23, 2009, 11:27:58 AM


Bulane se kuch kareeb aa jate wo shayad
par labo ko bhi mujhse hilaya na gaya

ashko ko tere poonch detta mai sahayd
par haath bhi mujhse hilaya na gaya

teri sanso se mil jati meri sanse shayad
par dil ki dhadkano ko sambhala na gaya

teri doli aati mere aagan mein shayd
par lal jodaa humse tujhe pahnaya na gya

yun to bahut hai chahne wale tere JAANA
teri kismat mein mera naam likhaya na gya



Wah bahut acche... Last four lines bahut khoob Vikas ji  Applause
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«Reply #4 on: May 23, 2009, 02:17:16 PM »
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